日本PHD申请套磁未回复，求各路大神帮忙分析！

neurotic_to_the_boneUID: 3985331

本人本硕211/985，专业是环境艺术设计—景观设计相关，TOFEL101,本科GPA3.42 硕3.4。目前在深圳某设计院已工作一年。PHD预申请东工大、北大、阪大、九州大等院校（最好是SGU项目）。给这些院校心仪的四五个老师陆续发了邮件（并附上个人CV和作品集），一星期过去了，都迟迟未得到回复，邮件通知里显示的是已读 ，并且有的教授是一上午打开了六次我的邮件，也没有什么消息…

请问现在这个套磁时间是不太对吗？我没有在信件里说想要入学的时间，因为我都OK的。只是询问有没有open position。 下附套磁信件，望各路大神帮忙指点分析，感激不尽！！！

Dear Professor XX,

Good day.

My name isXXX, I graduated fromXX, and obtained my Master Degree in XX. Now I'm working as a landscape designer in a design company named XX. My TOEFL score is 101, and my Japanese learning is ongoing. I write this letter to inquire whether there is an open position as a Ph.D. student available in your research group.

After reviewing your laboratory website, your research aboutXX deeply attract me, especially XX, which it's also my most interested field. It's clear to see the humanistic meaning and the urban cultural context you have expressed in your research. Your research experience in this field is really respectable. As an environmental art design-majored student and an urban landscape designer, I'm always passionate about doing spatial studies based on the understanding of urbanism and present social issues. I believe that there would be a good fit between your research experience and mine. So I write to you to see whether there is any chance for me to work under your supervision in the future.

My CV and portfolio are attached, and you can also find my portfolio on XX

Thank you for reading this letter, looking forward to hearing from you and discuss further issues with you later.  

All the wishes!

leila桑UID: 3561322

两点建议：
1. 套磁email中间部分最好多说下你自己的研究计划和方向，不用一味地说教授的方向怎么吸引你，教授在意的是你的研究计划和方向是否和他的是匹配的，才能指导你；
2. 附件最好附上成绩单、托福、CV和作品集还有research proposal
据我所知，SGU项目教授回复的周期差不多就是一周左右，希望以上建议对你有所帮助，祝好运~

neurotic_to_the_boneUID: 3985331

leila桑 发表于 2019-8-21 10:06
两点建议：
1. 套磁email中间部分最好多说下你自己的研究计划和方向，不用一味地说教授的方向怎么吸引你， ...

感谢指点！这些信息对我来说十分有帮助，我会进行修改的。再次感谢啦！

jackyryanUID: 3975803

MARK一下 自己也要申请hh

珊瑚礁海中散步UID: 3816331

不知道楼主套磁结果怎么样了
个人建议是只附简历和作品集就够了 研究计划什么的写起来太麻烦了 不适用与第一回套磁
同时可以着重阐述下你自己的研究方向

祝好~