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发表于 2014-7-23 09:37:52 |显示全部楼层
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9.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's impossible to be completely honest with your friend.


9.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The ability to maintain a small number of friends for long time is more important to happiness than the ability to make new friends easily.


9.2
TPO 5 综合写作
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7.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The purpose of television is to educate, not to entertain.
7.23独立写作.docx (14.64 KB, 下载次数: 3)


7.24
TPO 15 综合写作
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7.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
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7.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money.
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7.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.
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7.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
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7.30
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? 1. Education 2. Health Care3.support for the unemployed.
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8.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.
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8.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
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8.6
Which is more important, success in life or the ability to remain happy and optimistic when one's facing difficulty?
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8.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of fuel.
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8.8
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.
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8.9
TPO 11 综合写作
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8.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Parents should set strict rules to their children if they want them to success in the future.
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8.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercises
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8.12
Is it important for the government to provide money for things that are beautiful than things that are practical.
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8.13
TPO 10 综合写作


8.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.


8.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.  


8.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.


8.18重新复工45mins改15mins
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.
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发表于 2014-7-24 09:51:20 |显示全部楼层
整体写的不错,观点还要更明显一点。

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修改意见

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发表于 2014-7-24 11:21:25 |显示全部楼层
JessicaaAn 发表于 2014-7-24 09:51
整体写的不错,观点还要更明显一点。

Discovery是美国的,我可能得先补点常识。= =

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发表于 2014-7-24 13:35:50 |显示全部楼层
438834675 发表于 2014-7-24 11:21
Discovery是美国的,我可能得先补点常识。= =

可能BBC也有? 我只知道那个美国的==

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发表于 2014-7-25 09:17:34 |显示全部楼层
对不起,昨天晚上校园网瘫掉了,没能传上来,非常抱歉

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发表于 2014-7-25 13:03:06 |显示全部楼层
Primazl 发表于 2014-7-25 09:17
对不起,昨天晚上校园网瘫掉了,没能传上来,非常抱歉

没事~~谢谢,你说的很有道理

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发表于 2014-7-25 22:48:15 |显示全部楼层
已改,加油

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发表于 2014-7-26 21:25:55 |显示全部楼层
已改~

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发表于 2014-7-27 23:17:58 |显示全部楼层

不好意思,有点晚了

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发表于 2014-7-28 14:22:48 |显示全部楼层
已改,很棒呢。

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发表于 2014-7-30 12:39:39 |显示全部楼层
7.25 1.docx (18.85 KB, 下载次数: 2) 不好意思晚了这么久!!一起加油!!

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发表于 2014-7-30 12:46:46 |显示全部楼层
tanzu 发表于 2014-7-30 12:39
不好意思晚了这么久!!一起加油!!

谢谢!改的太认真了,很受教

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发表于 2014-7-30 12:54:01 |显示全部楼层
已经改好

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发表于 2014-7-31 00:14:01 |显示全部楼层
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医改了。。。。

学习了。。。

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发表于 2014-7-31 16:13:19 |显示全部楼层
7.30 已改

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