【口语小组】Lisa_C作业贴（0927）

lisa_CUID: 2678347

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2014/09/05

927托福，赶个晚班车，今天开始跟版猛练口语~


9.12题目
Task 1 What is the one style of clothing that the students in your school tend to wear? Why you like this style of clothing? Include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 What kind of job will you choose? To choose a job through which you can get a lot of money or to choose a job through which you can get great personal satisfaction? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 tpo 22

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9.11题目
task 1 among the following kinds of books: mystery, science fiction, and biography, which do you like the LEAST? give specific reasons for your answer.
task 2 some schools require students to bring their own laptops to class. do you agree or disagree with this policy?
task 3-6 tpo 23

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9.10题目
task 1 if you were to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why? a place close to your school or workplace; a place near your parents' home; or a place close to a transportation hub (eg. airport or bus terminal).
task 2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement：the way people dress can express their personalities. please give specific reasons for your opinion.
task3-6 tpo24

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9.7 题目
task1 among these activities, which do you think is the most beneficial for students? a field trip, a  home tutor session, or a presentation given by a local leader.
task2 Which do you prefer, card game or computer game? please give your specific reasons.
task3-6 tpo 27

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9.6题目
task 1 please give your suggestions on how to save our planet, since we are facing serious environmental problems. explain your answer using specific details and reasons.
task 2 some people play games for enjoyment. some people play games just for winning. what is your opinion and why?
task 3-6 tpo 28

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9.5 题目

task1 what community service task would you like to do? helping children with their homework, teaching old people how to use computers, or cleaning a city park.

task2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyle. please give your opinion and reasons.

task3-6 tpo 29



第一次刷全套，感觉嘴巴笨得很>_<

糖先生UID: 2834612

9.5
没有想到我是第一个。哈哈

T1
你的发音很好的，没有问题~~
38‘ children升调比较好，因为后面是or接的下半句，升调表示话没有说完
那个什么show啊？ 没有听出来
内容挺好的~ 我觉得最后一句不如说成，你教会他们电脑，他们就更快乐

T2
sector e貌似发成i了
政府面对什么没用听清楚~
感觉说得有点空。第一点同意的部分可以举个具体的例子，比如鼓励大家社区修公共健身设施，大家积极去，锻炼提高身体素质

T3
第一个理由说得有点太简单了。可以说一下note的建议。
最后一句有点结巴。
其他都挺好

T4
一般先总结一下基本感念，在描述例子。
说得有点慢了。
例子总结得还不错。

T5
这个时间分配得挺好的。
reschedule 音调有点奇怪，降调重度有点突兀。
你的意见中的第二个理由，copy others' materials是怎么回事啊？好像没有说这点吧？难道我没有听到。原文说的是她去喝点coffee撑过去吧~~32’ copy那句没有听清楚。
妹纸，听力要加强哦~

T6
我记得是生产TV screen的公司去生产computer monitor吧~ 妹纸你好像恰好说反了，是不是笔记看颠倒了？
12‘那个是similar吗？ 听上去像familiar。 而且similar后面用to哈~
second e发的有点像i
就是说的有点慢~


总的来说，发音和语调都还不错，但是有些细节要注意。就是语速偏慢，所以能说的就不多了。
听力要加强

第一次就能达到这种水平，点赞！

kfangjingUID: 3452198

9.7
T1: 挺流畅，该停顿的时候也应该停顿，例如说完suggestion后停顿下再说例子。其它挺好的。
T2：例子很好，不过逻辑上有点混乱，a relax for me 少个a (34S); 建议在最后加一句 no matterwe  win of lose, we all enjoy the games. 这样显得切题。
T3 ：我的建议是，你说reading的部分太多了，重点应该是listening里的内容，reading内容简练总结就好。 你说listening内容的第二点有点少。
T4：advantage 发音好像有点问题。profesor in .....这句话太啰嗦，这句话要有但不用那么长：the profesor illustrates this strategy by a advertisment he watched. 就可以了。其它挺好的。
T5：第二个solution说的不准确，第一个要采访分是 director，第二个是lead actor。有点不流畅。
T6：没挑出问题。

BuddUID: 3557997

哈哈，楼上的看错分组了，正好偷个懒……

hardheadedUID: 3557538

请问lz退出口语小组了吗，为什么没有作业？

lisa_CUID: 2678347

hardheaded 发表于 2014-9-12 13:38
请问lz退出口语小组了吗，为什么没有作业？

不好意思，马上补上~稍等~

hardheadedUID: 3557538

0910
T1 "impossible" seems to be in British accent
    pronunciation: courses,
    speaks too slowly
"my hometown locates in different city with my school," your hometown is a place,(a village or city...) it shouldn't "locate in" a city.
T2  to many pauses,  speaks too slowly
t3 pronunciation : house, in addition, coffee,because

t4  pronunciation: awareness
t5 it might be crowded, not crows
t6 accent became better
    pronunciation :  about
   the time limit is one minute, speak more quickly

CONTENT is good,  but  I think t1,t2 may get a FAIR

AvalietUID: 3512247

9.13全套
T1
就有一处，你说你喜欢打羽毛球后面你可以再详细说一下你穿什么样的衣服打球会不会更好些
T2
很好没问题
T3
点全，时间安排合理，没问题。语速再快点会更完美
T4
irrational注意发音
连贯性加油
T5
点全，时间分配也很好，后面理由也很充分，没问题。再连贯些就更好了。
T6
应该是shovel铲子 楼主说的shuttle？梭子
vulnerable易受伤的 楼主说的什么**tary
时间分配合理


楼主语音语调都很好逻辑清楚，内容上也没什么问题，语速稍快些会更好
加油~