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针对MBA申请中的重点ESSAY文章做的文书用语模板总结。
2 d3 |( m* P# a! a# A在我两个月前的奖学金申请经验的用语栏目的改进版本。
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归纳于Business Week, EEC等会员区的美国和加国的顶级商学院录取者
! b2 r) k6 C2 R的申请文书。涵盖了商学院最常见的重点论题。希望本文可以帮助
7 @/ r) ^2 b" i$ q* J非英语母语的申请者也写出动人流畅的申请文书, 展现自己光辉的一面。- w! \8 x+ R# L, c
在商学院奖学金的申请道路上和大家共勉。
2 U& y  x* P$ Y' s5 ?8 R% k3 C- A; K欢迎和我交朋友   MY MSN:  finance@cegw.com$ r3 ^) X# X; c( X/ o1 H( O% Z

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            目录3 b, M- S0 p# D7 o% T' H
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1. 职业规划与攻读MBA的动机
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    1.1 Career Goal and Why MBA
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4 e% @% x! P7 |# F# V# r    1.3 Why our School4 e/ ^8 q, y" p& M
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2. 职业背景与职业素质
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    2.1 Professional Background+ c2 C) K, z& q9 A: Z
    2.2 Academic Background2 h" ~1 P# S% g- l; c' [
    2.3 Leadership
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    2.5 Challenges and Lessons Learned% y( L+ j: K9 f3 ^$ ^8 y, a5 J

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    3.1 Study Plans in the Program
# m2 B; w' j: J1 Q" Z# U. u& h    3.2 Contribution to Classroom
+ u5 |% m3 w0 _5 r- U- }# |* Q    3.3 Diversity and Other Qualifications
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1. 职业规划与选择MBA的原因9 b8 M" L' V  Y" e

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This ______ reveals that while I have a strong background with respect to
3 h, t: p" @* ~2 w! L2 z: fleadership and management skill sets, I do not have a ______ knowledge + E& B. y# F  v! f* a. m
base in the field of ______ . My past successes8 f8 T( w3 ~6 y1 k* U7 z
have been that result of effective employment of my ______ expertise in ______
' V" R5 f1 N* [' Z* R) f& xand my leadership, management and team building skills.
, Q" h2 Y  Y% LFrom a ______ expertise or functional knowledge point of view, these experiences
8 l8 a" l/ m6 _8 q$ y5 Wand successes have little or no relation to neither ______ nor ______
' q( }( T2 Y2 n$ a: i) n: Emanagement. This is a significant problem if I am to realize my career goals. + J9 q/ h: A+ U5 f9 J6 p4 j( T
Now that I have identified the major roadblock to realizing my career goals . I- l+ }( [& Q$ \+ T
what do I do next?& [3 w4 N% u" [. |2 {. B
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I have developed a strong knowledge in the ______ and ______ through my
$ ~& l: \7 E* Oeducation and my work experience as a ______ .
" ]8 z+ S9 {  U! S+ F: PThrough this experience, I have also acquired excellent problem solving,
* s: T. b8 l8 H0 ointegrative, interpersonal, and communication skills.# L2 R, K8 ~% M9 e: v
I believe that at this point in my life, these skills will allow me to realise/ Z% O: E; K$ o) b/ m7 W
the maximum educational benefit from the ______ MBA.
" Z, \, P; a0 RThis combination of scientific experience and business training will help me to( f; o# G5 Y& N* t* i8 s
make an informed and influential contribution to ______ ." U9 l% B4 g6 \7 z/ G& ^

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6 [5 g& r7 g. n6 R3 e0 OI recognize the need to improve in many areas, especially as my responsibilities
" w: m2 }/ Y2 Erequire me to combine my both of my ______ and ______ skills and
6 I- W) e/ j/ C( \5 h1 e+ f* S[interact with functional organizations outside of technical and engineering
9 L( Q3 f; L7 }development, such as marketing and finance].
6 e; F' o" }: \9 z( PAs I interact with other functional organizations within ______ ,+ f: V8 b2 Q0 a
I realize I can better contribute in a collaborative environment if I have a" w& Q7 v8 A6 A. U5 D5 M$ C) R
more thorough understanding of their needs and how these organizations run.& Q5 q1 [+ Z# D0 x

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My primary career goal is to ______.
; L2 x3 L) Z! m% {  @3 nPrior to this I will complete an MBA in order to acquire the additional
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successful entrepreneur and businessman., H) O3 }8 k, f

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( ]+ _' o" j3 P( p  d4 t3 q0 i/ ]  p2 EI have chosen to apply to ______ because the strength and quality of both its
0 }9 h0 l) A6 E& t9 M9 _overall MBA program and its ______ concentration will provide the knowledge,% i" V. E1 [( h4 g  ~6 y' a7 g1 Y
skill building and team experiences needed to achieve these goals.$ S! h8 b% f. s4 O
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4 d! q- Y* |, f" @The prospect of ______ is one of the key elements that attracted me to pursue a  g9 |7 _) G; u' E
______ combination/major.
5 K9 |( g- R- F/ s/ B6 XI look forward to working with other students from diverse academic backgrounds.
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# l, V$ O* y6 D; l( w5 g0 ?* OManaging ______ for a ______ in the short-term, and starting an ______ company) U  Z- K( I  c2 j4 `" \2 v/ @
in the long-term. I know what I need to achieve these goals: an MBA.. q/ K2 E' B" Q
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5 `2 {. E' W8 GMy ideal position would combine the strategic elements of ______, ______ and
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A key role requiring a wide knowledge base and one that would stretch me to
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& }  ~- s& s1 Y2 ]A ______ EMBA will build on my experience, and enable me to reach my goals.
: U7 u2 N$ A& j: @% y/ gEvery aspect of my ______ education will be essential in helping me achieve this- J! P! f# ]+ ?
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beginning with my selection of ______ as my primary concentration., H# B5 G+ D7 B' T! d. m

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As I look forward to a profession of combining my ______ background
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, \" q; p/ ], {8 W; F# yGeneral Highlights.
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Continuing my education will give me the opportunity to receive formal and
" a/ `. I3 [3 {( {$ s7 Finformal training from faculty, guest speakers and fellow students that would be very ' A1 G* V' X4 I$ o
difficult to receive outside of a university setting.0 T) F$ M: _/ ?* S  P9 R7 k5 x
In addition to learning new management strategies,2 p3 y5 Y3 u' }3 o( D$ d; F
I will have the opportunity to learn from the faculty and students about their& ]6 @6 w( u- P$ R1 _
perspectives on current issues in the business world.8 G5 o2 Q+ a. f& l
I will also have the opportunity to practice my team management skills as I
/ w# z2 K7 T) `; o' V. Lpartner with other students in case studies,
: w+ v& e. A2 i  g, G. u/ f" ~0 Asimulations and other team projects.. \: Q' [; q& F" m6 |. H! Z/ i

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Networking with students and faculty from different disciplines and industries
+ M' a! ?* m% q8 a) o  N7 wwill provide me with the opportunity to learn more about the business world in
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1 v1 _* W6 v5 Q) G4 D5 ZSharing different perspectives as we address issues in the classroom will help  v' t' E6 h$ J! i% f& j
to expand my understanding of the different roles within our respective
7 ?3 H  Q4 t8 `+ j3 B# V/ Ecompanies and the roles of our companies in the overall economy.2 [- y% J( H7 m' k3 F8 n
In addition, these relationships could provide an ongoing resource to compare
: u' t& r2 y; R6 ~( S( rdeveloping issues in our businesses.
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9 c( ?# e+ J7 D/ F+ |# NI am applying for an MBA precisely because I would like to develop my knowledge
* ], b& G8 v5 p- K0 \0 }and skills in other organizational functions.( d4 \, g/ L) N) @1 B) U. H
Learning and understanding the various cross-functional aspects of running a
5 ^' u! S2 x( {% F# ebusiness is a major part of my overall career plan to become a CEO of my own% ^; Y& _1 G& E/ K$ D5 H7 {* f
corporation one day.! ?4 }( @8 V* t9 I

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An MBA program will help me achieve my goals by providing me with the# i4 X$ Y1 z, [7 K: e- z1 Q
opportunity to continue my formal education, network with students from different - m1 j$ @+ u! g7 {' Y* C4 K
disciplines and compare current business practices with people from other professional ! K" z4 f4 v# u2 n% n! e# ]; S
environments.
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An MBA will also show the level of commitment I have to my professional growth6 c7 \+ I9 ^5 I  [/ i0 V; k5 T
and will be recognized by my peers as an additional set of skills and" ?9 X! f2 M8 t9 i
experiences that I could bring to the company.
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Classroom and team settings will also provide the opportunity to compare and5 o- U  {6 s3 {# }
contrast different managerial styles,/ `0 I) M- N( g) l% |4 U
decision-making processes and business practices.
- f. ]& ?3 d0 k9 x; LAs each student brings his or her unique perspective and business practices to
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we will be able to compare what our own companies are currently doing and9 k6 O7 A& j9 t* L5 G) _7 Q  z8 v  G
present our management teams with alternatives and new ideas.
0 O  p, h1 C! Y1 E+ USharing our experiences will result in an increased understanding of the factors8 G, }7 C9 _$ g
that can drive success or failure.& r7 z; G8 e& R8 g# M9 u
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Participating in an MBA program will illustrate the commitment I have to my
- e5 s" p7 o; _  k1 Kprofessional development and will highlight the experiences and skills that I
) ?7 K& q7 H; n* \0 Ucan bring to a new role in my company.# j$ T# q! l: a  v
As ______ continues to grow, the company's need for well-trained and experienced; u2 h# E9 z4 }
managers and directors will increase.. S" s+ C1 p, K7 i
Participating in an MBA program will highlight the commitment I have to
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6 C8 M) Q6 J6 T& j3 JBesides the educational component, an MBA will allow for greater opportunities
' D( Y& |& Q0 g6 F: x4 b4 K1 Qfor internships and full-time positions that otherwise may be unavailable to me
* o# R: a0 g. P! b5 J& B& Qwithout the degree.
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I am applying to the Executive MBA Program because I am confident the program is
$ T* n" C. G' c& Nideally suited to my personal and professional development needs.5 D! B; a" {. W* T3 h. S6 g( s

6 W( P% S* I* d5 Y) a1.2 Plans after Degree# ]5 j: {& K) d4 q" W$ ^$ b/ R

* N8 ?: W  x7 Q# \3 g  w- ]6 LAfter I complete my MBA degree from the ______ I will pursue a career in ______- L3 y  G. R' r: d
with, ______;- h) T2 L* }$ u& i! z1 v
______; or ______. The position will be challenging and include ______ .1 l* D5 F7 s# i3 f
I will be able to apply my skills learned during my graduate experience to make
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; S! Y; U3 e: b2 S: qI will have the opportunity to interact with managers from various ______;
" c6 z" O1 Q5 y. F6 a8 B/ o______; ______; and ______.
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In the short-term I am interested in pursuing a new and increased role in one of
) B- b8 R0 c0 R7 \( t( z______ business segments.$ `3 X& N  I% Y! s$ O1 A+ w
This new role will provide me with the opportunity to learn more about one of
0 A! }/ h7 F2 N9 Q, \3 [our businesses and will include ______, ______ and ______ responsibilities.
) j; K9 r" V; _9 V) `0 NWhile in this role I will learn as much as possible about the business, its role) l: A/ Q7 `, a' O
within ______ and the total company's role in the marketplace." V5 E3 J; ~8 A; l- n
I will take advantage of the opportunities presented to become involved in& \8 @- o, L7 P/ U
______ and ______, ______, and the varied aspects of ______.
+ M; M3 T( X: F- v( KThis new role will also provide me with the opportunity to ______.
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Ultimately, my aim, after completion of my MBA at ______, is to embrace an: Z3 P5 T0 ^4 e8 O* ?
______ career and work for a worldwide corporation at a decision level.
# \" Q4 u  L/ |1 }; Z6 g. M0 rI want to experience management and decision making in an ______ environment," T3 z0 k5 x5 r4 F" m# x; E
particularly as a ______.8 p3 ?- [) d& ]  r
This will grant me with the background and business connections necessary to  l" `9 i) ~  w0 ~+ r
leverage my ambitions of setting up an ______ company developing ______ for the
1 H# W! `  R$ S9 B* G& T______ market.
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I seek an MBA degree from ______ because it will empower me to improve the level8 b9 [1 W. O* G5 V& d: J1 ]: s
of professionalism and management in the nonprofit world,
5 U, S+ m- ^; fI plan to build relevant ______, ______ and ______ skills through business- q# z4 `1 Q' q) K: M
studies.2 [8 b% z" K- H  Y
I intend to gain a better understanding of the ______ sector and apply it
/ E, ~, @$ M5 f1 \, F( l* Rdirectly to the unique issues and politics of ______.
5 z& K9 L3 W- [. rMBA training will dramatically broaden my scope of business vision and I will be7 r+ o' P( M8 t
able to apply this new knowledge immediately.
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On completing my MBA, there are two directions I envision myself taking. The
9 J3 c" r8 F' f! l3 S$ A$ V, j6 rfirst fuses my past experience and my new MBA skills by heading towards a senior
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In particular, I would like to join such a company as ______.
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# y0 i* p+ E: H* G* g6 ?' _) u- iMy intent would be to stay within one business segment of ______ for ______ to
) G8 S/ o1 \* _+ m______ years so I can learn the business in detail.' G2 C2 g) Y5 d" |2 ~: u8 p4 m
After that time I will consider looking for a new position in another business- L+ z6 z) }$ |4 N! q3 L! E$ G
within ______.' t$ O7 r; Z3 c9 E( ?) d; {

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In the long-term I will continue to progress on my career path, going as far as" y, M% ^, _! B5 Z) v
my education, talent and experience will take me.
6 q% n2 C2 k+ U" T" D; DMy long-term goals include becoming the ______ or ______, then moving into a
* T) e$ D* e8 Q! l: Ihigher management position (vice-president or CFO).* D) O' V; G" o; ]) t# I
Upon retirement I would like to ______.* V. n  e/ e1 [
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  f* N7 Q6 @8 U; a& W4 V3 s# R  _1 C7 eI've been working in the ______ industry, in particular, ______. My aspiration- z& s! \6 b# s5 j3 T
is to remain in the same sphere, both for the short and for the long run.
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0 L8 t3 Z" Q5 h' Q/ ?While working towards the degree I plan to do a summer internship and
' v) X' L' [" T- v6 {8 U/ limmediately after the degree work full-time in ______ .
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After earning my MBA, I would love to work for ______ .
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Over the long term, however, the only "job" that will harness and parlay all of5 p8 L* m5 K( i
my passion and energy is one that I design from the ground up.
$ w% s( l- s# U& |% P( B8 ~- x% }% DStarting my own company is the ultimate challenge.
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However, an alternative direction also attracts me: the entrepreneurial path.6 |- ^/ f. |) f6 q* U
Given an interesting opportunity and the right confidence in the market, I know8 J7 n. ^; I' _# e
I would be very tempted by this.
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expands my potential to make the most of unforeseen opportunities: building
! }3 k8 U. Q9 p8 q  h+ ^# g# Mflexibility into my future.0 j: K4 X2 g7 L3 I

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( x# r( Y7 n9 h, s8 k" ]8 `5 Q) i1.3 Why our School
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) _7 c1 k3 I! _' P7 f7 e) SThe ______ MBA Program has been designed to connect a range of disparate
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$ @! K/ {9 O3 X( E: [1 oThis can be illustrated from the configuration of the Clusters that make up7 i4 W8 z+ h( c3 R8 ^
______ of the course.; V7 U" h6 J9 z5 {! Y* H  V% O
The Innovation section in ______ leads on to a part of the course that
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+ _  P$ A) O& ^3 ~. g+ sFinally there is a section about _____.: n0 j, e: j+ I
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______ MBA Program provides a full analysis of the fundamentals of management$ N+ H8 p- D$ ?: T
and technology,
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high-tech age as a result of innovation,1 G* A* P* W; K& e: B9 K
technology and globalisation.
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______ MBA course provides a strong academic framework with an emphasis on the
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which is further demonstrated by the internationally diverse student body and6 V# Y) |+ c' e1 K, G, h# |: v! u
faculty staff.
% \! K* v8 Y4 iThe high practical content of the course will enable me apply academic knowledge
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6 g# Y+ s" N: X: J; wI have also selected this business school to work with the caliber of
( \: _6 m# K/ {- F" ?professionals that are attracted to a top ______ business school,
; h( o  D/ k3 `3 R4 w) H% @( ]and am looking forward to developing my interpersonal and communication skills
5 P: Z6 t+ P9 Q  p4 K( ^- Pin the numerous workshops and team exercises.& e- P7 I& {( T0 D- J
Overall, the MBA will play an integral part in my development and I am certain
, J" E  m' ^* V/ ~7 u& Qthat it will provide me with the tools I need to successfully ______ .8 g: D% L  z0 a- F* \* U% y7 F
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' I; D0 }( m* }& IMy ambition is to acquire more knowledge in ______,
5 t4 H( ~, f! t* n6 q3 q$ ]______ and build strong relationships with successful leaders and innovative
' |6 M& }$ R/ [9 \9 J& F8 Kthinkers worldwide.
8 h8 v; x% x1 }And I want to learn from the school renowned as the best for the quality of its
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______ is my first choice because it uncompromisingly addresses real life
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6 q( A: s# Z' n4 j  R# {The way the learning model is organized through interactive means as study6 K' m0 ~5 d2 J& _6 e2 y
groups, analysis of actual real life business cases,8 Z7 f  P) T  [3 X$ U
classes and workshops provides the ideal learning environment for people with an
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/ t, y- h' z! w( @2 ]* L3 NAt ______ , the emphasis is put on the students.
) Q) W4 f* J  p& H6 `: WCurriculums, perfect combination of theory and practice, are updated with# O- ?- j; ^) G+ k
current techniques and technologies, and moreover, can receive inputs from* n% Q: @. ^' c2 B
students.
8 @; v+ w0 V2 B/ ?The strong notion of community is also decisive in my choice.
7 e1 Q0 G4 {5 t, g; D" L$ ^; |* p( sFurthermore, the commitment on ethics as an intrinsic part of the learning
3 d( {8 j" H) V* M. [1 r6 U( oprocess is compliant with my conception of business., }3 y! z, K# X+ ^
To me, business is about trust and honesty. And there is no way around it., D6 s, ~5 Z* J+ q- |
Finally, the city of ______ is a serious plus that will put me in the heart of
  e6 ^& C6 e. z3 d1 None of the world's business capital.
4 \! B0 b+ I' S0 V' K" l" A* VThe proximity to the financial and cultural city of ______ gives to the students& I0 j3 ^) T6 m
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9 A& @: v( X! ^& x% OIn choosing ______ as a perspective MBA program I considered many factors.
( a4 m: i9 k& m+ n: @# E0 kFirst, it goes without saying that ______ has an impeccable reputation for
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Further, ______ is clearly making a run up the rankings in recent years.# y' m$ S9 D- f2 x0 ^, c
I intend to focus my MBA on marketing, however, I also wish to develop general  [9 ]% {" s* ^
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finance and entrepreneurial skill sets as well as to learn how to leverage) p: v0 f( r' B4 ]" `1 Y* I
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within the marketing arena. These areas play right into ______'s strengths.
4 Q' x; o' Z8 g8 `Developing these skills will enable me to understand how marketing fits into the
! o  G2 p4 a6 T' ]6 U' n( Ilarger corporate picture,. B8 g: A, [( Q5 j* E1 J
utilize entrepreneurial knowledge to compete within an organization as well as. l6 A: o7 Y) P+ q( r' n  M( D
on my own and hone the+ j, h) R6 b; X3 x
leadership and management skills required of future leaders in industry.
7 U* S- W( c: j- L+ m______ gives me the best chance at attaining these skills and developing them to" A" m0 K, L1 `' k; T7 a5 M+ w
such a level that
+ ^' }  {6 d  F( }. ]8 v& @6 ?I will be able to achieve my long term-career goals.# U5 `3 N+ `: {2 c

  G0 E, r$ n; M, R* NSecond, ______ 's location in the ______ and its diverse student body are assets$ i( g0 z4 K. _& t) O; d
of which few schools can boast.
* v2 \5 Z0 E8 ^% B  R" FThe resources and opportunities that exist in this area are unparalleled and  e2 `; a; U0 K/ l3 q) e
growing everyday.
' t0 e+ h% b$ H4 SThe southwest offers a plethora of opportunities for expanding both your) o4 \* j* V, Z
professional and personal horizons
4 \2 @' @# M. k0 xin a very diverse environment. ______'s efforts to embrace that diversity, both
0 ]5 j; M+ a3 k- S0 i; m* lon and off campus,
" J2 F. z+ c  xensure the students a truly robust learning environment, one in which the free0 e1 k* k$ M8 w) p. h$ q
exchange of ideas is encouraged.
& A9 N4 z+ e3 A3 t( XThe ______'s environment gives me the best chance to experience culture and
1 K. v4 @. X  r5 a1 hideas in a truly diverse environment.
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Lastly, I have chosen ______ because it is hard. I do not have the traditional
3 o* A* k- I+ w2 T' Xbackground that is required of
& [  [/ ~# q/ Nmost MBA students. ______'s MBA program is not a cakewalk for anyone, and that
, T) x" C- Z3 n2 |6 A" i9 Uwill be especially true of me.
! j$ l  V: k, pHowever, I will succeed and I will contribute and I will make ______'s MBA8 M  X5 ~. C0 l+ a! s( }, J
program a better experience for my classmates.# n0 |8 {7 g# @2 ^3 {; H
Earning my MBA from ______ will be an accomplishment I will be supremely proud( m/ Q8 |& \( [1 I+ D
of and it gives me the best chance to
1 j! g3 `: L- x+ i8 v. e4 trealize my personal and professional goals.* t- ^5 m% C4 b# Y& N* ~; N
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  d2 S" L/ ?( B. E% zI expect that the ______ MBA will best help me to develop the business
* j3 |8 H# A* x: U3 l( H, a4 wfoundation necessary for me to achieve my career goals.
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' y6 v& ]2 Y/ V) w+ _Integrating the theories has a number of important effects that I think benefit' D2 m3 `1 o3 h* F1 L# [! ]
the course. Firstly, from a purely curricular point of view,4 M6 q7 y6 T$ J; X* ?0 c+ a8 h
an MBA is no longer complete without an analysis of current business trends.
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As an ______, I am a part of ______'s Leadership team, tasked with undertaking
) B2 J9 [' J8 K1 `  r$ aone of the most aggressive growth plans in the ______ industry.4 j  w! c: v5 x3 h
In a short period, I ______. As an ______ I am responsible for managing ______.
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Over the course of about six years on _____ I climbed from _____ to _____ with) ?5 m# P7 f. r6 J9 M- o+ V
______ intermediary steps in between.8 D4 p( W$ L! L2 w2 i
I have consistently received work performance bonuses and promotions throughout
2 k3 o3 C& o6 x4 bmy career.0 D+ a$ F/ h5 C$ k, s, E
In my current position _____ I was hired permanently after ______.1 {2 C( I! ^. ~: ?( G- H6 D
I also received __award__.
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3 S4 ]4 s  z, \- _. YThroughout my career at ______ and other ______ companies, I have managed
- U8 T' s8 T: S2 j' Umultiple projects simultaneously, which has required me to balance my workloads
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and to keep in close communication with my supervisors and subordinates to1 P; {5 r9 I, d2 [
ensure I have enough resources to complete projects within the designated' H1 `; U) D# i7 Z# N
parameters.! v. Z9 X. }6 c2 K' S, y
During this experience, I have successfully ______ .
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I have had good exposure working with people from departments outside the
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3 r( ]: g" y8 y& F/ d# ZBecause of this, I was exposed to the basic operations ...2 \& V* m: k* u4 Y
Also, while assigned to ______ project, I worked closely with the ______
) T0 W# n( c7 N# x+ eDepartment to ______.
5 a" E2 y: D/ c0 t9 |; P+ s" XAnd most importantly, I am currently running a small entrepreneurial venture
( L4 `1 H8 E- p" R3 c; x7 i- S# ]called ______ ,% [4 l. e$ ~& l! A" o
exposing me to all management issues involved with a start-up, from initial' p* F- l/ a1 @( m2 d
financing to execution to day-to-day operations.9 T" Z  d  @* `1 I5 L0 `' Q

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While at ______ I transitioned from ______ to ______.# J2 g8 f* k& B" |* x8 k

7 N& o4 M* @$ {8 TThe ability to [define the needs of the organization], [providing the ______
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* W. L* k; ]9 K0 p2 Hand knowledge of ______ allowed me to successfully execute this project.
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0 |- n1 v% a( {! @, ]$ }$ n4 pTo ______ , I proposed a complex plan to use .6 B/ [' J' s; u$ E

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To fully analyze ______ , I would consider several factors, grouped into _____
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! D5 L4 q% ^6 }1 u9 q5 Z( AMy role as ______ included ______ .
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2.2 Academic Background
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! B* b2 q' ?+ ^5 I' ]5 PI have consistently excelled in a variety of subjects at every institution of
, m4 W% ^: r8 R( j; ?2 nhigher learning that I have attended.
, {9 S3 i# }7 V" B' |4 JI obtained a ______ undergraduate GPA while working ______ hours per week.& A# v* Y' R0 L/ F+ j4 H( S
Following college graduation, I attended a top-______ ______ school and
8 g2 K( ~, E  e; |) R. ]  `& i: u/ S  mgraduated in the top quarter of my class.9 Z2 f6 g- _' a. U8 }$ p; H
More recently, I have attempted to prepare for business school by further
! p& }) R1 k( Z; ydeveloping my quantitative background.8 D) i* ^1 X- c) O( M3 N
I took a ______ course __when__ and obtained a ______ GPA.0 L. N$ `* M7 Q# x
I am currently juggling part-time ______ work with ______, ______, and ______; M8 \( ]+ f* B$ q" x. O
courses and am maintaining an "A" average in each of my __how_many__ classes.! e' y7 u; l# R8 o3 b5 e% h
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This experience and my solid record of accomplishments has been powerful in
! t7 C; r" L( I4 F, W5 i  Econfirming to myself that not only do I enjoy leading but that I am a successful
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" T* Q( a. x3 d4 ]  HAnd in the true mark of a leader, I have discovered that I have the innate* A* v: k# z8 ~
leadership qualities necessary to ______ .
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- x4 B/ p* U. z7 o& d' ~I have even had opportunities to practice my leadership and business skills
* [% T. K, O) D1 K. ^' Mthrough ______.4 Z( y- x$ x( N# X( r
Elected to the ______ , I helped to ______ .
6 ]( i7 O6 l3 }$ gIn addition, I leveraged my business skills to ______.6 k, t- x) @( P& c' k
These volunteer efforts have reinforced my desire to ______, and intensified my1 {( L+ a' i( A0 X; R8 Q1 [
passion for ______.
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+ N, N. l2 D- V# g$ KMy main challenge was to bring together a group of ______ individuals, all
5 H7 i; U  c8 g6 E' ~8 l______s with different needs and to focus on the individual as well as the team.' n  {1 y" @0 F+ ]% C% E1 T0 J$ W
Most of the ______ were older than me and that only added to the challenge of
+ Q+ v: @0 t. Y, ?earning their respect.4 z' _, S! ^- _4 s& T
In a short time we managed to have the team running like a well oiled machine.
9 q) p6 w/ R. y6 y* d) o. w2 d+ r( QEveryone knew their role, everyone became motivated to do their best and, most
& ^8 A( A' Z. L* a& jimportantly ...
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I can honestly say that the experience of being a leader in ______ has given me. c; d* m3 d1 r9 O0 w: n% Y6 U; N
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taught me to amass knowledge and to share it and to teach it,+ o% B- {( m7 N' F5 E+ D
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The Leadership Lessons Serving as ______ of the ______ has been a defining: o- a1 N- a" M$ H' W
leadership experience for four distinct reasons ...8 t4 G! j4 C- P7 K, b% o& t2 @
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the ______ to be all he or she can be.
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A company's success is defined by its people. As a ______, I will need to6 W* o$ A4 U8 e) N7 |. g9 R, A7 `
motivate my team and ensure each person feels important.7 `& c( w3 S6 B1 k  T
Patience, listening, and the ability to appreciate different viewpoints are
% e: G# C/ L& N9 _5 Z& }8 crequired for managerial success.4 ^0 `! _# X9 H. a

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: C3 y/ G% A/ Y; N: n: h6 b6 r6 MAfter this experience I understood that to be a leader you must not only give. I3 X) j/ G0 a) b: G# g
orders,
( {% r% P4 G0 I# O4 Qbut also motivate people showing them how to achieve a common goal working" }- B  c4 Y7 t2 f. P9 V3 ~
together.
; e7 I3 S9 B& B* o4 Y. N$ l$ K( ~) \I was also able to strengthen my managerial skills that will be useful for the2 y  |7 ?$ f" o1 n+ d$ o* Y1 ~
rest of my career and life.  d6 L( z" \6 |' v0 h

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Each person is an individual and has distinctive character traits.
2 a# J. z! U0 T' W1 kA successful team leader should know how to deal with each person in an$ Q" u% n. y% y7 |, w' W
appropriate and unique way.$ V- E% c) w* I% [; b, \
One individual would show application and do well if left to work independently
3 A9 Z3 m9 ^; I4 i" Q8 \while another would need constant supervision.
% q6 }. w0 W& f" ~Effective leadership is a blend of camaraderie and authority, and is also the2 j/ C% _& t' r8 E3 @9 ~, y. |9 |& k
ability to strike a balance between them.% V7 q. g5 F) Z/ o+ y* z4 Z. p+ M
It needs advance preparation, an understanding of human psychology, and some( H' s6 B* O. r- v0 t; M
diplomacy.
9 F6 O" q# V* ?' h+ b* I. R8 @Any work can be made important and interesting to people by making them
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and above all, by granting them due importance and recognition.
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6 i2 {! z6 u: [3 }7 GI enjoyed working with motivated people, as did I enjoy the challenge of leading
$ W9 d& [1 n5 Ua team of excellent people.
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3 v! s; @, U* q1 u2 d7 h: H1 F! ?1 y  ~- uMany people believe that leadership is simply being the first,/ f: `6 t% S6 I# j, F. |# W& B
biggest or most powerful. Leadership in organizations has a different and more+ ~( c4 Y5 X; n6 @$ `2 P) _
meaningful definition.
8 ?5 E$ G. s* E+ wVery simply put, a leader is interpreted as someone who sets direction in an
7 g9 l& I+ J, h" X% leffort and influences people to follow that direction./ h6 I. T8 C" k8 q4 e
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After spending a semester reviewing leadership theories, I see leadership as a
8 m: P9 E7 }% H% T( Zbuilding relationships, fostering growth and change,. z' H( U8 F4 Z& B
and working for agreed upon, common goals.  A leader needs to possess strong
* K" v; Z- h1 C) x9 |/ Pcommunication and problem solving skills.
* C9 i4 u+ ^6 G  Q& s, t; w# UThey should also be trustworthy and have the respect of their followers.
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$ v. ]/ c' V! o' c% D, f3 gThese experiences have also instilled characteristics in me that will allow me
9 F7 ]& K9 o* N- ]9 Bto become a successful leader.
1 c, W  a9 C* d. c& wI believe that excellent leaders are knowledgeable, compassionate and flexible
- u- b8 }* P6 Kteam players. My experience in such compassionate communities will allow me to create and
3 l3 L0 ?! i$ S- m4 [maintain a strong and cohesive unit to work toward our ultimate team objectives." n: E1 m3 ?# U! s. W, l
My ability to challenge others and examine multiple viewpoints will be; Y5 m: R1 X6 x$ K' d
especially important when motivating others and finding the appropriate
% C; X+ h8 ~& U2 q  Q: q: [/ Hleadership style for any situation.
: Q: S8 R) p" U4 eThis overall distinctiveness, combined with my unique industry experience, will, I: W7 Q" j7 C0 x2 p) Z' |
not only influence my success as a leader,2 n$ \& J% _- T
but will also allow me to become a valuable member of the ______ community.
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2.4 Teamwork and Communication
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Frequently, information and feedback from these sources would appear to be  Z3 o8 }. `1 A( C, U5 h, b
contradictory,
8 `# v0 g: w; y2 \$ j* rand in order to resolve the discrepancies, open and continual communications
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! v2 N3 K1 e- N. F7 rtaught me ______.  h4 I0 y+ X9 o  h3 S1 @& g
We successfully delivered the project and I earned the highest possible rating
" o- z) W9 N5 B1 Cfor my performance that term.
+ ]8 G  z- h" L8 A6 n3 V  ZBut I am most proud of the fact that through the caring, patient application of
* k( B9 E; m) Tmy skills I was able to contribute to the development of my team.
# K% E" M5 Q: HOvercoming the challenge of others by helping them reinvent themselves would,
' F! r% u* i$ S6 A5 P, Afor me, be a key source of emotional fulfillment.
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of the team, a good mentor and an effective team leader.* a# O; k4 E& j  W
He would describe my strengths as my knowledge, experience and friendly demeanor2 _6 s: a% o4 U& @/ J2 u
because I am approachable and always willing to help.) X& r+ ~* s( s( A
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happy to help anyone in areas in which I have expertise.8 s5 j( j/ H2 N3 N) Z
After all, it is important that as a team, we get along and, help one another,
8 [- G1 Y. M, T9 J% S2 K0 `if we are to achieve our objectives.3 P6 K% ?- z: y  J" o7 I) j
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This constant aim has focused my short and long term objectives in every new9 |/ @, w* x1 W6 y5 Z& B
venture.
' @: X" \3 u  g7 W% `If there is anyone involved in the project who does not benefit from it,0 }$ y; a0 ]  }4 C0 c
then something has to be revised and corrected. Every participant should have
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and therefore focus on strengths and allow other people to work on their
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so you must make the most of the team you have. To maximize team performance, I$ k' k2 J# V6 i# w' q4 U, A
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gaps.
* E2 @% q( T4 S: R. ^4 kWhether the team is lacking in leadership, knowledge, support, or communication,, Y8 l1 A( w3 |& a4 e
I must strive to somehow meet this need to ensure successful teamwork.
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2 }7 w; |2 R+ `4 b: ~0 @; G: y! QI have the ability to voice my ideas and opinions, even when they differ from5 I5 A6 C; k1 V: D& {' m4 d
those of the group.
6 c+ b* W( H, p$ [7 J# ^; xIf I believe that a project is misdirected, I will let the team know, even if I4 M; M) b  b* g6 A9 b: c6 J
am not the team leader.7 D& ^; @0 \/ Z. H9 ?
I voice my ideas at meetings without timidity.! z& u+ x; _/ n% g9 Y  A5 ]
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their conclusions or help them learn from my mistakes,
8 ^6 b9 U; m( N( m* {successes, and experiences and improve their thinking or processes .# @; y& W$ U* V/ l
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& ^6 B) X, b- F3 C8 w$ w( ^At work, I absolutely know how to communicate with ______ as with ______.. b  B9 g2 |$ m& Q  D# L  r
Undoubtedly I have made good use of this skill.
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4 _7 t* B) D9 R8 J' DAs a team member, I respect and try to learn from the expertise of others in the
) U* C5 L6 r$ r; ^' kgroup.
) j& M( m/ q  d( x5 V; p! F% }* D' vAt the same time I encourage and listen to the ideas of other teammates.
) S7 a4 t" H' X1 Q; z0 C4 @I believe that differences and new ideas are essential to discover the
, R4 K1 P% x! I* P6 \5 ninnovative solutions in team environment.
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0 {' c9 s9 R2 u: Q6 {$ E) ]I will be able to contribute to a team-based learning environment in which
, u8 W; f; t% _innovative solutions to problems can be discovered.
' m  T: W8 p7 B  s) n+ tThis holds true in a work environment as well.
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3 w/ g3 t9 [& e. v: u% q8 ?% EPeople have diverse styles of learning and it is necessary to have the ability
4 G0 |. a. W# w8 K) mto adapt to each person's particular style.! {: n6 H, Q% ]5 l9 T' ~
It is also important to be able to convey a sense of what information is vital
, K% w: G' l- Q  [and what information is supportive.
- ?. _5 m: Y- h$ O* Q$ X  pInstructing others has helped me develop both my ability to look at problems in
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1 Y6 q, b" M; Q/ {4 }' I0 SIn my view teamwork is a key element for success in today's world.
# N% c" |5 ^8 [3 V: Q" k1 y4 aIt facilitates interaction between students and helps absorb information and- K0 \: I* @, n1 |% }
retain knowledge.
6 j3 L4 U/ }7 ?It also acquaints students with different approaches to business problems.
/ `, q: g' K7 w, C" d; O/ s1 NIn addition, the exposure to outstanding people from all areas of life does not
) Q! \" v, ]7 F* q3 e: tonly enrich but also helps forge friendships that remain for life.0 x9 k( h; @8 O) v+ o# _+ p
By that I do not only mean students but also Professors who are at the forefront
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( n' t; d% c, M: P% l5 u: R* nHence, they can become role models, influence, and drive students for success.
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After a lot of debate on the best schedule, we came up with an extremely robust
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5 m6 c! F. d# p  X1 AThese intra-team interactions generated a strong team spirit that proved very
, D3 ^* [0 T/ _) ?3 L/ v; Thelpful when the going was difficult.- |4 p" R8 L( i8 r3 g' {# z- A

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It enhanced my self-confidence, improved my communication skills, and elicited a
8 U% j. i  u; R& b) g+ hmuch more analytical approach to tackling difficult situations,8 U. r, y4 ]/ }9 X+ J4 i) I
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but to truly look with a global view at my behavior and assumptions.0 K) U; I, {/ @% ]2 U4 Q

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areas of interest are ______ and ______.: I' C% E) D8 Y+ y: s
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every day of my life.
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$ u1 D0 l; a4 y  ]0 [5 {4 U3 s7 wThe scenario depicted above would not be a unique experience in my career.
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% ^" _# N+ Z( lIt remains more critical than ever to ______ .- s" e9 C1 I4 h4 o: C) J% R
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% Y6 n+ B8 N2 N  C; f: YThe most significant challenges I face in my immediate job are ______ .
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* q# P' p, F# x7 FHowever, ______ was a difficult management and technological project and has
2 Z+ m/ Z( I2 k/ bbeen my toughest professional challenge thus far.1 W- D  g& t1 v" N" ^# M5 r) j

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When I was the ______ for the______ I faced regular difficulties ____ing ______.+ x- d+ s# B- |8 i6 N& _& }; b
This was due to ______ .
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5 n- G" A1 b: x6 l% Y' UI recognize the need to improve ______ .
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This experience has taught me how to ______
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! c3 @& N; t; L/ v& A- S7 zCompleting my degree in ______ has given me a strong ______ foundation in" d, g4 R! e8 P/ Z3 K5 D$ |& a# `
______.
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5 W4 H* q. S9 ^! j% NI realize ______ may very well be a part of my job description. When ______ ,
& b: C. w1 J( E, ]" M9 A- Y- Zit is important to be able to ______ in more than one light.9 ?( V" e# @% Y: I4 Q% E
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$ u# S5 z8 k1 A3. 学习计划与对MBA Program的贡献
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3.1 Study Plans in the Program5 ^: n9 s) K) {  _/ O

4 M1 j2 k6 U( b% |& ZShould I be accepted into the ______ MBA program, I will be active in the
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In and out of the classroom I am one who is always willing to raise his
9 U' X9 P/ S+ e( Whand or disagree or simply add a new perspective to the discussion.6 \8 Y" p+ r8 ^+ x2 f1 u, K

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6 A( ^" O7 w( V6 H0 k3 t7 xThe rigor of a ______ education demands both teamwork and trust in your2 M$ m! a( }4 J8 Z! r
teammates.
" [+ h+ B. Q' {! b! FThese are critical lessons for every manager. At times, as the leader of my
* x. V3 ]5 U3 M/ K, H# K) o______ team, I will manage the overall project and delegate assignments.! K- J! s1 x# {. O3 z
Other times, as a team member, I will contribute toward our end goal. Practicing
+ j" A* ?- L5 N, Kteamwork in an educational environment offers the opportunity for analysis and3 h8 S7 A/ t3 T' ~- b% L
introspection.
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to examine the inner workings of a team.: j+ F* Q4 Y- T5 X# D; ~
Studying for two years at ______ will enable me to study team dynamics and* _9 O9 ~" V7 Z
reflect on my role as both a leader and a participant of a team.
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MBA courses I'd like to gain an inner point of view from the leading country of
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  G2 t2 ]! P$ S9 d2 V* i! ?5 hSecond and related, during my experience in the MBA courses I hope I will meet
. D' O6 t$ s9 |8 k' zother people who have had the opportunity to work in this field and to share
  [: ^4 f, M* r/ G, B6 Awith them experiences, ideas and opinions.) B! k6 a0 E* R- H
I want to go deeper from an already interesting academic point of view to the
7 M4 H6 X4 `' o7 w7 v0 `7 Opoint of view that the mixture of firsthand experience and knowledge can give( p) ?( ^; q) O
you.
1 P& [. C" L/ ^( i8 H1 r) ALast, I think an MBA is a clear signal that you can give to inform others of
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0 r; Z% c) k4 w, e: U# K% ?7 h. mBy the end of my MBA course I want to have a broad understanding of the key
1 A+ j& \& r7 ^# \3 [& O4 cfunctional disciplines,1 i/ ~6 ]4 x# _& E" [+ S- @4 S
the role of ______ and the opportunities and challenges of the global arena in' ~; M. {; f: G! H$ X  l; ^7 t
business.
" w* f6 c$ ^/ G; H4 n8 W0 ?I believe the key to problem solving is effective teamwork and management of
; ^7 M5 K2 M+ `* i9 M" jresources and I am looking to develop these skills to an exceptional standard.
7 f" W2 r% n. J* v  lIn addition to this, I require career management skills to ensure that I place
) y( Q+ i2 _' [1 N; I& R% N9 amyself in a role that is going to challenge and excite me./ [. E! K& Q5 ^( s0 D$ e
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/ L' t8 F; H* vIn the short term, I need to broaden my understanding beyond the functional
; k/ V+ T) M1 P" |$ Careas I mastered at ______ and at several entrepreneurial companies where I was% s% C* S  }; g- v
the ______.# @+ x( u! }9 N+ o. r' s, Q. ?
I want to expand my point of view as ______ and bring my unique perspective to
7 G% P3 U$ p. P( nbear on issues that face the whole company.
$ X& X/ m7 j0 f5 l1 X7 p1 R6 lI also want to improve my ______ and ______ skills so that in the long term as5 l, k7 }9 v3 T) I4 @
______ I can lead the whole company toward a common goal.  m+ {; l' \: N! ^2 ?( E7 X
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At the same time, I will be open to the assistance my classmates can give me
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undergraduate field of study. I will enjoy the opportunity to work with highly
( k! E8 F4 L" k7 \# X7 [) qtalented and motivated students.( V9 v6 \8 e2 d9 N
Sharing ideas and experiences will give me the chance to improve myself while( t% s$ E8 E% i9 \+ ?0 g
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( f0 W4 p! N: O  @4 jWhile at ______ , I hope to not only share my experiences and perspectives, but
9 l% r  B+ o2 f$ Q( W) X4 kalso learn through the experiences and perspectives of others.6 ?4 c; G& J8 E: F( ?
I hope to challenge my classmates to look within themselves to understand how" F. k! `0 S& w8 V* @
building diverse relationships can help them grow as well.
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As I share and relive my personal and professional experiences with others,
* K- p( L3 R5 Y1 R' N9 O1 dI will gain new insights to these experiences and will be able to better
4 v" ^- v/ m( J8 }" m0 F/ n( Tinternalize them.
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' P: r& O1 M  n: Y$ ]% RI hope to develop lifetime friendships and forge professional relationships that
# }  {& R9 g) j# Hextend well beyond the completion of the program.
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Sharing ideas and experiences will give me the chance to improve myself while
6 D" U. s  Z% r: n( Fhelping my peers.
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have effects on other's minds and feelings.
$ ?& ~. C$ x' z5 k$ M7 d, \Every member of the ______ community should benefit from this wonderful$ c; y4 y; p4 x0 p2 T. [! A* Q
contribution.: b0 Y& @1 O. X- J. \
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self-confidence, and belief in bettering others] as I have demonstrated in the. D, V% ^: `  r7 g& }
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As a [female, Vietnamese, Chinese, and Asian American], I will provide my/ P6 g9 C% e6 A; {# `( U
[multicultural] perspective and add to the school's diversity.
' M+ M3 G  p  E' o. PWith my [persistence and self- confidence], I will challenge others to excel" T$ V( _' {5 Z& r6 s8 B% d
academically and enrich the entering class with my personal and professional
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Most importantly, I will continue to live my belief of bettering others by# D' y$ l' a# H  L& I
assisting with student organizations on campus, especially the __group__.
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with from my experience as a ______., @. Y* ^  A% U  G+ j
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______information covered in ______ course work.5 H' g+ a7 [/ a8 p" n* J

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% S- T0 d* r- P- I5 ~2 ?A background in ______. The ability to ______, An understanding of ______.* B6 D& Q4 _9 ~. A8 r8 M; F
I will bring these qualities to the Business School program and ultimately to my! A" q# u+ J" S2 R
career in _____ management.
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in the latest business and technology form will make me2 F  v" \- S5 p$ s  t, B4 f4 Y$ d
additive to the overall learning environment of the ______ Business School and I  c7 X: ?+ m5 _' R3 h8 ~1 p7 a8 J
would make a valuable asset for classroom discussion.& Q/ F: \& P& E

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) u# c* J) J: ?+ |! ^# D______ University's classroom will assuredly be enhanced with my whole set of' e/ d. U" D. r3 C5 V
working situations and experiences ranging from ______ to ______
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personal and professional life, and in what a manner will they continue to
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+ P& G  `( K2 A, T9 i* d: u8 |I will be willing to help my classmates with any ______ aspects I am familiar1 w$ C9 ~/ K! b* r" d  w3 K
with from my experience as a ______ .
6 T+ d( A# T2 ^) C  B9 d5 A7 o# ?I will be able to apply my background of ______ to helping my classmates with( \2 f2 s& K: z: N+ s
______ covered in ______ course work.
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In sum, I will be able to enrich the ______ community because my thoughtfulness,
) h7 z6 ]3 [$ Qstrong loyalty and unyielding commitment to community will allow teammates to9 I' u1 G0 c# T5 k. `( f
grow personally and professionally,
$ v- I6 ~' U, H' s" h+ ^/ w# t3 O8 xand my flexibility and genuine compassion will allow me to become a credible and
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$ a! M' b3 R$ e; p: n$ ufrom their own life lessons as well.
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$ s& z# ]) X" l' GBesides ______, other relevant information for the Admissions Committee to take. ~3 v) |  u# y
into
0 g4 ?; h' z6 M. e0 yconsideration are [my work ethic, the diversity of my work background, my active
- z! I: ^5 ?, Rparticipation in the community and my anticipated
3 `: X0 ]* ?- Z. n# Q2 L$ bactive participation in both the classroom, student organizations and other
# e. c6 h" L' g' Z" caspects of the ______ community].
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My overall work experience has been quite diverse having had exposure to many
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8 w2 \5 W+ ?; ?% l( c& y' kboth private and public sector, including [academia, student services, medical
+ M$ e8 p, f/ j; X; v3 `  @research, healthcare, finance, banking,& P* O" s: R" ~/ r& [
legal and currently entertainment].
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I have a few personal characteristics that have led me to this career choice and+ I3 P8 A; W" ?! g0 r* d
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7 @& J. t( H6 O9 jReferences: Business Week, Bebeyond, EEC ...2 L3 S8 N/ X& t/ a8 T

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