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[作文] 【独立写作】山奈的作业贴(12月06日) [复制链接]

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发表于 2014-9-11 14:48:19 |显示全部楼层
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10.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0fCSfQ
1、opportunities can fleet
2、patience sometimes can decrease one's work efficiency

09.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members, so there is no need for the government to help them.
第一次发帖和弄网盘,请指教
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjueCe5
1、people cannot solve every problems they face, especially some huge problems without the government’s support.
2、only with the government’s organization and planning, can people enjoy a stable and orderly life with efficient facilitate construction.
3、government helps to balance the gap between the poor and the rich through micro method.
4、it is the government’s natural responsibilities to help its people.

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发表于 2014-9-12 10:46:44 |显示全部楼层
改好啦~~你的英文水准一看就很高诶~~不过我是第一次改别人的作文啦,不到之处还请指出~~

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发表于 2014-10-17 15:33:07 |显示全部楼层
没找到10.16的作业,上传好了回我下

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