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[作文] 【写作小组】墨幽浅作业贴 [复制链接]

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发表于 2014-7-28 20:41:38 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 墨幽浅 于 2014-8-21 14:01 编辑

新人,初次参加活动,请多指教


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如果可以的话,麻烦8.14的朋友帮我扫一下我TPO11的综合写作,谢谢啦


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发表于 2014-7-28 20:42:41 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2014-8-8 12:40:23 |显示全部楼层
8.8
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.

8.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of fuel.

8.6
Which is more important, success in life or the ability to remain happy and optimistic when one's facing difficulty?

8.5
TPO 12 综合写作

8.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

8.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.

8.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure and successful future.

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TPO 13 综合写作

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Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves?

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In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? 1. Education 2. Health Care3.support for the unemployed.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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发表于 2014-8-12 20:54:24 |显示全部楼层
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Is it important for the government to provide money for things that are beautiful than things that are practical.

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本帖最后由 墨幽浅 于 2014-8-21 14:02 编辑

8.13 作业

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发表于 2014-8-14 21:05:51 |显示全部楼层
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TPO 10 综合 by 墨幽浅.doc

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发表于 2014-8-14 21:11:39 |显示全部楼层
刚看到你在我的作文修改里提到 阅读材料也要提及的问题
个人觉得字数够,尽量多写听力材料,阅读材料可以少写
而且我觉得我那样写,模板的痕迹很明显,反而你的结构很自然,应该会受考官亲睐

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发表于 2014-8-15 19:17:25 |显示全部楼层
终于搞定了,没网加用不来,拖了那么久,真的不好意思 TPO 10 综合 by 墨幽浅csy修改.doc (29 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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发表于 2014-8-18 23:29:04 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2014-8-20 17:27:27 |显示全部楼层
小息Jessie 发表于 2014-8-18 23:29
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有的句子是写的太长了我会注意哈哈

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