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99. "In any realm of life—whether academic, social, business, or political—the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
在任何生活领域中——无论是学术、社会、商业还是政治——获得成功的唯一道路就是采取现实的而不是理想化的观点。实用的行为确保了生存,反之理想化的观点正在趋于被更简化的和更直接的选择所取代。
理想和现实
觉得这是个多次被讨论的题目,不是说作为issue题目,而是在现实中。2年前《南方周末》的一篇文章给了我很多思考,其中说到了中国的学术科学发展,实利主义对学术研究氛围的影响。我觉得把这个问题想清楚了很重要。
Is taking a practical(这是个形容词吧) the only way to succeed, in any realm of life – whether academic, social, business or political? Is it better than an idealistic at least? The speaker claims so with the reason that practice action guarantees survival of human beings, meanwhile, idealistic views tend to be replaces by simpler, more immediate options. I concede that the pragmatic behavior is indispensable for the ultimate success. Nevertheless, I stick to the assertion that the actual practice is not the only way to achieve great success; moreover, in some fields of human endeavor, people should hold some idealistic point of view during the process of persuading the tremendous achievement.(可以再简洁一点,把时间留给后面的正题)
For one thing(这个连接词我怎么没有想到用呢,记之), the idealistic opinion could not be substituted by others, in respect that only via some idealistic views people could see the possible splendid outcome, and then be filled with inspiration and energy to pursue it. In contemporary society, with the information exploding, it is quite necessary and indispensable to have an explicit understanding and suppose on the ultimate result, or even every steps of work for the sake of achieving it easily and fluently. Imagine what a stupid and ignorant man who always doing every thing without thinking the possible consequence is? Here is a good illustration(这个词不错) that could appropriately and fittingly prop up(不错) this explanation. In America, during the year of electing, every candidate that pursue for the position of president would give speech whenever and wherever. Each candidate wishes every American citizens know if all populace follow his/her leading, and then they would receive the things which he/she has promised to accomplish. It is crucial and undoubted for the candidate to triumph, just owing to the essentiality of the idealistic perspective he/she promise the citizens a reward, which every people look forward to it.(有点绕来绕去的感觉,如果你这一段是作为arg, 我就要从这个例子入手开始批驳了,投票者难道没有考虑候选人的speech中实用的成分吗?比如说福利、比如说经济政策。也许正是考虑了这些才投票的。总之,觉得例子的说服性不强。个人观点喔,你参考吧。)
Furthermore, if underestimate the importance of idealistic, people would not achieve tremendous success as optimistic as the speaker imagined. Too much emphasize on pragmatic behavior, as well as the overwhelming simply point of view, human beings would lost the heart of persuading, by reason of laziness in thinking has aroused when one’s life is full of innumerous practices. To demonstrate this point plainly and undoubtedly, here is an example that is very persuasive and believable. In the sensational film “Shawshank’s Redemption”, the hero would never attain his freedom if he loses the confidence of getting victory. That is, the idealistic view, by which he has not engaged in the busy works arranged by the prison, gives him gigantic hope and helps to his final accomplishment. Therefore, it is so unadvisable to take action harshly and without any prudent thinking.(这个例子我不太熟悉,但是你提到的the idealistic view具体指的是什么?认为可以再深入说明一下)
Even though grant the vital status of idealistic ideas, it is admitted that every great success in the long human’s history depends on the pragmatic behavior also. Since only the actual action might transfer the situation from poverty to advancement, no matter in which fields - academe, society, business or politics. I will present a pertinent paradigm which could shed some lights on this standpoint. My tutor is one of the most respected professors in my university. She has so much experience in real projects in her interested fields – composites aircraft structure. One of the most prerequisite for she becomes an authority is the accumulation of pragmatic behaviors. And this virtue could be widely used to the mass.
Accordingly, people always have some simple wish to live a better life though his/her industrious effort. Besides this, anyone should not overlook the consequence of idealistic view, which could give one boundless inspiration and hope, at the same times, assist to attain success.
你反对该观点的理由是认为,理想化给人希望、灵感和勇气,这个立意不错,不过我觉得例子并不是很合适。我的设想是,可不可以通过举反例来说明这个问题,如果人人都仅以实际化的观点来实现他的成功,将会导致什么结果?还有,口水话比较多,这个前面的人已经说过了。其实对于你文章本身用词方面我觉得还可以,结构也很完整,就是论证不够有力。好像泼的是冷水阿,供参考吧。欢迎再来批我的文章。
补充:又考虑了一下,举反例确实很困难阿。 |
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