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本帖最后由 hj1313 于 2014-8-19 12:20 编辑

题目采用AW高频。

八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制，请量力而行，保证写作和互评质量。

时间说明：8.18晚23点结束占座，并且用附件上传自己的习作，并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结，回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评，8.19午来看分组信息，请注意，如果只占座不上传习作，我会把上传习作的分组，未上传的分组。或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享，秉承小组共享互助宗旨，有拖延不改的欢迎发帖或私信举报，情节严重封ID。

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david-ding & qq987654 & liliudodo （A评B，B评C，C评A）

I37：Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

A15：The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.

"Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers. In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine."

Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.

占座ddl：8.18晚24点；互评ddl：8.19晚24点

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本帖最后由 Bruceee 于 2014-8-19 16:02 编辑

考完托福，第一次写GRE作文，写得不是太好，ARGUE第一次写50分钟憋了324个字- -。So, 有什么意见尽管提~I am voracious for advices~
另外，想问问LZ用过那个简单粗暴就能写好ARGU没，我觉得那个模板用到这个提供Alternative Explanation的题目里面不是很搭啊，是否需要每个Instruction都自己写一个模板？

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