[追星剑特训]Chapter3.2 Practice B 综合练习

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[追星剑特训]Chapter3.2 Practice B 综合练习

issue14. "It is necessary for everyone to read poetry, novels, mythology and other types of imaginative literature."

issue71. "Spending time alone makes one a better companion to others."

issue125. "The past is no predictor of the future."

issue182. "It is dangerous to trust only intelligence."

没有什么更多的导言。

几道题的话不像1+1那样入手方便了，题干本身就只是结论句。就着这几道题大家来讨论一下破题方面的挖掘。现在已经都是实际练习了。不妨写写看。

so猫UID: 148633

roger that~~~

lakeqianUID: 157560

顶~~~

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仔细想一下，明天在讨论

yeyedogUID: 125746

issue 14
第一，说明imaginative books的作用，（为了凑字，写多了，败笔。）
第二，说明imaginative book-->imagination which在science中的作用
第三，在现实生活的作用，爱生活，爱拉芳（呃，错了，是爱想象）
自我点评，没太大深度，写实看错了表，写的很快，语言没发挥，结构也乱了，结果544字，郁闷阿，我只要求写490字就好啦。
Is it necessary for everyone to read imaginative books as speaker asserted? I think so. Reading book makes us wise as practice makes us healthy. As to imaginative books, they definitely advance our imagination which is increasingly important in a technical progress leading society.

Books are divided into many sorts, like history fiction, novels, poetry, biography and so on. People select differently according to their particular interests and their professions, and similarly, different books can usher people in a diverse magic world. For example, people who like to read history fiction are intent to scoop the knowledge from bygone era in that they can avoid to relapse and to repeat mistakes. After all, you always can find something valuable in the landfill of history. While people who tent to read biography books are those ambitious person and enterprising manager; they wish they succeed in their domain and make their fortunate, so for those people; a biography of celebrities is indeed the apple in their eyes. Last, imaginative books are provocative, vivid; they quicken reader's thinking, stimulate them to use illusion and stretch their ideas and viewpoints to forward something bizarre and grotesque.

In addition, imaginative are elevated within modern society, wherein imaginative is regard as fuel to compel the advances of science. Also in many businesses, the imagination considers one of most significant culture of a corporation. I remember one of a famous biochemist once said" In my spare time, I intent to sit in my garden and just look my narcissus flowers. Naturally, I like to read a book, a scientific fiction, of course, which always quickens my thought and not at all boring. To tell the truth, I get many ideas from Horry Potter." Obviously, scientific discoveries and inventions are almost sprung from bizarre thought or passion evoking by imaginative books, films, or stories. Then almost scientific advances are afterthought. If without the imaginative books which are stimulating and provocative whenever you open its pages, the science wills no fuel to advance.

Another support is that when you look in the top 10 of most best-sell books, in all likelihood, you can find some imaginative books such as Dr. sucess, Harry Potter, and The Lord of Rings are ranged on the upper. The fact tells me that imaginative readings are more and more popular in our time. Probably, people are aware of the absences of imagination. Illusion can be used in daily life and I think life will be better if you truly intent to revise it with illusion. Imagine wearing like Harry Potter, you and your family are barbecue on the roof; putting the Mickey Mouse up to you bed, the night you will find more beautiful and jovial than usual; moreover, to kiss you kids with a exaggerative and comic posture, you and your kids will feel comfortable and yours kid probably said "Dad, you are cartoon monster, I love you." Do this, and the life will not pale and dull as before. Why not add the illusion into your life and daily work if you love your life and occupation.

To sum up, for everyone, both in your life and research work, it is necessary to nourish your illusion and imagination. That is to say, reading more imaginative books!（544words）

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怎么交到这里了?
楼上的同学
另开个帖子发
要不交这里大家看不到

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啊，imong说14题还要结合艺术背景？郁闷，我的思路：



                            impact on sciense
imaginative book--> imagination -->                               ---->everyone need!
                                                        impact on daily life


is it simple, huh?

imongUID: 140258

okay，看来和我当初的预计不太一样......这个思路seems蛮有道理的说（如果这样就好办了~）

我回来时候看看。还是单开一个帖子发文章吧。

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先占个位

yeyedogUID: 125746

思路seems蛮有道理的说（如果这样就好办了~）



怎么走题了吗？

下次换地发。OK

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Is it necessary for everyone to read imaginative books as speaker asserted? I think so. Reading book makes us wise as practice makes us healthy. As to imaginative books, they definitely advance our imagination which is increasingly important in a technical progress leading society.

Books are divided into many sorts（fall into many categories?）, like history fiction, novels, poetry, biography and so on. People select differently according to their particular interests and their professions, and similarly, different books can usher people in a diverse magic world. For example, people who like to read history fiction are intent to scoop the knowledge from bygone era in that they can avoid to relapse and to repeat mistakes. After all, you （用第三人称）always can find something valuable in the landfill of history. While people who tent to read biography books are those ambitious person and enterprising manager; they wish they succeed in their domain and make their fortunate, so for those people; a biography of celebrities is indeed the apple in their eyes. Last（为啥很突兀来了个last？）, imaginative books are provocative, vivid; they quicken reader's thinking, stimulate them to use illusion and stretch their ideas and viewpoints to forward something bizarre and grotesque.（这一段有没有一个central idea？）

In addition, imaginative are elevated within modern society, wherein imaginative is regard as fuel to compel the advances of science. Also in many businesses, the imagination considers one of most significant culture of a corporation. I remember one of a famous biochemist once said" In my spare time, I intent to sit in my garden and just look my narcissus flowers. Naturally, I like to read a book, a scientific fiction, of course, which always quickens my thought and not at all boring. To tell the truth, I get many ideas from Horry Potter." Obviously, scientific discoveries and inventions are almost sprung from bizarre thought or passion evoking by imaginative books, films, or stories. Then almost scientific advances are afterthought. If without the imaginative books which are stimulating and provocative whenever you open its pages, the science wills no fuel to advance.

Another support is that when you look in the top 10 of most best-sell books, in all likelihood, you can find some imaginative books such as Dr. sucess, Harry Potter, and The Lord of Rings are ranged on the upper. The fact tells me that imaginative readings are more and more popular in our time. Probably, people are aware of the absences of imagination. Illusion can be used in daily life and I think life will be better if you truly intent to revise it with illusion. Imagine wearing like Harry Potter, you and your family are barbecue on the roof; putting the Mickey Mouse up to you bed, the night you will find more beautiful and jovial than usual; moreover, to kiss you kids with a exaggerative and comic posture, you and your kids will feel comfortable and yours kid probably said "Dad, you are cartoon monster, I love you." Do this, and the life will not pale and dull as before. Why not add the illusion into your life and daily work if you love your life and occupation.

To sum up, for everyone, both in your life and research work, it is necessary to nourish your illusion and imagination. That is to say, reading more imaginative books!（544words）

（汗，对这篇文章没什么评语的说......觉得蛮诡异了。

从常规的思路出发，如果光是b1和b2的话，b1应当强调你的last作为整个段落的中心进行阐述，imaginative books对培养imagination的作用。而你的b1似乎很凌乱缺乏中心，而b2是在b1的基础上。b3的话我觉得未免实在诡异，因为popular所以necessary？还是因为什么？仍然没看出来中心idea.

学习一下TS方面的写作元素。看来这篇文章恐怕还是不那么好写的。）

yeyedogUID: 125746

谢谢，imong老大，你的意见很中肯。
我下去好好总结一下，看来还得加大力度。