Issue151 第一次 路过走过请指正

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Issue151: 356 words 45 minutes
High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication.

Email, television and cell-phone are the most popular communication tools in our society. It is very convenient for people to contact with their friends, colleges or families. I would not agree with the opinion that this electronic media can inhibit the meaningful and thoughtful communication.
  
I really think the effective communication way has no direct connection with the communication tools. In old days, letters is the most usually used, whether the letter material is used by paper, the skin of animals or the wood or bamboo in china. Because of the long instance, and it is not very soon for people to receive their friend or family’s letter. So they always waste too long to write a letter to the receiver. To some extent, we can call the letters are meaningful and thoughtful. Though email, we can also write many useful and meaningful letters. I always subscribe the newsletters from the website, one of them is the famous writer "Jim John", who was a kind man to tell us how to make a life, make an excellent life. I am improved from his letters. Then you will see, the electric letters can also be written in meaningful and instructive.
   
In fact, whether the communication is meaningful or not depends on the people, who would like to talk to the other part in depth. When I was a college student, at that time, I rarely write letters to my parents. I write to them in short letters to tell them that I need their financial support. I have no common thinking to say, to talk with them. When I graduate from the university and I step into the society, I began to know the life is not easy. Then I know many things are my fault and begin to understand my parents. I phoned them, told them that I missed them, I would work hard and study hard. I begin to care my parents. As a result, they told me that I am growing and mature. When I missed my parents or I want to ask for help from my professor, I always direct use the phone to call them. And in the normal way, I always got the satisfied answers. I would like to say, phone or email is a good tool and very meaningful tool to me.

Admittedly, email and cell-phone is very convenient. And people always use them to transfer short message or any other emergencies. People seldom use them to talk into the night, to talk in depth. I think it is just because the social step is faster than before. People feel they have little time to talk and chat with their friends or families. It is just the communication way changed.

In a word, I think we should not assume the email, or the mobile phone is the culprit who prevents our meaningful and thoughtful communication. We should pay more attention on the real meaningful and thoughtful communication to our friends and families.

poohUID: 146994

Issue151: 356 words 45 minutes
High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication.

Email, television and cell-phone are the most popular communication tools in our society. It is very convenient for people to contact with their friends, colleges or families. I would为什么用would? do就可以了 not agree with the opinion that this electronic media can inhibit the meaningful and thoughtful communication.

I really think the effective communication way改成-->the effectiveness of communication has no direct connection with the communication tools. In old days, letters is the most usually used, whether the letter material is used by paper, the skin of animals or the wood or bamboo in china. Because of the long instance, and it is not very soon for people to receive their friend or family’s letter. So they always waste too long to write a letter to the receiver. 并不是写信时间长，而是送信时间长To some extent, we can call the letters are meaningful and thoughtful. Though email, we can also write many useful and meaningful letters. I always subscribe the newsletters from the website, one of them is the famous writer "Jim John", who was a kind man to tell us how to make a life, make an excellent life. I am improved from his letters. 例子很恰当Then you will see, the electric letters can also be written in meaningful and instructive.

In fact, whether the communication is meaningful or not depends on the people-->counterpart and whether he or she would like to .... , who would like to talk to the other part in depth. When I was a college student, at that time, I rarely write letters to my parents. I write to them in short letters to tell them that I need their financial support. I have no common thinking to say, to talk with them. When I graduate from the university and I step into the society, I began to know the life is not easy. Then I know many things are my fault and begin to understand my parents. I phoned them, told them that I missed them, I would work hard and study hard. I begin to care my parents. As a result, they told me that I am growing and mature. When I missed my parents or I want to ask for help from my professor, I always direct use the phone to call them. And in the normal way, I always got the satisfied answers. I would like to say, phone or email is a good tool and very meaningful tool to me. The example is really moving !

Admittedly, email and cell-phone is very convenient. And people always use them to transfer short message or any other emergencies. People seldom use them to talk into the night, to talk in depth. I think it is just because the social step is faster than before. People feel they have little time to talk and chat with their friends or families. It is just the communication way changed.最后这句应该落脚在人们not talk in depth并不是通讯方式发生变化带来的二是生活节奏导致的，才能证明你的观点

这点分析得很好，可惜展开得不够啊，再补充一下

In a word, I think we should not assume the email, or the mobile phone is the culprit who prevents our meaningful and thoughtful communication. We should pay more attention on the real meaningful and thoughtful communication to our friends and families

algorithmUID: 193410

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