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Topic ：  In some countries ，it is now possible for some people to buy products made in other countries。To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problems？

Response：

At a cosmopolitan scale， world's cargo trading has been largely stimulated by deep globalization ，so people can purchase large variety of products from other counties。I believe that ，this trend，has more positive effects than negative effects。

It is undeniable that international commercial progress has opened new markets to both import and export countries，as exchanges among products and bills beneficially balances economic units' demand。Therefore，manufacturers from all over the world are seeking new chance to make more profits，which stimulates economic increase globally。

Besides economic development，cultural communication has become the consequential outcome for trading partners。The products，often packed in coloured packages with incentive words and unque nutrition constitution indicator，opened a cultural window to both consumers and retailers，which even considered to be a marketing strategy in advance conceived by manufacturers。Thus，marketing executives should learn more consuming habits in the counties they are targeting。

There  are，however，problems of large scale products exchange。The most obvious challenge for the countries which imported products from other countries，is how to protect their domestic industries。Some imported products generally produced at high quality and low price，which means domestic products would be ignored by consumers 。Additionally，after-sold service often plays significant role but they are sometimes absent when consumers need them。Famous manufacturers have to build a highly efficient branch if they are ready to establish a well-operated market in another county。

All told ，have indicated that the benefits of world wide products trading outweigh the problems caued by that。Obviously，global  xpansion in importing and exporting should be encouraged。

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