【515特训】豌豆：jorge

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A long period of vacation， or a short rest from heavy study load?（A long-period vocation or a short one rests on heavy study load. ///I don’t know why u use a “?” ） The choice is like(the same as ) the comparison between a big appetite after a long period of hunger and several meals with a proper or moderate amount each. After extensive consideration, I found the short vacations have more priority than the other.  ///表明自己的立场

Short vacations, unlike the long one, are generally less frequent, so they can maintain us at a(an) efficient state. Take the two-day weekend (policy) as an example, the original objective is to free British workers from high-strength laboring with five days long, in turn increasing the overall productivity, which is called "proper work ,proper rest" . The reason is simple: if we know the hard time will not be long before we can enjoy ourselves, we can work with ease, which is regarded as an essential element in enhancing the utility rate of working. // 短假期的好处

However, suppose what will happen if taking a long vacation(s), which will always accompany with much heavier study or work load after a long period of relaxing. Even(even 是副词，不可以连接句子,even though ) we have enjoyed ourselves in(during) the vacation， we are forced to work again. One of the reasons of what (to render)renders it more painful(ly) is that it is difficult to come back to a normal study state quickly. In addition, it is very common that one should not be truly relaxed if he or she is concerned with the unfinished task. /// 长假期的缺点1

The last but not the least important reason to choose the short vacation is that long vacations may bring amounts of by-products .Just to name a few, traffic accidents during a long journey,（and）injuries when climbing the mountain. The most important disadvantages are some health problems resulting from unrestrained drinking or eating during the holiday. One of my friends working in hospital said that the number of patients with dyspepsia remarkably increased after the Spring Festival-a long vacation in China. // 豌豆学医学的，果然医学知识丰富。^_^ 长假期的缺点2

Therefore, three reasons mentioned above can conclude that what we need is（the） short vacations separated by some short days of working periods so that we will "work while we rest".

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费了一个小时才打到这个网页,彻底被病毒打败了,汗。。。。
1。A long period of vacation， or a short rest from heavy study load?（A long-period vocation or a short one rests on heavy study load. ///I don’t know why u use a “?” ）这样子不行吗？只是一个疑问句啊，我觉得比单纯转述的写法好
2。Even(even 是副词，不可以连接句子,even though ) we have enjoyed ourselves in(during) the vacation， we are forced to work again. 难怪语法老做错~~谢谢兔子啦
3。renders it more painful(ly) ，我还是觉得该用painful。
4。最后一段好象短了点，这样没问题吗？
5。语法果然很破。。。。。明天，不，今天再去翻错题。。。
阅读的问题呢？兔子你还没教我哦。。。呵呵呵

报告一下今天的情况：写了篇作文，这次学乖了，首先看过是没考过的，sigh。。。。。
鉴于时间不早了，就不贴了。。兔子，应该没问题吧。
不过还是要说一下这个作文的基本情况的：这次卡在30分钟里面了，但是没时间检查了，写得也暴多，主要是因为话题比较熟悉，接近400了，可想而知，字迹不够清楚，下次注意了，宁可写少一点，留出时间好好检查
还是 老问题，最后一段只有一句话。。。。
关于modern apartmen 和traditional house的问题
提纲列一下：1.开头，用的差不多是摸板 a dilemma。。。。ad 和disad。。。。according to my。。。prefer。。
2.first of all， mordern apartment are generally equipped with advanced establishment in ortder to  provide convenience。举例，配套设施
3.Furthermore， living in a modern apartment gives me much more privacy 举例，个人在四合院的经历
问下，四合院怎么讲啊？找了很多地方都没找到
3.The last but not the least ，living in a modern apartment help define myself an independant individual。
举例，学会独立生活的能力
个人觉得这篇文章倒是写的够丰满，就是长了点，今天会注意了。

真题做了0310的，今天跟你发短信的时候讲错了，8月的题目好象是空缺的。sigh。。
听力：5个 2+1+2，sigh。。。为什么不能每个part都达到我的最佳水平？？？
语法：2个 出离愤怒！全错在前15题，等会儿去看语法笔记
阅读：4个 脸红了。。。。。不过那个什么什么verbal literature 的东西确实绕，再加上刚好那会发短信来着。。。今天尝试了不看全文，发现自己不适合，又费时间错得又多，还是按照我自己的做法吧，先不看文章，指代，词汇，再看全文，做细节，主旨，发现越检查越错，所以，不检查啦。。。呵呵
托福阅读很变态，明明都可以在原文找到答案的，为什么老有错呢？？

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找不到语法笔记了。。。而且不知道为什么错。
(10)Helium is not flammable and ,next to hydrogen ,is......
(a)known the lightest gas
(b)lightest the known gas
(c)the lightest gas known
(d)the known gas lightest
我选了a，答案是c

13.......widely used in the chemical industry, sodium carbonate is principally consumed by the glass industry.
(a)Despite
(b)Whether
(c)Though
(d)Except for
选了a，答案是though，though后面不是应该跟句子吗？

阅读里有几个问题
Europa is the smallest of planet Jupiter’s four largest moons and the second moon
out from Jupiter. Until 1979, it was just another astronomy textbook statistic. Then
came the close-up images obtained by the exploratory spacecraft Voyager 2, and within
days, Europa was transformed-in our perception, at least-into one of the solar system’s
(5)most intriguing worlds. The biggest initial surprise was the almost total lack of detail,
especially from far away. Even at close range, the only visible features are thin, kinked
brown lines resembling cracks in an eggshell. And this analogy is not far off the mark.
The surface of Europa is almost pure water ice, but a nearly complete absence of
  craters indicates that Europa’s surface ice resembles Earth’s Antarctic ice cap. The
(10) eggshell analogy may be quite accurate since the ice could be as little as a few kilometers
thick –a true shell around what is likely a subsurface liquid ocean that , in turn, encases
  a rocky core. The interior of Europa has been kept warm over the eons by tidal forces
  generated by the varying gravitational tugs of the other big moons as they wheel around
  Jupiter. The tides on Europa pull and relax in an endless cycle. The resulting internal heat
(15) keeps what would otherwise be ice melted almost to the surface. The cracklike marks on
  Europa’s icy face appear to be fractures where water or slush oozes from below.
       Soon after Voyager 2’s encounter with Jupiter in 1979, when the best images of
    Europa were obtained, researchers advanced the startling idea that Europa’s subsurface
    ocean might harbor life. Life processes could have begun when Jupiter was releasing a
(20 )vast store of internal heat. Jupiter’s early heat was produced by the compression of the
    material forming the giant planet. Just as the Sun is far less radiant today than the primal
    Sun, so the internal heat generated by Jupiter is minor compared to its former intensity.
    During this warm phase, some 4.6 billion years ago, Europa’s ocean may have been liquid
    right to the surface, making it a crucible for life.

8.  According to the passage, what is the effect of Jupiter’s other large moons on Europa?
(A) They prevent Europa’s subsurface waters from freezing.
(B) They prevent tides that could damage Europa’s surface.
(C) They produce the very hard layer of ice that characterizes Europa.
(D) They assure that the gravitational pull on Europa is maintained at a steady level.

答案是a，我选c，刚好相反，郁闷
The resulting internal heat keeps what would otherwise be ice melted almost to the surface. 意思是保持（本来应该是融化的），那不就是应该ice了》？

Native Americans probably arrived from Asia in successive waves over several
   millennia, crossing a plain hundreds of miles wide that now lies inundated by 160 feet
   of water released by melting glaciers. For several periods of time, the first beginning
   around 60,000 B.C. and the last ending around 7,000 B.C., this land bridge was open. The
(5 )first people traveled in the dusty trails of the animals they hunted. They brought with them
   not only their families, weapons, and tools but also a broad metaphysical understanding,
sprung from dreams and visions and articulated in myth and song, which complemented
their scientific and historical knowledge of the lives of animals and of people. All this they
shaped in a variety of languages, bringing into being oral literatures of power and beauty.     
(10)    Contemporary readers, forgetting the origins of western epic, lyric, and dramatic
forms, are easily disposed to think of “literature” only as something written. But on
reflection it becomes clear that the more critically useful as well as the more frequently employed sense of the term concerns the artfulness of the verbal creation, not its mode of presentation. Ultimately, literature is aesthetically valued, regardless of language, culture,
(15)or mode of presentation, because some significant verbal achievement results from the
   struggle in words between tradition and talent. Verbal art has the ability to shape out a compelling inner vision in some skillfully crafted public verbal form.
       Of course, the differences between the written and oral modes of expression are not without consequences for an understanding of Native American literature. The essential
(20)difference is that a speech event is an evolving communication, an “emergent form,” the  shape, functions, and aesthetic values of which become more clearly realized over the
course of the performance. In performing verbal art , the performer assumes responsibility
   for the manner as well as the content of the performance, while the audience assumes the responsibility for evaluating the performer’s competence in both areas. It is this intense
(25)mutual engagement that elicits the display of skill and shapes the emerging performance.
   Where written literature provides us with a tradition of texts, oral literature offers a
   tradition of performances.
35. What can be inferred about the nature of the Native American literature discussed in the passage?
(A) It reflects historical and contemporary life in Asia.
(B) Its main focus is on daily activities.
(C) It is based primarily on scientific knowledge.
(D) It is reshaped each time it is experienced.  
在文章里面完全找不到。。。。选了个a，答案是d，再找，还是没找到答案

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好长，应该把它拆开来写

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多谢兔子，一回来就帮我解答，呵呵

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阅读今天回来一定看。。昨天看头晕了 :p .....

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(10)Helium is not flammable and ,next to hydrogen ,is......
(a)known the lightest gas
(b)lightest the known gas
(c)the lightest gas known
(d)the known gas lightest
我选了a，答案是c

应该为 is the lightest gas known next to hydrogen. ..

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13.......widely used in the chemical industry, sodium carbonate is principally consumed by the glass industry.
(a)Despite
(b)Whether
(c)Though
(d)Except for
选了a，答案是though，though后面不是应该跟句子吗？

despite 是介词，不能连接两个句子。

though 是连词，可以连接，这里是因为两个句子的主语一样，都是sodium carbonate，省略了。

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03.10

28.The technique of spectroscopy allows (analyst) of incoming light after it (has been )separated into( its) component wavelengths by (passage )through a prism.

d ？？对吗

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这里的passage是名词

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最初由 020729 发布
[B]03.10

28.The technique of spectroscopy allows (analyst) of incoming light after it (has been )separated into( its) component wavelengths by (passage )through..

以下省略...... [/B]

选a吧，呵呵

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今天没完成任务,写了篇作文,做了0401,不过没对答案,说过要翻旧题目的,结果没翻 :( .今天主攻心血管疾病,血流动力学把我搞得有点神经衰弱,sigh.....
虽然没对答案,还是发现有些问题存在
听力,第一次晚上做题目,也就是刚才,走神严重啊

语法,为什么 越做越不顺手了呢?这个问题让我百思不得其解,谁能帮我啊,已经不是出离愤怒,而是很沮丧.....速度做得很慢,但我估计正确率不高,有些题目居然想了一分钟还没想出来

阅读,跟语法的情况一样,今天耐着性子花了50分钟做题目,检查了一遍,改了一题,(不知道有没有改对).在童心的帖子上说过了,失读期,,,imong的方法对我行不通,那对我而言简直就是broken english.

题目做完了,没题目做了,嘿嘿,也好,省得我每天都抽出一个多小时做.
btw,我还没正式模考过,作文是一起床就写,其他的放在另外的时间,答题纸也没见过,想来也不用了吧,又不是小孩子了 :D

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问一个比较八卦的问题,跨区,不知道怎么跨,上次小绿说partb和c都是可以跨的,看题目,这个对我来说很重要,否则做不出来的

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我决定收回我的目标,
改成600 :(

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小家伙，找打。