如何让托福作文与众不同?

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1. 发展变化类：
The biggest change comes from Ms Merkel’s “open door” policy towards refugees, which brought in 1.2m new migrants in 2015-16. This has confirmed once-homogeneous Germany’s transformation into a melting-pot.
我们在自己写作中，在表达变化的时候很少会使用come from 这个词组，上面这句话的大概意思是这是政策带来的巨大的变化，并且在2015到2016年期间使得移民人数增加了1.2m,也使得德国从一个单一的国家变成了一个种族大熔炉。那么，这句话怎么样应用到我们自己的写作中呢。

比如，在科技类的作文开头段背景描述的时候我们就可以写：
The biggest change comes from the advent of AI technology, which is vital to everything from digital assistants to self-dirving cars. This has confirmed human-oriented society’s transformation into a smart era.

2. 问题原因类
The asymmetry in knowledge between undertaker and grief-stricken client allows ludicrous markups on things like coffins. It also makes it easier to sell services that people do not realise are mostly unnecessary, such as embalming.
这个句子摘自一篇讲丧葬行业垄断的文章，上面的这句话的大意是由于承办人和客户之间信息的不对称使得棺材这些东西可以进行荒唐的涨价，他们也经常会给客户附加一些不必要的服务，但是客户他们自己并不知情。

在写到关于广告类的文章的时候我们就可以这么进行应用：
The asymmetry in knowledge between advertisers and buyers allows exaggerated reports on functions of commodities. It also makes it easier to sell products that people do not realize are mostly unnecessary.

3.观点表达
Challenged on whether high-growth entrepreneurship can really be spread like jam across America, Mr Case acknowledges there is value to clustering.
这句话的意思是有人质疑高成长创业公司是否真的能在美国遍地开花，Mr Case认为此种创业确实有好处。在开头段表达自己观点的时候我们就可以借用此句话，比如，在讨论电脑游戏是否危害孩子的时候我们就可以这么写：

Challenged on whether playing computer games can really backfire on children themselves, I deem they will jeopardise children’s growth.

4. 描述人或事物
Imperious on the outside, inside they may worry about obsolescence and regulation.
他们外表看起来不可一世，内心可能担心遭到淘汰或遭遇监管问题。在口语或者写作时，我们描述一个人的时候就可以使用该句式。比如描述他外表看起来很镇静，但是其实已经吓尿了，就可以这么写：
Imperious/clam on the outside, inside she has been freaked out.
同样，我们的描述事物的时候也可以使用，
Exquisite on the outside, inside the product is common.

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写得真好 我gre166+170 两次作文都是3 托福过两天考很虚

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