ISSUE127 板砖飞啊！

冥界星灿UID: 184746

127. Facts are stubborn things. They cannot be altered by our wishes, our inclinations, or the dictates of our passions.

Suggesting facts are stubborn things, the author reasons they cannot be altered by people's wishes, inclinations, or the dictates of the passions. I agree with the stated position to some extent, however, I still hold the view that facts can be changed to the most extent.

At the first glance, however, facts are thoughts and materials existing in the world and exist as it is no matter what people wish, or think of them. Two strong examples at hands involving astronomy and biology. The earth is running around the sun for millions of years and didn't change for once one time even many people wishing it happened believed and prayed for its happen in the middle age Europe. The sons of pig is no doubly pigs and this will not change no matter what its breeder wishes or inclined. No matter how we are curious about the Venues and incline to live there, we still have to live on the earth from dawn until dark.

For most times, however, facts can be changed by human beings according to some nature laws. And that is why all kinds of sciences and technology derive and develop. By the biotechnology nowadays, it is entirely possible for a biologist to alter the nature characters of a pig by changing its genes such as making its heart has the same structure therefore compatible to human body. By doing so, we can plant it into the body of a patient suffering from severe heart disease. As to the orbit of the earth, we can foresee human beings will has the ability to change it sooner or later as physics develops. Then the only thing left will be weather we would like to do it. Perhaps human being in 3000 will move to any planets in solar system, as they like. What I really want to accentuate is the facts do can be changed due to the development of the human being's society.

Even further, when it comes to arts and sociology, the fact not only can be changed but totally determined by people. In the field of arts, the just field created as a reflection of the innersole hearts of human beings, all the thoughts delivered by paintings, sculptures, music, articles and so forth are not only can be changed but actually the production of human beings. One can create a production and change it as he/she like. To change things is the only reason we invent erasers and such a lot of gadgets of its kind. As to sociology and politics, moreover, almost all things are participated and altered by the mass. A persuasive evidence involving the different process of the development in distinguish areas in the world. Derived in almost the same situations, the mainland of China and Taiwan choose different kinds of regimes----one is socialism and the other capitalism. In the election of Americans Presidents, who will win is determined according to the attitudes of the Americans. If the President is thought to be breach of duty, an impeachment will take place. That is, even Presidents can be changed.

For my part, facts are stubborn to some extend but can be changed according to the wishes, inclinations, and dictates of people. And that is the way we impel the development in science and sociology of human society.

clausiusUID: 147331

Suggesting facts are stubborn things, the author reasons they cannot be altered by people's wishes, inclinations, or the dictates of the passions. I agree with the stated position [U]to some extent( 这种用法金山词霸查得到, 但韦氏查不到, 我个人不赞成用) [/U]  , however, I still hold the view that facts can be changed [U]to the most extent. (通上)[/U]

At the first glance, however, facts are thoughts and materials existing in the world and [U]exist (这里怎么变成动词了)[/U]  as it is no matter what people wish, or think of them. Two strong examples at hands involving astronomy and biology. The earth is running around the sun for millions of years and [U]didn't (口语用法,最好用did not)[/U]  change for once one time even many people wishing  [U]it (that would) [/U]  happened believed and prayed for its happen in the middle age Europe. The [U]sons(offspring 这里不适合用拟人吧) [/U]  of ([U]the)[/U]  pig is no [U]doubly  (doubt)[/U] [U] pigs ( 前面是is这怎么又来了个pigs?) [/U]  and this will not change no matter what its breeder wishes or inclined. ( 这个例子真搞笑,楼主您的想象力真丰富) [U]( Similarly) [/U]  no matter how we are curious about the Venues and [U]incline ( inclined )[/U]  to live there, we still have to live on the earth from dawn until dark.

For most times, however, facts can be changed by human beings according to some nature laws. And that is why all kinds of sciences and technology [U]( can) [/U]  derive and develop. By the biotechnology nowadays, it is entirely possible for a biologist to alter the nature characters of a [U]pig( 换一种动物比较好, 这不是自己打自己嘴巴么)[/U]  by changing its genes such as making its heart has the same structure therefore compatible to human body. By doing so, we can plant it into the body of a patient suffering from severe heart disease. [U]( 有过这样的事例么) [/U]  As to the orbit of the earth, we can foresee human beings will has [U]( will 后面怎么来了个has? ) [/U]  the ability to change it sooner or later as physics develops. Then the only thing left will be weather we would like to do it. Perhaps human being in 3000 will move to any planets in solar system, as they like. What I really want to accentuate is the facts do can be changed due to the development of the human being's society.

Even further, when it comes to arts and sociology, the fact not only can be changed but totally determined by people. In the field of arts, [U]the just  ( a )[/U]  field created as a reflection of the innersole hearts of human beings, all the thoughts [U]delivered ( conveyed)[/U]  by paintings, sculptures, music, articles and so forth are not only can be changed but actually the production of human beings. One can create a production and change it as he/she like. To change things is the only reason we invent erasers and such a lot of [U]gadgets ( 这个红宝的单词不用也罢) [/U]  of its kind. ( 这个橡皮的例子太牵强)As to sociology and politics, moreover, almost all things are participated and altered by the mass ([U]这个mass什么意思）.[/U]  A persuasive evidence involving the different process of the development in distinguish areas in the world. Derived in almost the same situations, the mainland of China and Taiwan choose different kinds of regimes----one is socialism and the other capitalism. In the election of Americans Presidents, who will win is determined according to the attitudes of the Americans. If the President is thought to be breach of duty, an impeachment will take place. That is, even Presidents can be changed.

For my part, facts are stubborn to some extend but can be changed according to the wishes, inclinations, and dictates of people. And that is the way we impel the development in science and sociology of human society.

楼主限时的吧,看的出来写得很仓促. 我看你的句法有点乱,虽然总的意思能明白.楼主例子虽然举得不少,但能用的不多.那个搞笑的例子楼主还是换了比较好.第三段中的例子都用了将来时,这就不能叫例子了,都是楼主的猜想,还是不要用了.

楼主参考.

冥界星灿UID: 184746

感谢楼上的认真批改^_^

意见很好，都接受了，谢过clausius！

我的语法真是太烂了，汗，一定努力提高；例子，不知道就开始以说理的方式编，呵呵

不是限时，写了两个小时，还改过呜呜——

还是要努力啊！

再次感谢！！！