Argument写作入门-开头段第一步：梳理结论、论据

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练习1：As suggested by the director, Buckingham College should put building new dormitories on the agenda due to a booming enrollment and rising rent of off-campus housing. He or she also put that new dormitories can be an attraction to prospective students.

练习2："For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, all of the five best-selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory, the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses."
概括结论证据：
According to the owner, the cheese store ought to stop supplies of imported cheese for that the top five selling cheeses at their newest store were all indigenous and a magazine survey reveals an increasing favorites on domestic cheeses. Further more, by storing only homegrown cheeses, the store could reduce storing fees.
练习三：
"Despite its downtown location, the Rialto Movie Theater, a local institution for five decades, must make big changes or close its doors forever. It should follow the example of the new Apex Theater in the mall outside of town. When the Apex opened last year, it featured a video arcade, plush carpeting and seats, and a state-of-the-art sound system. Furthermore, in a recent survey, over 85 percent of respondents reported that the high price of newly released movies prevents them from going to the movies more than five times per year. Thus, if the Rialto intends to hold on to its share of a decreasing pool of moviegoers, it must offer the same features as Apex."
概括论据：The manager of the Rialto Movie Theater suggested that this cinema should upgrade to the same luxurious facilities as Apex Theater due to a growing competition and decreasing pool of moviegoers.

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