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The two maps illustrate the change of the same island before and after the building of some tourist facilities.
As you can see at the one before construction ,it was an isolated island which is surrounded with sea. It does not show a variety of plants were on the island. Actually, there were only few coconut trees. While majority of them were growing in the east of island, three of them were in the west where the western beach is near it
When looking  at the second map, the layout has been changed a lot indeed after the construction. First of all, It was introduced a pier towards the south-east. As you may image, it is the location where guests are able to take water transportations as well as go for a sailing. Along with vehicle track, you can see a reception center and a restaurant which is just behind the reception room. Furthermore, on the left of the reception six lovely bungalows had been built around three coconut trees. And there are footpaths to each bungalow. Therefore, it is easy for guests  to find way to their rooms. Compared with the rooms in the west area, there are more accommodation in the west. It is worth mentioning guests can swim in the western beach now.
Overall, it is glad to see this island has been designed as a wonderful resort containing facilities and activities. It will attract tourists, there is no much change on plants layout though.

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