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发表于 2005-2-11 01:56:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
选自孙远的网络课堂,自己打的

 The argument simply equates success with movie tickey sales,which is unwarranted.
 The mere fact that ticket sales in recent years for screenplay-based movies have exceeded those for book-based movies is insufficient evidence to conclude that writing screenplays now provides greater financial opportunity for writers.
 The argument fails to rule out the possibility that a writer engages in both types of writing as well as other types.
 Common sense tells us that a photographer can succeed by working in both media.
 Consequently, the mere fact that Company A holds a large share of the video-game hardware and software market does not support the claim that Company A will also fail.
 While this may be true in some cases,it is equally possible that only companies with products that are already best-sellers can afford the higher ad. Rate that popular shows demand.
 One can infer from the survey’s result that a full one-third of the respondents may have viewed the current benefits package unfavorably.
 If so,even through 3 percent more accidents occurred after the change, the author’s argument that changing the speed limit increases danger for drivers would be seriously weakened.
 In addition,while it is true that many voters change their minds several times before voting, and that some remain undecided until entering the voting booth, this is not true of everyone.
 Consequently,unless the author can demonstrate that the city will incur expenses that are not covered by the increased revenues from these projects,the author’s concern about these issue is unfounded.
 The author ignores other likely benefits of agricultural technology that affect food pieces only indirectly or not at all.
 However,unless the original cast and production team are involved in making the sequel,there is a good chance it will not be financially successful.
 Without such evidence, we cannot accept the author’s conclusion that no government funds should be directed toward maintaining the Styx River bridge.
 Finally,the author unfairly trivializes(v.小看、不重视) the severity of rural crime by simply comparing it with urban crime.
 Comprehensive analysis is necessary to identify the actual cause(s) of the company’s lowered profitability.
 The statistics offered in the announcement warrants only the conclusion that the decline of The Mercury’s circulation and the alleged competitor,the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle, coexisted in the past five years.
 Therefore,any decision aimed at addressing the problem of falling circulation must be based on more thorough investigation to gather sufficient data in order to narrow down and locate the actual cause(s) of the problem.
 From the survey quoted in the argument,however,we find no sign of such procedures for random sampling,and have good reason to doubt if the sample is representative enough to reflect the general attitudes of all workers as a whole.
 When samples are used to make general claims about a particular group, the samples should be close enough in time to the generation they are use to support, so that historical changes will not invalidate the generalization.
 The fact that the student performance improved after the application of interactive computer instruction does not necessarily imply that the new teaching method is responsible for the achievements.
 But we are told nothing about the way the poll was conducted and how well it represented the public opinions.
 But the problem is that the two situations are not similar enough to justify the analogical deduction.( analogical deduction例比推理)
 The example cited, while suggestive of these trends, is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to believe that the data drawn from this unnamed region is representative of the entire country.
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发表于 2005-2-11 08:09:26 |只看该作者
thx :)

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发表于 2005-2-11 21:33:56 |只看该作者
thx for sharing

转到作文版了~~~
If I'm who I am because I'm who I am and you're who you are because you are who you are, then I'm who I am and you're who you are.   

If,on the other hand, I'm who I am because you're who you are, and if you are who you are because I'm who I am, then I'm not who I am and you're not who you are.

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发表于 2005-2-11 21:56:58 |只看该作者
谢谢搂主分享了。

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发表于 2005-2-12 00:28:00 |只看该作者
谢谢分享

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发表于 2005-2-12 11:25:45 |只看该作者
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发表于 2005-2-12 13:25:44 |只看该作者
我制作了孙远作文argument终极版,里面包含了上面内容,并把关键处标出,需要的可以下载。
菜鸟考G啦,请老鸟支招~

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发表于 2005-2-12 15:13:03 |只看该作者
Thanks a lot!
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