写AW的都过来接受一下教育：看看人家Toefl听力怎么说的

imongUID: 140258

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Part C

Questions 40-43 Listen to part of a lecture in a composition class. By the end of the term, I hope you will be convinced as I am that formal writing always requires revision. Sometimes it requires a fairly major rewriting of the paper. Some students have the mistaken idea that revision means simply making corrections in spelling and grammar. I call that proofreading. What I expect you to do with your revise is to evaluate and improve the overall effectiveness of your paper. But how can you tell if your paper is effective? Well, for example, start by asking yourself these questions: Is the topic restricted enough to be fully discussed within the given length? Are the main ideas clear? Are they supported by specific details and examples? Do they move smoothly from one idea to the next? You need enough time for a possible major overhaul. That is you may have to make a lot of changes before your paper becomes really clear to the reader. So I’ll expect a preliminary draft of each paper two weeks before the final due date. That way I can criticize it and get it back in time for you to revise it. Then you can submit a final draft for grading. This process may seem like a great deal of trouble at first, but I think you’ll find it valuable. In fact, after you finish this course, I doubt that you well ever turn in a term
paper without first revising it carefully.

jackyantsUID: 121144

哈哈,imong的toefl又到一境界.....:D

imongUID: 140258

早在年初就有啦
https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=162997

jackyantsUID: 121144

嗯,对哦
你又提醒了我一个平时准备issue的方法了
好,看来准备toefl和我AWA还有共通点,
可以省下一点点时间:D

gdhdannyUID: 125843

走火入魔了

imongUID: 140258

最初由 gdhdanny 发布
[B]走火入魔了 [/B]

哼
得了便宜还卖乖
痛扁楼上的

earthshellUID: 157316

what a excellent analysis but how you can think all of these when you are writhing in nurvese condition???? however , it is helpful when you practise!@!!

JonsoncaoUID: 161915

简而言之就是要做到

thesis要restricted, unified, and precise

然后在问如下几个问题：
1 Is the relationship among parts clear and consistent?

2 Does the order of the parts provide a logical progression?

3 Is the outline complete?

就可以做到段落上需要的4点：unity, completeness, order,  and coherence

eveningboatUID: 157918

呵呵，楼上的总结得不错

总之aw的逻辑分析最重要，语言倒在其次。

孙檐冰UID: 176432

最初由 earthshell 发布
[B]what a excellent analysis but how you can think all of these when you are writhing in nurvese condition???? however , it is helpful when you practise!@!! [/B]

考试的时候根本没有时间去紧张。

考试的时候脑子里只会有两件事：ETS要我解决什么问题？我要怎么去解决这个问题？然后就是想到什么写什么。在这种状态下是不会有时间去nervous的。毕竟issue只有45分钟，能把自己所想的东西写完就不错了。至于写出来的东西能不能逻辑严密，这就是平时积累的了。平时养成一种说话有条理的习惯，并且对题库里的题目所涉及的内容充分熟悉，在考场上按平时的习惯写就是了。

以上为个人体会，如有雷同，纯属巧合。 :)

Henrry_FFUID: 165187

好文！现在才看到！惭愧惭愧！
对不起IMONG老大了～～～

poohUID: 146994

当时只顾着做题了...