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10. Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.

Aimed to wilderness areas, some people assert that nations should pass laws to protect the rest parts from being used to develop for economic gain from the prospect of nature. Admittedly, we people indeed need to try our best to protect the environment because the destruction of ecosystem could hardly be restored. But it does not means that we must keep the wilderness areas staying there all the time even though which could be used to boost our economic development.

Consider, for example, certain rural areas far from the city, people all live in a hard life because of the less prosperity of economy, but possess amounts of wilderness areas, it would be unwise to restrain the development of economy just for saving the wilderness areas to some extent. More specific, wilderness areas are generally those place with fresh air, clear water, expansive green grass land, and wonderful scene, which are perfectly identical to the longing of urban people. Therefore, building a holiday village on the spare areas to attacking tourists to increase their incomes and improve their lives is a win-win strategy, because the rural individuals could enhance their native economy just by occupying a small part of land and maintain the wilderness areas by part of the money earned from visitors.

In addition, planting traditional Chinese medicinal materials on those wilderness areas also bring us benefits. In other words, people living in nowadays always are not so healthy and strong to support them to accomplish one-day work easily due to the heavily pressure, which means that they need traditional Chinese medicine to help them be more energetic. Thus, people living in wilderness areas could plant some of them to earn money, and it would not be harmful to the land and the environment. For example, people who live in China, Tibet, they plant stigma croci, an expensive herb living in high altitude, which is beneficial to female, a majority people far from Tibet went there for buying it. Obviously, it is an efficient approach which not only improve economical gains but also preserve the wilderness areas.

In sum, nations could develop the economy at the basis of preserving the remaining wilderness areas.