GREGORIAN系列GREAWA MODEL ESSAY [连载中]

silentwingsUID: 150781

GRE AWA MODEL ESSAY
                                                           EDITOR: GREGORIA
PART I——ISSUE 244

issue1
We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.

Do people cannot fundamentally learn much more from the ones whose views polemical with them in comparison with people who stand beside the same frontier? And does disagreement always just like the speaker said can inflame nothing alternative dominant but instead stress and learning blocks? The both questions can cast great doubt onto the present issue, which deserves our reconsideration and properly evaluation from a more broaden perspective ranging from study life to daily experience.

The concession we can make here is that once the group of people participating the issue debates shares no more common essential features----mundane worldview, dialectic methodology, or spiritual belief, or the forth------then no far-reaching purposes or influences can the controversies bring about except for a litter of nonsensical accusation. Let's open the heart of imagination for such a seemly exotic while thinkable instance. We can aspire to no hope for Roosevelt and Hitler to sit together at the same table for the hegemony of their own theory towards the redistribution of the global complexion, no matter war or tranquility, each is treated just as an excuse reflecting back to the surface of humanistic understanding given to define divergently with justice or evil. And as a result of this substantial classification, then even today a second chance sanctioned to make by their believers as well returns to the stubbornness of antithesis. Similarly putting, the more empirical paradigm such as the inflicts between a materialist and a transcendentalist, or a scientist major in pristine objectivity and a priest recalcitrant in theology, all is the duplicated plates of the imaginarily satirical patterns with the exposure of the disagreements as a dose of inhibition of learning process.

However, exceptions are ironically now burgeoning to a higher level on the originally narrow rung of the comprehensive assessment hierarchy; in other words, take a conversation with someone comparably outlandish in dimension of thinking angle and scrutiny process can donate one with a piece of untold treasure out of the ability embraced by those who sticky to whatever you advocates. And the sensational functions it deploys are as follows:

Firstly, they are able to let you recheck your pontifical theories or ideas under a naturally pacific and well-rounded circumstance through which most of time any subtle or marginal drawbacks you can sift out in person. How it is possible to equip such unthinkable magic beyond our traditional idolization of homogenized conformity? The reason lies on the pragmatic fact that we only pay our attention on the reliability of our elaborate sculpture of theoretical building when the antagonistic storm blasting against the elementary buttress, and your adversary is the storm-maker. For example, when the Newton depended on his own affluent prestige together with his impressionable understanding towards the essence of light aggregated with myriads of micro-particles, Huggens, on the other hand, surprisingly proffer another explanation of the features of beam light ——whose marrow performs a unique characteristic like wave of a rivulet ——on the basis of reviewing large amounts of the unpersuasive demonstration by the classic knowledge,. And the both perspectives are well analyzed and illustrated today, held up in hand as neither of each side is fallible, nor absolute integrity. Until the French physicist de Broglie coming with his original idea of wave-particle dualism, not a single general picture was ever successfully exhibited in front of our eyeshot.

And despite sometimes your opposites cannot show you a perfect and convincing portrait of your gross errors rooted in the theoretical basis, while another role anyone ought to not disregard is a totally reclaimed sideway enlightened for your kindling a brand new spark of germinal thoughts. A classic paragon we can draw from the exploration of mathematic methodology of statistics demonstration. The bucolic approach of actualizing a data or algebra conclusion is letting the reasoning and deduction along with the streamline from the precondition or assumption given out of any suspect we can put into utility to the final goal elicitation. Notwithstanding this method enables us to attach to the natural order of both disciplinary recognition and logical thinking, while it disappoints us when the presupposition alone is short in clout for our normal inference indispensable a bridge leading us to arrive at the other side. And no surprise comes some of iconoclasts breaking the codes of deciphering the tradition puzzles with the pattern(assumption——conclusion mode), but instead intrepidly guarantee the correctness of the opposite cover of the conclusion, and then start their illustration at the border of the assumed contrary assertion back to search for the corroboration of the paradoxical factors against the approbatory prerequisites. This revolutionary method is also the pride accolade of a confluence of two opposite tributaries.

To sum up, in spite of the peeved conditions being always haunting around our life experience especially not a tiny common feature any two persons holding on the point of issue, while never should we deny the overwhelming impact the communication and conversation manipulated among people from differentiated backgrounds leave behind. As we can make a clarified sense on the foothold of the detail-anatomy arrayed above, the spirit of demanding for similarity cannot ever imbue the new constitution. (857 words)

silentwingsUID: 150781

这个系列版本是Catholic Edition, 希望给许多迷茫的GRE考生们以全新理念的AWA写作认识!
版权所有,切勿转载!
本系列将长期连载于寄托天下!
All rights have been reserved and arranged only to gter, but are not applicable to any form of duplication or e-book cooking.
Thank you!

silentwingsUID: 150781

GREGORIAN AWA MODEL ESSAY
ARGUMENT1
The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products.
'Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store in Plainsville, which has many such residents. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Plainsville's schoolchildren are required to participate in a 'fitness for life' program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.'

The argument is well presented but not well reasoned for suffering several severe problems undermining the final persuasion within the vice president's expectation.

The first patent one coming into my eyeshot is the elicited report provided by local merchants in Plainsville, the content of which indicates the sales of sneakers and sports clothes being in a good sale. However, this individual fact in itself is far short in legitimacy than the vice president take hold of, thus comes the corresponding deduction of the great concern of healthy lives embodied on the local community keeping trapped in annoying morass. Other highly cogent alternative reasons can be transplanted here without any suspect or malaise. One can perform as that the popular fashion of the design together with the style comes across adhering to temporal interests and pursuits of local people rather than what the vice president asserts, the penchant for outer exercises. Another possibility is the relatively lower price of the shoes and clothes comparable to the other kinds of counterparts, the psychology of consumers' pursuit for benefits gives us a lesson used to put this probability into a thinkable strategy. And finally, if we are eager to visualize, the overwhelming effects played by alluring advertisements as well cannot be impetuously ignored, the charisma stems from their blandishments is glamorous enough to draw your money out of purse whether it is attached to your potential will. All of these slots shed suspicious beam onto the seemly objective and stubborn report and no more warranted license can it promise for us.

The second question we have to strive to clarify is the sudden prosperity of the local health club. As our common sense drawn from our life experience might tell us, people likely to participate the health club harbor more complicated and assorted wishes than the achromatic purpose--exercise. Spare entertainment, relaxation after asphyxiated work, and perhaps, to introduce more amicable friends into one's life, all of these can make sense why the local health club wins such a spectacular popularity. Besides the affirmation of the precondition of the blooming situation, we still can cast doubt on the extent of its prevalence. Although the classes are always full, yet how many joiners on the hell in a single class? And what's more, how much proportion does the participants occupy in the diagram of the gross number of local residents? Both of the answers reveal the actual truth of the prime time of local health concern asserted by this vice president. Deprived of the freedom of accessibility of these comprehensive statistics, no stubborn conclusion can we pinpoint in front of these primitive materials.

The third drawback of the memorandum comes like this, even it can come through the evidence that intense disposition of local residents divert to the aspiration of sports exercise, no further testimony can displayed as pillars to support their aptness to the relative food products from Nature's Way. As a customer, the attitude fostered toward a particular brand of food relates quite a lot to the special tastes and the habitual bent, never can the unique factor of sports idolization usurp the final decisive choice. And economic prerequisite is another realistic cause anyone must put into consideration, since no one impecunious to this relatively high consumption would stick to his or her favor in the end.

Last but not least, the ultimate prospect thrown onto the future plan designed for local children is generally ridiculous for the brace of this recommendation, for these anticipated consumers embrace too much unpredictable factors hunch and augury is merely a self-cheating behavior. Time is changing, society is advancing, and the attitudes, habits, tastes and humanistic conditions in all cannot escape the pattern of revolution; briefly, let the germinal force supplant the decrepit detritus. Then, once the recognition flying into our mind space, I grant, that no one included this vice president would defend this absurd utopia ever since.

To sum up, the memorandum is erroneously structured under the awkward vice president for failing to analyzing the superficial facts of both incandescent sale of exercising shoes and sports clothes and club popularity, meanwhile, the presumptuous avowal to the residents' acceptance of their food products and the prospective children stepping into the queue of purchasers push the latter part of the recommendation into an abysmal oscillation. To remedy these bleeding scabs, no other side way can curtail the efforts vice president have to make but to deploy a step-by-step detail-investigation followed by concomitant critical analysis; only then, I believe, the apropos and best correctness of the peroration one can refine from the original materials could welcome the most vast welcome and approbation. (775 words)