Issue167 让我心碎的政治类（galaxysong点评）

fishergirlUID：152325

167. "It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician."

一位卓有成效的政治领导人是不可能一直都讲真话的。对于政治家来说，绝对的诚实是无用的美德。

道德；政治 － 相对的诚实 － 涉及到评价、判断的原则、标准

To be or not to be, as an ambiguous question, it has puzzleed many people for a long time. For political leaders, there is a similar problem badgers them deeply -- to be honest or not. In my point of view, a political leader’s achievement should be evaluated mainly by his/her attribution to the nation’s economic, political and cultural progress, and if honesty should also be considered, it has less importance. Furthermore, it is impossible for everyone to be honest absolutely, not to mention politicians, but it is also undeniable that honesty is definitely a necessary virtue in the appropriate degree.

To begin with, as far as everyone know, one of the unavoidable duties of politicians is to run the monster country machine work normally, and then benefit the public actually, thus it is impossible and unnecessary for them to tell the truth all the time. That is, politicians are not born as liars, but the environment forces them to learn that ploy. In many occasions, a politician has to lie or take something as secrets for the behalf of his/her nation and people. For example, the politicians can never leakage the militery secrets to any irrelevant person for fear of menacing safety of the country, or explore any immature policy to the public to avoid unncessary anarchy, or tell the real aims of some actions before they achieve their goals, and so on. Hence, it is sure that an effective political leader cannot tell the truth all the time, and the public should not ask them to do so.

Additionally, for ones who devote themselves to politics, the premise to do something for the nation and public is the status they hold in political struggles. Therefore politicians often play as different personages in different needs to surpass their antagonists and climb to the highest power apex, and then run the country systematically and smoothly with their great ambitions, intelligent minds and all passions. No one can ensure to make no mistake, yet for a politician, even a little mistake may be a sharp sword handed by his/her antagonist to defeat him/her. In fact, it is the complicated and relentless political struggles that compel politicians to become cunning, prudent and even fraudulent. 求例子！

On the other hand, honesty is a definite virtue deserving respect. Politicians should also be as honest as possible. For one thing, an honest leader can gain more trust, respect and espousal, which will help him/her carry out the policies more smoothly. For another, because too many pesudology will make politicians feel burdensome, it is a good way for them to lessen their psychological pressure. Maybe this can explain that why so many politicians would like to write autobiographies after retirement. 再求！

To sum up, for a political leader, it is of more importance to be effective than to be a moral personification, thus although honesty is a traditional virtue, if it be useless or even harmful in some special situations, a politician should dear to lie or close the mouth. Nevertheless, honesty is surely a respectful virtue in spite of its little flaw in some specific occasions. Thus the most appropriate attitude towards honesty that politicians should take is that being shrewd enough when it is necessary, and then honest in the remaining time.

政治类的文章绝对是我的死穴了，憋了好久才写出这么点东西来 :( 恳请大家拨冗帮我看一下吧！

fishergirlUID：152325

沉了，沉了，我捞一下：）

eaglezhouUID：156651

167. "It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician."

一位卓有成效的政治领导人是不可能一直都讲真话的。对于政治家来说，绝对的诚实是无用的美德。

道德；政治 － 相对的诚实 － 涉及到评价、判断的原则、标准

To be or not to be, as an ambiguous question, it has puzzled many people for a long time. For political leaders, there is a similar problem badgers them deeply -- to be honest or not. In my point of view, a political leader’s achievement should be evaluated mainly by his/her attribution to the nation’s economic, political and cultural progress, and if honesty should also be considered, it has less importance. Furthermore, it is impossible for everyone to be honest absolutely, not to mention politicians, but it is also undeniable that honesty is definitely a necessary virtue in the appropriate degree.

To begin with, as far as everyone know(knows), one of the unavoidable duties of politicians is to run the monster country machine work normally, and then benefit the public actually, thus it is impossible and unnecessary for them to tell the truth all the time. That is, politicians are not born as liars, but the environment forces them to learn that ploy. In many occasions, a politician has to lie or take something as secrets for the behalf of his/her nation and people. For example, the politicians can never leakage(这是名词吧！) the militery（拼错） secrets to any irrelevant person for fear of menacing safety of the country, or explore any immature policy to the public to avoid unncessary（拼错）anarchy, or tell the real aims of some actions before they achieve their goals, and so on. Hence, it is sure that an effective political leader cannot tell the truth all the time, and the public should not ask them to do so.

Additionally, for ones who devote themselves to politics, the premise to do something for the nation and public is the status they hold in political struggles. Therefore politicians often play as different personages in different needs to surpass their antagonists and climb to the highest power apex, and then run the country systematically and smoothly with their great ambitions, intelligent minds and all passions. No one can ensure to make no mistake, yet for a politician, even a little mistake may be a sharp sword handed by his/her antagonist to defeat him/her. In fact, it is the complicated and relentless political struggles that compel politicians to become cunning, prudent and even fraudulent. 求例子！

On the other hand, honesty is a definite virtue deserving respect. Politicians should also be as honest as possible. For one thing, an honest leader can gain more trust, respect and espousal, which will help him/her carry out the policies more smoothly. For another, because too many pesudology（拼错） will make politicians feel burdensome, it is a good way for them to lessen their psychological pressure. Maybe this can explain that why so many politicians would like to write autobiographies after retirement. 再求！(Nixon)

To sum up, for a political leader, it is of more importance to be effective than to be a moral personification, thus although honesty is a traditional virtue, if it be useless or even harmful in some special situations, a politician should dear to lie or close the mouth. Nevertheless, honesty is surely a respectful virtue in spite of its little flaw in some specific occasions. Thus the most appropriate attitude towards honesty that politicians should take is that being shrewd enough when it is necessary, and then honest in the remaining time.

提点意见：可以把政治人物的honesty 和普通人的区分开来

fishergirlUID：152325

谢谢！我是想这样写，不过看来没有说清楚。你的意思是不是说用一句或几句话来专门区分一下这两类人？

fishergirlUID：152325

leakage---->leak
militery---->military
unncessary---->unnecessary
peusology---->pesudology

嘿嘿，昨晚word又出问题了，所以没有放上去检查一下就贴出来了。以后一定自己先查。

dallowayUID：156640

偶今天帮你看，等下:)
似乎你晚上很晚才休息啊，注意身体
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发信人: llear (看透), 信区: SCUT
标  题: 熬夜的常识
发信站: 一塌糊涂 BBS (Tue Feb 17 23:33:40 2004), 本站(ytht.net)

熬夜也要有技巧，才能依然身体硬朗，否则，铁打的身体，也受不了如此的日夜*劳呢～因此，想要熬夜的您，千万记住：
１：不要吃泡面来填饱肚子，以免火气太大，最好尽量以水果、土司、面包、清粥小菜来充饥。
２：开始熬夜前，来一颗维他命ｂ群营养丸，维他命ｂ能够解除疲劳，增强人体免疫力。
３：提神饮料，最好以绿茶为主，可以提神，又可以消除体内多余的自由基，让您神清气爽；但是肠不好的人，最好改喝  杞 优萑 水的茶，可以解压，还可以明目呢！
４：熬夜前千万记得卸妆，或是先把脸洗干净，以免厚厚的粉层或油渍，在熬夜的煎熬下长满脸痘痘。
５：熬夜之后，第二天中午时千万记得打个小盹。
　　
生理时钟，一般而言熬夜是不容易补救的，补救的原则还是建议您改回原来的睡眠时间，尤其是熬夜会使生理时钟发生问题，此时要改回原先的睡觉时间会较难，可建议您不论前一晚多晚睡，次日一定同一时间起床（如设定７点起床），白天想睡时不可卧床大睡，仅能趴着小睡如此便能逐渐将入睡时间提早。
  
生　理　时　钟　说　明
  
00：00～01：00 浅眠期 多梦而敏感，身体不适者易在此时痛醒。
01：00～02：00 排毒期 此时肝脏为排除毒素而活动旺盛，应让身体进入睡眠状态，让肝脏得以完成代谢废物。
02：00～03：00 休眠期 重症病人最易发病的时刻，常有患病者在此时死亡，熬夜最好勿超过这个时间。
09：00～11：00 精华期 此时为注意力及记忆力最好，且工作与学习的最佳时段。
12：00～13：00 午休期 最好静坐或闭目休息一下再进餐，正午不可饮酒，易醉又伤肝哦！
14：00～15：00 高峰期 是分析力和创造力得以发挥淋漓的极致时段胖。
17：00～18：00 松散期 此时血糖略增，嗅觉与味觉最敏感，不妨准备晚膳来提振精神。
19：00～20：00 暂憩期 最好能在饭后３０分钟去散个步或沐浴，放松一下，纾解一日的疲倦困顿。
20：00～22：00 夜修期 此为晚上活动的巅峰时段，建议您善用此时进行商议，进修等需要思虑周密的活动。
23：00～24：00 夜眠期 经过镇日忙碌，此时应该放松心情进入梦乡，千万别让身体过度负荷，那可得不偿失哦

fishergirlUID：152325

谢谢dalloway，我也觉得自己好像不适合熬夜啊，前天和昨天睡得比较晚一点，结果就长了两个很大的疖子，果然肝火上升，呵呵。

lovebrianUID：157127

最初由 dalloway 发布
[B]发信人: llear (看透), 信区: SCUT
标 题: 熬夜的常识
发信站: 一塌糊涂 BBS (Tue Feb 17 23:33:40 2004), 本站(ytht.net)

熬夜也要有技巧，才能依然身体硬朗，否则，铁打的身体，也受不了如此的日夜*劳呢～因此，想要熬夜的您，千万记住：
１：不要吃泡面来填饱肚子，以免火气太大，最好尽量以水果、土司、面包、清粥小菜来充饥。
２：开始熬夜前，来一颗维他命ｂ群营养丸，维他命ｂ能够解除疲劳，增强人体免疫力。
３：提神饮料，最好以绿茶为主，可以提神，又可以消除体内多余的自由基，让您神清气爽；但是肠不好的人，最好改喝 杞 优萑 水的茶，可以解压，还可以明目呢！
４：熬夜前千万记得卸妆，或是先把脸洗干净，以免厚厚的粉层或油渍，在熬夜的煎熬下长满脸痘痘。
５：熬夜之后，第二天中午时千万记得打个小盹。
　　
生理时钟，一般而言熬夜是不容易补救的，补救的原则还是建议您改回原来的睡眠时间，尤其是熬夜会使生理时钟发生问题，此时要改回原先的睡觉时间会较难，可建议您不论前一晚多晚睡，次日一定同一时间起床（如设定７点起床），白天想睡时不可卧床大睡，仅能趴着小睡如此便能逐渐将入睡时间提早。

生　理　时　钟　说　明

00：00～01：00 浅眠期 多梦而敏感，身体不适者易在此时痛醒。
01：00～02：00 排毒期 此时肝脏为排除毒素而活动旺盛，应让身体进入睡眠状态，让肝脏得以完成代谢废物。
02：00～03：00 休眠期 重症病人最易发病的时刻，常有患病者在此时死亡，熬夜最好勿超过这个时间。
09：00～11：00 精华期 此时为注意力及记忆力最好，且工作与学习的最佳时段。
12：00～13：00 午休期 最好静坐或闭目休息一下再进餐，正午不可饮酒，易醉又伤肝哦！
14：00～15：00 高峰期 是分析力和创造力得以发挥淋漓的极致时段胖。
17：00～18：00 松散期 此时血糖略增，嗅觉与味觉最敏感，不妨准备晚膳来提振精神。
19：00～20：00 暂憩期 最好能在饭后３０分钟去散个步或沐浴，放松一下，纾解一日的疲倦困顿。
20：00～22：00 夜修期 此为晚上活动的巅峰时段，建议您善用此时进行商议，进修等需要思虑周密的活动。
23：00～24：00 夜眠期 经过镇日忙碌，此时应该放松心情进入梦乡，千万别让身体过度负荷，那可得不偿失哦
[/B]

好东东~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~不过这样看来好像熬不成了  :(


btw167我也写过 刚开始写的时候 想写机井176结果写成167了  写得很烂 :mad:

个人感觉这篇的政治性质不是很大 比其他的政治题目好写点

dallowayUID：156640

老外280篇里有issue8的范文，和这个差不多
我明天再瞧瞧自己的，怎么都有点忘了当初怎么写的了？
今天实在是有点晕了，先回去了:(

sniper613UID：147372

占个座，马上帮你看看

sniper613UID：147372

Issue167. "It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician."

一位卓有成效的政治领导人是不可能一直都讲真话的。对于政治家来说，绝对的诚实是无用的美德。

道德；政治 － 相对的诚实 － 涉及到评价、判断的原则、标准

To be or not to be, as an ambiguous question, it has puzzleed（不如改成：It is a puzzle to ） many people for a long time.(语法顺序看起来很别扭啊。It 作为形式主语应该放前面啊，不然要形式主语来干嘛？) For political leaders, there is a similar problem badgers them deeply -- to be honest or not. In my point of view, a political leader’s achievement should be evaluated mainly by his/her attribution to the nation’s economic, political and cultural progress, and if honesty should also be considered, it has less importance. Furthermore, it is impossible for everyone to be honest absolutely, not to mention（Chinese-English！ Use “ Let alone”） politicians, but it is also undeniable that honesty is definitely a necessary virtue in the appropriate degree.(有所保留的赞成题目,中心在but后面噢)

To begin with, as far as everyone know, one of the unavoidable duties of politicians is to run the monster country machine work normally, and then benefit the public actually, thus it is impossible and unnecessary for them to tell the truth all the time. That is, politicians are not born as liars, but the environment forces them to learn that ploy. In many occasions, a politician has to lie or take something as secrets for the behalf of his/her nation and people. For example, the politicians can never leakage the militery（military） secrets to any irrelevant person for fear of menacing safety of the country（这就是所谓的不诚实？）, or explore any immature policy to the public to avoid unnecessary anarchy, or tell the real aims of some actions before they achieve their goals, and so on. Hence, it is sure that an effective political leader cannot tell the truth all the time, and the public should not ask them to do so.(不诚实不等于不告诉别人，而是欺骗别人，这段写得很不好，例子和论点之间论证的不好)

Additionally, for ones who devote themselves to politics,（从句结构不完整啊！） the premise to do something for the nation and public is the status they hold in political struggles. Therefore politicians often play as different personages in different needs to surpass their antagonists and climb to the highest power apex, and then run the country systematically and smoothly with their great ambitions, intelligent minds and all passions. No one can ensure to make no mistake, yet for a politician, even a little mistake may be a sharp sword handed by his/her antagonist to defeat him/her. In fact, it is the complicated and relentless political struggles that compel politicians to become cunning, prudent and even fraudulent. （看不懂你这段想说明什么）

On the other hand, honesty is a definite virtue deserving respect. Politicians should also be as honest as possible. For one thing, an honest leader can gain more trust, respect and espousal, which will help him/her carry out the policies more smoothly. For another, because too many pesudology（?what?） will make politicians feel burdensome, it is a good way for them to lessen their psychological pressure. Maybe this can explain that why so many politicians would like to write autobiographies after retirement. （example: Thomas Jefferson）

To sum up, for a political leader, it is of more importance to be effective than to be a moral personification, thus although honesty is a traditional virtue, if it be useless or even harmful in some special situations, a politician should dear to lie or close the mouth. Nevertheless, honesty is surely a respectful virtue in spite of its little flaw in some specific occasions. Thus the most appropriate attitude towards honesty that politicians should take is that being shrewd enough when it is necessary, and then honest in the remaining time.


你的第一段不是在说politicians 应该诚实吗？怎么文章里反而为他们辩护阿？

etechUID：144895

先拿下来看看，1小时后贴换掉水铁。。呵呵


To be or not to be, as an ambiguous question, it has puzzleed many people for a long time. For political leaders, there is a similar problem badgers(这个词...是这么用马?) them deeply -- to be honest or not. In my point of view, a political leader’s achievement should be evaluated mainly by his/her attribution to the nation’s economic, political and cultural progress, and if honesty should also be considered, it has less importance. Furthermore, it is impossible for everyone(改成泛指one) to be honest absolutely, not to mention(金山词霸真是强阿，一下就跳出来了“不必提及”，呵呵，不过个人认为应该用not to speak，更符合你要表达的意思) politicians, but it is also undeniable that honesty is definitely(definitely是个很强的ad,修饰virtue和前面观点不太一致，后面又appropriate degree...所以把definitely去掉把) a necessary virtue in the appropriate degree.

To begin with, as far as everyone know(s), one of the unavoidable duties of politicians is to run the monster country machine work(*_* 什么怪兽?) normally, and then benefit the public actually(utimately的意思?), thus(thus真的不能做连词的) it is impossible and unnecessary(感觉从语气递进来说，unnecessary放在impossible之前好) for them to tell the truth all the time. That is, politicians are not born as liars, but the environment forces them to learn that ploy. In many occasions, a politician has to lie or take something as secrets for the behalf of his/her nation and people. For example, the politicians can never leakage(leak) the(/) militery secrets to any irrelevant person for fear of menacing safety of the country, or explore(感觉用disseminate更好?) any immature policy to the public to avoid unncessary anarchy, or tell the real aims of some actions before they achieve their goals, and so on. Hence, it is sure that an effective political leader cannot tell the truth all the time, and the public should not ask them to do so.(那几个or连接的内容虽然没有实例加强论证，却真的不错)

Additionally, for ones who devote themselves to politics, the premise to do something for the nation and (the?) public is the status they hold in political struggles. Therefore politicians often play as different personages in different needs to surpass their antagonists and climb to he highest power apex, and then run the country systematically and smoothly with their great ambitions, intelligent minds and all passions. No one can ensure to make no mistake, yet for a politician, even a little mistake may be a sharp sword handed by his/her antagonist to defeat him/her. In fact, it is the complicated and relentless political struggles that compel politicians to become cunning, prudent and even fraudulent. 求例子！(比起作者来，偶的想法就纯洁多了，^_^，所以没例子)

On the other hand, honesty is a definite virtue deserving respect. Politicians should also be as honest as possible. For one thing, an honest leader can gain more trust, respect and espousal(support? 作者整篇文章用了暴多g的nb词阿), which will help him/her carry out the policies more smoothly. For another, because too many pesudology(偶崩溃了，大姐，这个词什么意思哦?)  will make politicians feel burdensome, it is a good way for them to lessen their psychological pressure. Maybe this can explain that why so many politicians would like to write autobiographies
after retirement. 再求！(偶倒有个在自传里面都说谎的例子，是基辛格的)

To sum up, for a political leader, it is of more importance to be effective than to be a moral personification(issue题库里面还有一片说“leader should be example of best moral...blablabla,偶写的是同意...寒...现在看作者的文章，觉得还是反对为好阿.), thus although honesty is a traditional virtue, (句号,更舒服点?) if it be(为什么用be?) useless or even harmful in some special situations, a politician should dear to lie or close the mouth. Nevertheless(这个伟大词汇是用来反对前者，强调后者--作者观点的,用在这里真的不妥，让人以为你最后是在强调honesty.用admittedly,though), honesty is surely a respectful virtue in spite of its little flaw in some specific occasions. Thus the most appropriate attitude towards honesty(inhonesty,强调的毕竟是in-) hat politicians should take is that being shrewd enough when it is necessary, and then (being) honest in the remaining time.

写的很好阿，偶改过之后就觉得偶没必要自己写了，呵呵，把你的结构列写一下借来用用就可以。而且本文的内容还可以被用来证明ISSUE题库里面别的题目，真的不错哦。

eaglezhouUID：156651

你的意思是不是说用一句或几句话来专门区分一下这两类人？

我倒觉得应该作为展开的基点

etechUID：144895

另：一个例子

WW2时候，邱吉尔得到消息，德国要轰炸一个城市（寒，名字忘了，谁知道？？？），

但是，消息的来源是从刚刚破译的德军密码，为了不让德军知道他们已经破译了密码，邱吉尔痛心的拒绝了通知那个城市居民的建议。

果然，之后，英军又通过破译密码，知道了德军要轰炸伦敦，这次，邱吉尔下令撤离，拯救了更多人的生命。。。

再问一次，谁知道那个城市的E文名字？？？

fishergirlUID：152325

突然发现得到了这么多的宝贵意见，赶快存下来：）

不过今天很累了，明早起来，神智清醒的时候再好好研读！

先谢过了！