issue 1

shenbaobaoUID: 182532

各位斑竹以及前辈们，大家好，我是新来的，刚写了生平第一篇GRE作文，四个小时，490个字，麻烦大家多多帮忙，帮我改改，多谢。顺便问，为什么我不能在issue 习作区发贴呢？
issue 1、"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people

whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."


Many people think that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than

from people whose views contradict to our own. In my opinion, however, it is hard to say so.

When we retrospect the way that our knowledge and thoughts have come into being, we will

find that, besides learning from teachers in schools, we are always imitating and learning

from our parents, friends and other people either share or contradict our views.

Admittedly, it is always easy and happy for us to learn much more from people whose views we

share than those views contradict ours. people who share our views can give us more

confidence and enhancement of communication. When we share views with someone, we are always

satisfied and encouraged. Thus, we are willing to discuss with others and ready to listen to

others. When we find our views have some difference compared with others, we are likely to

think over it and to selectively accept the new ideas which can improve or compensate the

flaw of our own. Such kind of comparison help us to collect our thoughts and thus to think

and learn more maturely. Moreover, sharing views help us to find spiritual friends who can  
share the joy from success and the sadness from frustration.

Simply put, without people who contradict our views, we are in danger that our minds and

thoughts will become narrower and narrower. If we only accept the ideas from people who

share our views, we will lose a lot of chance of self-development. People are always think

themselves are the most correct while others are more or less wrong if the views are not

unanimous. By think so, we will tend to come into being the blindfold self-confidence, which

hampers our progress in study rather than improves us.

Like sharing views, contradicting views also help us to see the flaw of our own point of

views, enabling us to improve our understanding and to find the friends who can share the

pleasure and harvest from argumentation. People who have contradicting views sometimes can

notice the problems which people have sharing views and ourselves have been ignored and give

us the new ideas, which maybe the key points of our views.

However, on the contrary, Only may contradicting views provide us with alternative

perspectives to see problems, which is useful in a multicultural world. Since thought of

individual is always limited, people can not think over all aspects of problems. To think

about problems with different perspectives can compensate the limitation. By communicating

with people who contradict us, we may open new ways to our mind and thus become more open-

minded and considerate.

In sum, without sharing views, we will probably lose confidence and feel discouraged;

without contradicting views, we will have blindfold confidence and narrower mind. Thus, only

should we rational analyze both sharing views and contradicting views, can we learn much

more from other people.

dezhiUID: 156141

看看这个
https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=208286

genie05UID: 30358

10月17注册？嘿嘿。
发贴的时候注意格式 ，还有就是发完以后再看看，你的那个方法，别人看着很难受的

huahunUID: 111552

10月17注册？嘿嘿，嘿嘿

最初由 genie05 发布
[B]10月17注册？嘿嘿。
发贴的时候注意格式 ，还有就是发完以后再看看，你的那个方法，别人看着很难受的 [/B]

shenbaobaoUID: 182532

issue 1、"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."
提纲：disagree
1 Admittedly, people who share our views can give us more confidence and enhancement of communication.
2 Simply put, without people who contradict our views, we are in danger that our minds and thoughts will become narrower and narrower.
3 Contradicting views provide us with alternative perspectives to see problems, which is useful in a multicultural world.
4 Only should we rational analyze both sharing views and contradicting views, can we learn much more from other people.

Many people think that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict to our own. In my opinion, however, it is hard to say so. When we retrospect the way that our knowledge and thoughts have come into being, we will find that, besides learning from teachers in schools, we are always imitating and learning from our parents, friends and other people either share or contradict our views.

Admittedly, it is always easy and happy for us to learn much more from people whose views we share than those views contradict ours. People who share our views can give us more confidence and enhancement of communication. When we share views with someone, we are always satisfied and encouraged. Thus, we are willing to discuss with others and ready to listen to others. When we find our views have some difference compared with others, we are likely to think over it and to selectively accept the new ideas which can improve or compensate the flaw of our own. Such kind of comparison help us to collect our thoughts and thus to think and learn more maturely. Moreover, sharing views help us to find spiritual friends who can share the joy from success and the sadness from frustration.

Simply put, without people who contradict our views, we are in danger that our minds and thoughts will become narrower and narrower. If we only accept the ideas from people who share our views, we will lose a lot of chance of self-development. People are always think themselves are the most correct while others are more or less wrong if the views are not unanimous. By think so, we will tend to come into being the blindfold self-confidence, which hampers our progress in study rather than improves us.

Like sharing views, contradicting views also help us to see the flaw of our own point of views, enabling us to improve our understanding and to find the friends who can share the pleasure and harvest from argumentation. People who have contradicting views sometimes can notice the problems which people have sharing views and ourselves have been ignored and give us the new ideas, which maybe the key points of our views.

However, on the contrary, Only may contradicting views provide us with alternative perspectives to see problems, which is useful in a multicultural world. Since thought of individual is always limited, people can not think over all aspects of problems. To think about problems with different perspectives can compensate the limitation. By communicating with people who contradict us, we may open new ways to our mind and thus become more open-minded and considerate.

In sum, without sharing views, we will probably lose confidence and feel discouraged; without contradicting views, we will have blindfold confidence and narrower mind. Thus, only should we rational analyze both sharing views and contradicting views, can we learn much more from other people.

shenbaobaoUID: 182532

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