issue208 (prepare for 207—19)

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pp3限时完成，只改了拼写错误，不是很满意，还有2天，麻烦大家给看看！先谢谢了：）

208．The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.

I agree with the speaker's assertion that people's cloth and action's may reflect their attitudes and inclinations. Hence, we can know a society's ideas and interests via the observation of people's appearance and behavior.

To begin with, people's dress which mirrors a nation's aesthetic can be seen as symbol of a society's culture value. Different societies have different dressing inclination and this kind of inclination can help us understand and speculate a society's character. American like free styles of cloth and people pursue individuality which can show their speciality. So we can know American people’s attitudes of individuality. Chinese people always wear Chinese-style custom in festivals, which reflects that Chinese people’s admiring of their splendid history and social culture. Japanese and German, always wear neatly also reveal their working and living attitudes, that is serious and earnest. From what I have stated above, we can see that clothing style has a strong relationship with a nation's characters and inclinations. Therefore, we can understand a society by scrutinize people's dress.

What's more, clothing style also reflects social changes. In contemporary society, with the development of economic and culture globalization, people from various countries can easily exchange their ideas and knowledge, which can obviously bring the culture and values exchanging. This alternation, in fact can also be revealed by people’s clothing style. A case in point is the popularity of jeans. Jeans, which is the 20th centuries creation, first emerged in America and designed for special needs of working. Now, the significance of jeans is no longer such simple, but stands for a culture, a kind of fashion. Jeans' popularity is combining with the spread of American culture, and now we can find people ware jeans from different countries, no matter their backgrounds. This phenomenon reveals that people from different nations have accept America culture and ideas, pursuing freedom and democracy. Thus, dressing habit’s change reveals a change of society idea and interests.

Last but not least, let's take a look at people's behavior. For my part, in a democratic society, people's action can fully and correctly indicate their thoughts and ideas. For instance, in many western countries, people always pay attention to their governments and social issues and we can find the content of their chatting is political policy and ideas. To the contrary, if a nation's people are always talking about their private lives and do not care about the government's action, we may conclude that in this society, people are not aware of their power as a member of the society and haven't take part in the social lives. Similarly, in many societies, if we notice students’ choice of majors, we may see that many students choose the major such as MBA, medicine, lawyer, and so forth, it is clear that in this society, a majority of people choose careers based on the pragmatic consideration. Thus from the observation of people's behavior, we can also know a society's hidden idea and value.

To sum up, by observing people's cloth and behavior of a society, we can acquire reams of useful information about the society’s idea and interests. Moreover, the alternation of clothing style stands for a society’s change.

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占座先,正在看

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I agree with the speaker's assertion that people's cloth and action's may reflect their attitudes and inclinations. Hence, we can know a society's ideas and interests via the observation of people's appearance and behavior.

To begin with, people's dress which mirrors a nation's [U]aesthetic[/U] 这是adj can be seen as symbol of a society's culture value. Different societies have different dressing inclination and this kind of inclination can help us understand and speculate a society's character. [U]American like free styles of cloth and people pursue individuality which can show their speciality. So we can know American people’s attitudes of individuality. [/U] 很罗嗦，还有cloth是布好像不用作衣服，不如写成 American like wear unique clothes freely，from which we can learn American people’s attitudes toward freedom and individuality. Chinese people always wear Chinese-style custom in festivals, which reflects that Chinese people’s [U]admiring[/U] 有名词啊，而且从句也可以吧，为啥非用动名词 of their splendid history and social culture. Japanese and German, always wear neatly also reveal their working and living attitudes, that is [U]serious and earnest[/U] 似乎应该用名词. From what I have stated above, we can see that clothing style has a strong不如用close relationship with a nation's characters and inclinations. Therefore, we can understand a society by scrutinize people's dress.例子不错,挖掘原因不够深入,当然偶也经常犯这种毛病

What's more, clothing style also reflects social changes. In contemporary society, with the development of economic and culture globalization, people from various countries can easily exchange their ideas and knowledge, which can obviously bring the culture and values exchanging. This alternation, in fact can also be revealed by people’s clothing style. A case in point is the popularity of jeans. Jeans, which is the 20th centuries creation, first emerged in America and designed for special needs of working. Now, the significance of jeans is no longer such simple, but stands for a culture, a kind of fashion. Jeans' popularity is combining with the spread of American culture, and now we can find people ware jeans from different countries, no matter their backgrounds. This phenomenon reveals that people from different nations have accept America culture and ideas, pursuing freedom and democracy. Thus, dressing habit’s change reveals a change of society idea and interests.
貌似跟前段矛盾啊,多样化 Vs全球化?都穿牛仔了怎么体现各个社会不同哪？

Last but not least, let's take a look at people's behavior. For my part, in a democratic society, people's action can fully and correctly indicate their thoughts and ideas. For instance, in many western countries, people always pay attention to their governments and social issues and we can find the content of their chatting is political policy and ideas. To the contrary, if a nation's people are always talking about their private lives and do not care about the government's action, we may conclude that in this society, people are not aware of their power as a member of the society and haven't take part in the social lives. Similarly, in many societies, if we notice students’ choice of majors, we may see that many students choose the major such as MBA, medicine, lawyer, and so forth, it is clear that in this society, a majority of people choose careers based on the pragmatic consideration. Thus from the observation of people's behavior, we can also know a society's hidden idea and value.

To sum up, by observing people's cloth and behavior of a society, we can acquire reams of useful information about the society’s idea and interests. Moreover, the alternation of clothing style stands for a society’s change.

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好的，考完了一定帮大家多看看：）
意见正在考虑
谢谢

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占座了：）

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qiang zuo

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I agree with the speaker's assertion that people's cloth and action's may reflect their attitudes and inclinations. Hence, we can know a society's ideas and interests via the observation of people's appearance and behavior.

To begin with, people's dress which mirrors a nation's aesthetic (+s) can be seen as (+冠词)symbol of a society's culture value. Different societies have different dressing inclination and this kind of inclination can help us understand and speculate (vi. +about/on, 这里建议用about) a society's character. American like free styles of cloth and people (they?) pursue individuality which can show their speciality. So we can know American people’s attitudes of individuality. Chinese people always wear Chinese-style custom (costume?) in festivals, which reflects that Chinese people’s admiring of their splendid history and social culture.(splendid nation history and centuries-old culture) Japanese and German, (who) always wear neatly also reveal their working and living attitudes, that is(去掉that is?) serious and earnest. From what I have stated above, we can see that clothing style has a strong relationship with a (the) nation's characters and inclinations. Therefore, we can understand a society by scrutinize people's dress.

What's more, clothing style also reflects social changes. In contemporary society, with the development of economic and culture globalization, people from various countries can easily exchange their ideas and knowledge, which can obviously bring the culture and values exchanging. This alternation, in fact can also be revealed by people’s clothing style. A case in point is the popularity of jeans. Jeans, which is the 20th centuries (century’s) creation, first emerged in America and designed for special needs of working (work?). Now, the significance of jeans is no longer such simple, but stands for a culture, a kind of fashion. Jeans' popularity is combining with the spread of American culture, and now we can find people ware jeans from different countries, no matter their backgrounds (no matter what their backgrounds are? No matter可以直接加名词吗?). This phenomenon reveals that people from different nations have accept (accepted) America culture and ideas, pursuing freedom and democracy. Thus, dressing habit’s change reveals a change of society idea and interests.

Last but not least, let's take a look at people's behavior. For my part, in a democratic society, people's action can fully and correctly indicate (+s) their thoughts and ideas. For instance, in many western countries, people always pay attention to their governments and social issues and we can find the content of their chatting is political policy and ideas. To the contrary, if a nation's people are always talking about their private lives and do not care about the government's action, we may conclude that in this society, people are not aware of their power as a member of the society and haven't take part in the social lives. Similarly, in many societies, if we notice students’ choice of majors, we may see that many students choose the major such as MBA, medicine, lawyer, and so forth, it is clear that in this society, a majority of people choose careers based on the pragmatic consideration. Thus from the observation of people's behavior, we can also know a society's hidden idea and value.

To sum up, by observing people's cloth and behavior of a society, we can acquire reams of useful information about the society’s idea and interests. Moreover, the alternation of clothing style stands for a society’s change.

small bricks:)

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208．The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.

I agree with the speaker's assertion that people's cloth and action's may reflect their attitudes and inclinations. Hence, we can know a society's ideas and interests via the observation of people's appearance and behavior.

To begin with, people's dress which mirrors a nation's aesthetic can be seen as symbol of a society's culture value. Different societies have different dressing inclination and this kind of inclination can help us understand and speculate a society's character. American like free styles of cloth and people pursue individuality which can show their speciality. So we can know American people’s attitudes of individuality.似乎有点多余？ Chinese people always wear Chinese-style customcostume in festivals, which reflects that Chinese people’s admiring of their splendid history and social culture. Japanese and German, always wear neatly also reveal their working and living attitudes, that is serious and earnest. From what I have stated above, we can see that clothing style has a strong relationship with a nation's characters and inclinations. Therefore, we can understand a society by scrutinize people's dress.

What's more, clothing style also reflects social changes. In contemporary society, with the development of economic and culture globalization, people from various countries can easily exchange their ideas and knowledge, which can obviously bring the culture and values exchanging. This alternation, in fact can also be revealed by感觉in好一些 people’s clothing style. A case in point is the popularity of jeans. Jeans, which is the 20th centuries creation, first emerged in America and designed for special needs of working. Now, the significance of jeans is no longer such simplesignificance is simple?, but stands for a culture, a kind of fashion. Jeans' popularity is combining with the spread of American culture, and now we can find people ware jeans from different countries, no matter their backgrounds. This phenomenon reveals that people from different nations have accept America culture and ideas到美国去，打倒美帝国主义（与改文章无关^_^）, pursuing freedom and democracy. Thus, dressing habit’s change reveals a change of society idea and interests.

Last but not least, let's take a look at people's behavior. For my part, in a democratic society, people's action can fully and correctly indicate their thoughts and ideas. For instance, in many western countries, people always pay attention to their governments and social issues and we can find the content of their chatting is political policy and ideas. To the contrary, if a nation's people are always talking about their private lives and do not care about the government's action, we may conclude that in this society, people are not aware of their power as a member of the society and haven't take part in the social lives. Similarly, in many societies, if we notice students’ choice of majors, we may see that many students choose the major such as MBAcommercial science, MBA是学位不是专业, medicine, lawyer, and so forth, it is clear that in this society, a majority of people choose careers based on the pragmatic consideration. Thus from the observation of people's behavior, we can also know a society's hidden idea and value.

To sum up, by observing people's cloth and behavior of a society, we can acquire reams of useful information about the society’s idea and interests. Moreover, the alternation of clothing style stands for a society’s change.

不错，

用词讲究多了，非常准确！我这种超级纠错机都没办法了：（

对了，我只管用词准确哦，我一向对主谓一致、单复数没语感，bcomer这两点明显挺强的

第二段，是不是扯得有点远？我是说和题目的相关度？我认为，介于远与不远之间，有点擦边球的感觉。你怎么想？

但是，全文都没有让步啊，直线论证平铺直叙的形式？不过你的文章结构很完整，加好像不太好加的样子

这样吧，没话说了，这篇文章和以前一样，难改

赞一个！

加油^_^，放松

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限时写的吗，很清晰，看得让人觉得比较舒服 :)
我的一点建议：
1 开头不好
完全可以由问句，或陈述现实引入。
感觉楼主是把一个意思即同意speaker观点分两句说了，没什么意义
2 关于穿着看出观念变化 我认为有点拍老美之嫌哦 :D
  说全世界大多都接受牛仔没错啦，但这与自由民主牵扯有点远 不如说人们向往casual life style, 享受闲暇，不愿受统一正装束缚什么的
3 还有B3部分说通过学生的专业选择看出社会倾向实用 不是说不对 我觉得从古至今，大部分人们选择的职业都是以实用为主啊 比如学个木匠什么的~~

就这么多，祝你成功！
哦还有，"on" the contrary :D

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谢谢楼上三位:p
意见我都看过了，考试时会注意的：）