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发表于 2004-3-20 11:57:57 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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从2004年3月20日10时4分到2004年3月20日10时43分
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The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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I do agree that people always have choices when facing problems. Admittedly, sometimes people may feel that it is very hard to make a choice, but it does not follow that the absence of choice is a frequent circumstance.

In fact, choices are filled with people's lives from the birth to death. Everyone, everyday will face up to various chances for he or she to make choice. It is the case not only for individuals, but also for school, a company and even the government as well as the nation. First of all, as far as ordinary people are concerned, daily life is full of various choices, such as how to go to walk, by bus or on foot; what to have for lunch, snack food or a formal dinner; what to do at night, watch TV, surf the Web or just stay at home for a break? Besides these, every person must make choice when face up to vital issues in his or her life. For example, many people have once encountered such situation that after graduating from college, they may find that two kinds of choices in front of them: finding a job directly or study further in the academy. In addition, for each school or each company, how to keep the foundation work properly, how to make improvement as well as how to win competition in the factual society all contend choices here and there. Even for a government, vital choices that have great influences on the whole country and the public are also its daily affairs. Therefore, in every step of life as well as in every part of society, people can find choices all the time.

Of course, there do exist some circumstance that people feel it is too hard to make any choice, and each choice has positive as well as negative results. Consequently, under this case, people always say that: " I have no choice and the best way is to avoid make any choice." In fact, such attitude is not always positive and may have no meaning to the solution pf the touchy problem. Most of the time, people only take into account those negative aspects of the issue that impedes them from clearly understanding the overall conditions and find out brighter factors contributing to the better solution of such issue. That is to say, when people encounter some difficulties, they are always intended to complicate the essence of these problems and set many potential limits on them. However, the factual situations are not so terrible that there are ways to solve them. So, it is the illusion of people themselves makes people feel be trapped into dilemma rather than the absence of choice.

Since in daily lives, people have such tendency to blindly imagine the situation is very, very terrible and even no choice offered, then there is the necessity to discuss how to change this trend. If people are always worrying about the absence of choice, they may lose many rare chances toward a better life. In fact, the situations of such problem also include many choices, such as taking into all kinds of factors, not giving up whenever encounter difficulties as well as telling themselves that choices are affluent and what should be done is just finding the best one. In a word, never give up whenever the choices are enough or limited. As long as there are choices, people have the chances to achieve success.

To sum up, the situation of no choice is very rare. And what is more difficult is that how to make the best choice when facing to various kinds of choices., which need much more exertion as well as insistence.
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发表于 2004-3-20 12:34:51 |只看该作者
body1 论述得很清晰 段落结构也不错 有排比 很好~~~btw:go to walk(work?)
body2 很流畅 虽然没有举例 但是说理依然很清楚 good 最后一句说得好
body3 进一步论述解决这种没有抉择的错觉的situation 虽然不是很充分,但前两个body已经很充分了,所以body3的作用也已经起到了~~~


总的来说,很不错了~~~呵呵~~well done!

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发表于 2004-3-20 12:37:31 |只看该作者
谢谢哦,近几天你一直在帮我该作文,很是感动,考完回来之后一定与你共勉!!

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hehe~~大家都是同路人嘛!加油把~~~!!
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发表于 2004-3-20 12:58:17 |只看该作者
祝福你!
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考完传授经验哦!
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RE: Issue136 ,大家都来看看吧,这基本上算是我的最后一篇 Issue了,下周一济南杀鸡! [修改]

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Issue136 ,大家都来看看吧,这基本上算是我的最后一篇 Issue了,下周一济南杀鸡!
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-175419-1-1.html
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