ISSUE38 考试前的倒数第二篇, 大伙给看看！

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限时写得太滥了，所以又自己改了改。 怎么越是临近考试状态越是糟糕呀！急死俺了,55555----
===============Issue 38 题目=============
In age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
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The speaker claims that reading books is not as important as it once was in the age of television, for the reason that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. It is true that people can learn many things from television. However, in my view, reading books is still important in the age of television.

  First of all, with the development of society, television enters average homes, by watching TV we can learn many things. For example, some cooking programs in television are so visual that it is easier for us to learn cook than before; we can learn the latest news occurred at each corner of the world immediately and without going out of homes. Moreover, many various courses of lectures, such as foreign languages, chess, painting and so on, are also available on television.  Therefore, television has become one effective and convenient way for us to learn.

However, even though the importance of television is increasingly growing, it dose not mean the decline of importance of reading books in learning, since books have many particular advantages which television dose not have. First, the programs on television are arranged beforehand, and what the audience can do is to determine whether watch the programs; and electricity, the equipment for receiving signals are needed if you want watch television. In contrast, we can choose different books according to our interests and needs; second, we can read at any time and any place, as long as there is enough light. All of these tell us that we can learn much more from reading books, since the limits on books is less. Furthermore, many television programs, the plays, the various lectures and so on, are based on books, then without books some of television programs will lose their solid fundament to survive.   

  In addition, books play a very important role in the progress of society and reading books is still a common and fundamental method for us to learn. It is known that it is through books that the essence in each field-history, culture and science etc.-recorded and inherited from one generation to another. Therefore, books are the most significant documents for to learn or do research in any realm. Similarly, even now books fill our daily lives. When we are students, we mainly learn from books; when you try to address the problems in your work, for example, to understand how to operate a new machine, reading the illustration written in books is the most effective way. Consequently, reading books is an indispensable part of our lives and it is still the most effective way for learning.      

To sum up, television and reading books are two different ways to learn and both of them have their unique advantages. They can coexist and should completely utilize the merit of each of them to serve our learning.

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In age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
======================正文================
The speaker claims that reading books is not as important as it once was in the age of television, for the reason that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. It is true that people can learn many things from television. [U]However, in my view, reading books is still important in the age of television.[/U] 好象however放在中间比较地道,听人说的,仅供参考开头很平,不过考场作文也没办法了.

First of all, [U]with the development of society, television enters average homes, by watching TV we can learn many things. [/U]  两个句子搁一起没连词For example, some cooking programs in television are so visual that it is easier for us to learn cook than before; we can learn the latest news [U]occurred [/U] occuring at each corner of the world immediately and without going out [U]of homes[/U] 没必要，可以删掉. Moreover, [U]many various [/U]  many可以去掉courses of lectures, such as foreign languages, chess, painting and so on, are also available on television. Therefore, television has become one effective and convenient way for us to learn. 小例子举的不错，语言还需提高，倒是浅显易懂

However, even though the importance of television is increasingly growing, it dose not mean the decline of importance of reading books in learning, since books have many particular advantages which television dose not have. First, the programs on television are arranged beforehand, and what the audience can do is to determine whether watch [U]the programs[/U]建议换代词显得不重复改成them or not ; and electricity, the equipment for receiving signals are needed if you want watch television. In contrast, we can choose different books to readaccording to our interests and needs; second, we can read at any time and any place, as long as there is enough light. All of these tell us that we can learn much more from reading books, since the limits on [U]books is [/U] reading areless. Furthermore, many television programs, the plays, the various lectures and so on, are based on books, then without books some of television programs will lose their solid fundament to survive. 最后一点不算书的特有优点吧

In addition, books play a very important role in the progress of society and reading books is still a common and fundamental method for us to learn. [U]It is known that [/U] As we all know,避免跟后面的it is that 重复 it is through books that the essence in each field-history, culture and science etc.-recorded and inherited from one generation to another. Therefore, books are the most significant documents for to learn or do research in any realm. Similarly, even now books fill our daily lives. When we are students, we mainly learn from books; when you try to address the problems in your work, for example, to understand how to operate a new machine, reading the illustration written in books is the most effective way. Consequently, reading books is an indispensable part of our lives and it is still the most effective way for learning. 感觉前面写的没必要啊，过去虽然是记录了很多东西，但是题目主要是强调现在吧，后面应该跟电视比较，强调这些内容电视没有，不然怎么体现书的优越性哪？

To sum up, television and reading books are two different ways to learn and both of them have their unique advantages. They can coexist and should completely utilize the merit of each of them to serve our learning.
感觉题目两部分内容是紧密相关的，楼主似乎是反对前面，而肯的后面一句，这样写可以么?我当时是两个都批，感觉那样写似乎好写点，一段说书好，一段说电视不好，最后来个让步。个人意见，仅供参考。

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谢谢花之颜色！我思路是根据新东方老师上课讲的，攻击因果题目的原因部分，也就是说读书并不会因为电视在学习中的重要性提高而变得不重要。1。 人们确实可以从电视中学到很多东西。2。 读书和电视并不矛盾，读书在学习中的重要性不会因为电视的普及而变得不重要，因为读书具有许多电视部具有的优点。3。当今社会读书仍然是人们学习的最基本和有效的学习方式。
你的思路蛮好了，很清晰。 能否把你写的文章帖上来！在讨论讨论。

ZHGsunnyUID: 185312

“感觉前面写的没必要啊，过去虽然是记录了很多东西，但是题目主要是强调现在吧，后面应该跟电视比较，强调这些内容电视没有，不然怎么体现书的优越性哪？“ 这个意见很好，前半段确实对于说明我的观点没什么用。嗯，应该如你所说，强调现在。