GRE作文6分教学博客

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如获至宝，相见恨晚！从早上一口气看到现在才结束，经历了从入门到系统化的过程。其中精彩令人激动，其中情怀令人感动。经济学三年级小硕，下周六就要上场杀G，非常仓促，恐怕已无时间将在此学到的理论全部付诸实践。GRE全部准备时间也只有不到30天，上月初被TOP2学校拒掉，愤而出国读博，也算是走了一条多年来在心里演习了无数遍的路！很享受这个过程！
期待9月王老师的留学文书指导博客！感谢！

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tesolchina 发表于 2015-5-28 10:38
16) Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public  ...

老师想问一下 这里的political leader一定是行政机关的leader吗 您第三段的gay marriage的例子 现在美国最高院已经把same-sex marriage 变成legal right， 但是这是司法机关的决定，不是行政机关、立法机关的决定，所以这个例子现在还可以用吗？

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lullaby717 发表于 2015-8-22 11:02
老师想问一下 这里的political leader一定是行政机关的leader吗 您第三段的gay marriage的例子 现在美国最 ...

司法机关的决定最终还是要执法机关来落实 所以同性婚姻问题肯定还是涉及到political leaders

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蓝涩__ 发表于 2015-8-22 01:30
如获至宝，相见恨晚！从早上一口气看到现在才结束，经历了从入门到系统化的过程。其中精彩令人激动，其中情 ...

留学文书指导估计暂时不会做了 这个坑有点大   

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这字体板面未发完仨不谁能理明

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tesolchina 发表于 2015-5-28 09:41
这道题太高频了

32) College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availabi ...

思路蛮好的

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很感谢老师的指导，受益匪浅！
今天看到了另一篇经验贴，https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1770273-1-1.html，里面讲到另外一种Issue方法，思路跟老师的有些不一样，有点类似Argument的写法。摘录一段如下：

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Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

我本人是这样分的：
1. Should the GOVERNMENTS do it? Not necessarily because it is too expensive for the governments if there are lots of universities around and lots of people who need financial support. Also, can anyone other than the governments do this? Of course, we now have websites such as Coursera and Edx that can provide free university education to those who are poor.
2. Does it have to be FREE? Of course not. Governments can provide partial financial subsidies, and ask the students to pay the remaining amount. Students can also have the experience of making money at a relatively young age, so that they are more prepared to enter the workplace.
3. What about ANY student? Maybe not. Because of the limited availability of governments' funding, only those students who are distinguished and outstanding may receive support from governments.
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他这种分析方法感觉比较自由随意，我用您的方法和他的方法都试了一下，感觉是您的方法稳健，而他的方法写起来思路开阔。就是不知道他这样的分析方法适不适合写Issue. 老师您怎么看呢？求指点，谢谢！

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hezl09 发表于 2015-8-26 21:11
很感谢老师的指导，受益匪浅！
今天看到了另一篇经验贴，https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1770273-1-1.html，里 ...

注意看题目的要求是consider consequences 感觉这个提纲没有按这个要求写啊

tesolchinaUID: 2191404

ISSUE152）The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

TS: Limiting the amount of trash would not solve the problem because the proposed measure would be difficult to implement and may lead to illegal waste disposal.  Clearly better approaches include creating economic incentives for the residents and the companies to reduce domestic waste and using new technologies such as incinerators.  As for the impact on the environment caused by incinerators, the use of the technology can be justified if the overall cost is smaller than the costs of the alternative solutions and the technology may be further improved in future.

ts1: it is not feasible for the government to limit the amount of trash that each household can dispose
- the cost of enforcing the law can be very high
- the people may choose to dispose trash secretly and illegally
- the policy may be challenged as the quality of life will be severely compromised

ts2: there are better ways to solve the problems such as creating more incentives for reducing trash and recycling and using new technology (incinerator)
- offering tax credit for recycling companies and imposing taxes on disposable consumer items http://www.investopedia.com/articles/pf/07/disposablesociety.asp
- invest in building incinerators

ts3: while the technological solutions such as incinerators may cause more pollution in the short term, more resources devoted to the research and development will further improve its efficiency and functionality  
- better models could be developed to understand the chemical processes of burning the trash
- researches will lead to new technologies to process the waste gas before it is released to the atmosphere

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tesolchina 发表于 2014-10-18 12:25
V160+Q163+AW 4.0 在职备考经验及教训
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1763886&fromui ...

看的太晚了，这周六考试，肯定来不及了。不过没关系，这次不好，我下次，要坚持！！

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tesolchina 发表于 2015-8-9 16:55
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. B ...

这道题感觉特别不好写 没什么内容。。。

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tesolchina 发表于 2014-11-13 01:54
31) The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City's local newspaper.
In our regio ...

老师我觉得您这里说捐款这个因素不太合适于这个题目。因为题目一开始已经指出了the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend—the city-run public schools—comes from taxes that each city government collects.也就是说就算钱捐的再多也只是一小部分？

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锤先森G330 发表于 2015-8-29 13:18
老师我觉得您这里说捐款这个因素不太合适于这个题目。因为题目一开始已经指出了the majority of money sp ...

In our region of Trillura, the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend—the city-run public schools—comes from taxes that each city government collects. The region's cities differ, however, in the budgetary priority they give to public education. For example, both as a proportion of its overall tax revenues and in absolute terms, Parson City has recently spent almost twice as much per year as Blue City has for its public schools—even though both cities have about the same number of residents. Clearly, Parson City residents place a higher value on providing a good education in public schools than Blue City residents do.

你要注意这道题最终的结论是什么
Clearly, Parson City residents place a higher value on providing a good education in public schools than Blue City residents do.
这里关注的是当地居民对公立教育的重视程度
原文的假设是政府投入越多越能体现重视 但是居民未必能左右政府的投入 以及 居民可能通过其他形式来支持教育 这里的其他形式可以包括捐款 和 义工
这里的重点不在于钱的多少而是在于态度 态度是可以通过捐款的踊跃程度和数量看出来的  

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赞:p

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十分受用，过几天考，肯定要二战的，努力学习中。