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Sonnet of Snow

The azure Elysium shines the alabaster vision.

The purest hue of a chaste virgin.

Celebrating the wedding of the earth and heaven,

Cherubs shake the feathers of the wings.

God bestows the gifts glittering in glimmer,

Making the secular land a new appearance.

With the bleak wind accompanied my laughter,

Floating everywhere to express my ebullience.

Give my everlasting enthusiasm to thee,

The immaculate flakes, the soul of love.

Devoting myself to get a chance to see,

Ascending the evaporated spirit to the constellation above.

Rivers of tears for thy evanescent life,

Again thou art back to the sky.




SONNET

Crawling sun beholds our detention in jail,

Suffering innocents pray sincerely that anyone could hear.

Same purgatorial days under the summer hail,

Tolerating prisoners howl hysterically but receive no care.

God! We sing the holy anthem with laughters,

Bitter tears come out and form just one tone;

God! If thou consider us elites as sinners,

Then who can be the one to cast the first stone?

In the caged crowd victims drifting,

To find the salvation and escape from this Abyss;

In the collapsed Eden disciples rambling,

To pay the redemption and get back the heaven we miss.

So long as the calamities and plagues on our road,

So long lives the tomorrow, and the long way to go!




I wrote this two poems last year. And it was my first try to wite poems in English.
Share them with everyone here.
And I wish u would like them.
Ghost
Ravine
Elite

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发表于 2004-5-28 21:27:24 |只看该作者
encourage!
There is nothing lost

That may be found

If sought

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发表于 2004-5-29 05:27:00 |只看该作者
cool~~

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发表于 2004-5-31 16:05:24 |只看该作者
Not bad!
It is always great to be at home!!!

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Hmmmm... much easier than Shakespeare's Sonnates! Even now, I can still remember the vacant expression on our faces when we were running the Literature Course at our second year of college... :(
Whistling softly in the dark
Is a better cure than anything
For a confused mind searching for an answer

Whistling loudly enough to drown out that little voice inside your head
Is a better way than any other
To prevent miscommunication of feelings

Whistling quickly for a dog
Is a necessary task
If you wish to be a best friend in return

And whistling a tune all your own
Is the only way
To survive this life in one piece

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发表于 2004-6-1 15:46:35 |只看该作者
sorry, can't get it, too abstract....never put myself in love poem
my never falling friends are they
with whom i converse day by day
with them i take delight in weal
and seek relief in woe

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发表于 2004-6-1 19:17:14 |只看该作者
.....too much for me!.....sigh.....

From the moment of falling down breezily
fails to know that
it is just a ornament of winter
At the very moment of touching the bosom of spacious ground
feels the giant and wide

Spring is coming again
seeking for the truth of life
then hopes forever
to hold the warmth in the trice in the sun
and raises its hopes again
.......

what a bullshit!!!

2005/02/19


=========华丽的分割线=========


2007/11/22
偶的密码改了。改成连偶自己也不知道的密码。偶logout了。所以,从这天开始,这个ID就算是自封了。成为完全的过去式。很好。
两年前的某人的生日之日,偶决定停用这个号。到此时,其间有反复。两年后的又一个某人的生日之日,偶决定自封此号,这次可是想反复也不能够,甚好。
不是喜好。只是状态。想改变。
过去的仍然存在。如此而已。

某两人,看偶多喜欢你们啊^_^

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