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发表于 2004-5-4 00:56:20 |只看该作者
题目忘了,大致是有钱是不是成功的意思

Nowadays, there is a trend that public tend to regard rich people as successful ones. However, in my opinion, money is not the only standard to evaluate one's value, followed by several reasons below.

First of all, the ones who possess numerous possession may not be considered to be successful. There are lots of examples to support this point of view. Some corupptional criminals who accumulate fortune by appropriating public property, are spured by common people, not to mention to respect them as models.

From another perspective, people often take other precious characterisics into account in order to estimate if he or she is successful or not, regardless of rich or poor. I would like to take Bill Gates as an instance. Lots of youth admire him as an icon not because he is the richest man in the world, but mainly because of his couragement to drop from Harvad to pursue his own enterprise and perseverance to his own belief. Money, however, is just the external form of his achievement.

Furthermore, people without much money can be deemed as success by populace, even some penniless ones. To prove this point, the image of Mother Terasa emerges, who won the Nobel Peace Prize for her kindness to hundreds and thousands of poors living in India.She was so poor that she had to persuade the government to fund the nunnery Undoubtedly, she is successful in the field of maintaining the wouldwide peace.

Combined with the reasons mentioned above, the conclusion can be drawn: successful men are not defined by his possession ,but by his contribution to the whole society.

实在是好困,偷工减料了一段,是阐述最后一段里什么叫contribution to the whole society的.
原文还是太长,350多了,不过比昨天那篇400的有进步, :D
写作文的一个很大体会是:以前背的gre单词全都忘了,,希望靠这段时间能很快捡起来 :)
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发表于 2004-5-4 00:57:41 |只看该作者
兔子兔子,象招魂.....
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发表于 2004-5-4 15:06:48 |只看该作者
今天做了0308,发现忘做了这套题目
听力部分的错误放到鱼儿的帖子上了,语法错2,阅读错4
12.        At its center, the sun has a density of over a hundred times _________ and a temperature of 10 to 20 million degrees centigrade.
(A)        that of water
(B)        of water
(C)        than that of water
(D)        water

选了c,答案是a
比较级的用法,(如果这个是比较级的考点)总是出错,比如说twice,多少times等的位置问题

33.        The feathers of birds [U]not only [/U]  protect their skin from injury and conserve [U]body heat,[/U]  but also
                   A                                        B
[U]function[/U]  in flight, courtship, camouflage, and sensory [U]perceptive[/U] .
  C                                           D
选了b,当时就很心虚,实在找不出来,就选了b,因为隐约记得body前面要加the的
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发表于 2004-5-4 15:49:22 |只看该作者
今天把0401,0301的听力再听了一遍,0301倒是全对了,不过毕竟是已经做过的..
0401的问题还是很多,真是奇怪了,明明听着是这样的,答案却出乎意料,头晕了,闪人
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发表于 2004-5-4 18:31:19 |只看该作者
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[B]我决定收回我的目标,
改成600 :( [/B]


今天有点忙,不过看到你说的这话,给你打打气。

相信你能达到 630 的。。 :p
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发表于 2004-5-4 22:47:27 |只看该作者
问下,四合院怎么讲啊?找了很多地方都没找到

是否可以用 chinese courtyard house  ??

不过,尽量用熟悉的词语吧 :)
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发表于 2004-5-4 22:56:40 |只看该作者
12. At its center, the sun has a density of over a hundred times _________ and a temperature of 10 to 20 million degrees centigrade.
(A) that of water
(B) of water
(C) than that of water
(D) water

比较级  time , eg,, 1 I am three times as old as you ...2 i am twice older than you ..3 .i am three times the age of you.  4 My age is three times that of yours

所以,应该选择 a  ...... a hundred times that of water..
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发表于 2004-5-4 23:02:03 |只看该作者
33. The feathers of birds not only protect their skin from injury and conserve body heat, but also
A B
function in flight, courtship, camouflage, and sensory perceptive .
C D
选了b,当时就很心虚,实在找不出来,就选了b,因为隐约记得body前面要加the的

and 连接的应该为同词性等。。所以 应该为 sensory perceptive .--》sensory perception
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发表于 2004-5-4 23:04:39 |只看该作者
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[B]今天把0401,0301的听力再听了一遍,0301倒是全对了,不过毕竟是已经做过的..
0401的问题还是很多,真是奇怪了,明明听着是这样的,答案却出乎意料,头晕了,闪人 [/B]


不知道你用的是什么的听力文件? 估计保持这个状态,在考场上会好很多。 :p:p 不怕不怕。。
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发表于 2004-5-4 23:15:12 |只看该作者
. According to the passage, what is the effect of Jupiter’s other large moons on Europa?
(A) They prevent Europa’s subsurface waters from freezing.
(B) They prevent tides that could damage Europa’s surface.
(C) They produce the very hard layer of ice that characterizes Europa.
(D) They assure that the gravitational pull on Europa is maintained at a steady level.

答案是a,我选c,刚好相反,郁闷
The resulting internal heat keeps what would otherwise be ice melted almost to the surface. 意思是保持(本来应该是融化的),那不就是应该ice了》?

The interior of Europa has been kept warm over the eons by tidal forces
generated by the varying gravitational tugs of the other big moons as they wheel around    Jupiter.  
所以,,表达的意思是 选项 A...
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发表于 2004-5-4 23:40:18 |只看该作者
35. What can be inferred about the nature of the Native American literature discussed in the passage?
(A) It reflects historical and contemporary life in Asia.
(B) Its main focus is on daily activities.
(C) It is based primarily on scientific knowledge.
(D) It is reshaped each time it is experienced.
在文章里面完全找不到。。。。选了个a,答案是d,再找,还是没找到答案

It is this intense mutual engagement that elicits the display of skill and shapes the emerging performance. ...

我觉得 a,b,c ,都没太提到。。
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发表于 2004-5-5 15:42:44 |只看该作者
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[B]12. At its center, the sun has a density of over a hundred times _________ and a temperature of 10 to 20 million degrees centigrade.
(A) that of water
(B) of..

以下省略...... [/B]



经典! :D
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发表于 2004-5-5 15:44:45 |只看该作者
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[B]33. The feathers of birds not only protect their skin from injury and conserve body heat, but also
A B
function in flight, courtship, camouflage, and sensory..

以下省略...... [/B]


汗。。。看错了,以为是perspective。。。。
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发表于 2004-5-5 16:15:16 |只看该作者
今天上来看到昨天做的0308有好多人讨论,也替我解释了几个有疑问的地方, :D 加上今天天气好好,所以就心情不错。

昨天晚上有写作文,感觉比较顺手,不知道是题目的缘故还是自己有长进,(臭屁一下 :D ),题目是It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

可能在你们社区内建一所高中。你同意还是反对,详细阐述原因。

看了精华区的分类和范文,帮助很大的说,今天继续看。 ;)

左思右想,觉得自己在语法方面的潜力最大,而且就数它扣分最重要,所以打算主攻语法了。发现兔子你对语法研究得比较透彻,以后就把语法扔上来问了

至于听力,每天虽然也听,不过都是睡前听,当成催眠了 :( ,今天开始注意了,前段时间猛听得我差点失聪的魔鬼训练法还是很有用的。

走了,按照分类法写作文,兔子你这么忙就不把作文贴出来了 :rolleyes:
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发表于 2004-5-5 18:13:48 |只看该作者
我觉得豌豆的作文写得很好噢
真羡慕啊。。。
你怎么练的阿
我每次都担心用词和句型。。。
结果不是超时,就是写得很烂
没几天了。。。怎么办啊!!!
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分类作文是沙阿?

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