Issue41 好难写啊,借鉴了很多人的文章,大家看看

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Issue41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

模仿的痕迹可能很重,参考了很多文章,不知道有没有关系,没限时,这题目真BT,可能我不大熟悉这个题, 什么Psychic and paranormal pursuits,真不好举例子，最后个例子自己造的，很弱智，呵呵，大家批吧．

In this issue, the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits in society is discussed. The author assumes that nonmainstream science takes the main place in society. However, in my opinion, although these inquiries satisfies certain human needs in phsychology world of human beings which are not addressed by mainstream science, the conflicts it causes overweight the only advantage.

Admittedly, people easily turn to these nonmainstream areas of inquiry for solution, which could not provide by rigid and cold science. In modern society, science has developed so well that it can explain amount of natural phenomenon logically and reasonably. Unfortunately, it could not tell human beings their separate future by induction and deduction. Faced with this uncertainty and doubt, people resort to astrology and fortune-telling for guidance and expect these inquiries would help them to make the best decision. Another reason why nonmainstream science is favored by a few people is that it soothes the poor and oppressed. When they are frustrated by the reality for a long time and are unable to struggle themselves from oppression, people are likely to lose the reliance on the rational analysis and wish a gray of hope from "authority". This need is well satisfied by psychic and paranormal pursuits.

While these inquiries may help people feel better about destiny and circumstances, I doubt whether the effects are always positive. First of all, people depending on fortune teller will risk the danger of being lazy. If some one promised them a splendid future, they might sit at home waiting the success to fall down rather then work hard. Or they might feel unwilling to slog day in and day out since the future is told to be pale. Moreover, too much depending on fortune teller and other nonmainstream areas of inquiry make people illogical. For example, many a time, a husband tries to divorce with his wife for the only reason that fortune teller inform him that the bad luck is from his wife. It may seem ridiculous to others but seem understandable to the husband because he has stopped making decision with critical thinking and common sense. Suborn adherence to irrational belief based on emprical facts lead to intolerance.

On a societal level, nonmainstream pursuits have often led all to atrocities. A case in point is an accident caused by a female fortune teller 5 years ago in a small village in China. She claimed that she had the water from the heaven which can prevent illness and help people make money. Some believer gave her a mount of money for the water to drink. The water is green. It makes people believe the water is special. A fewer days later, people who drank the water all found something wrong with stomach. The government involved in this event and the green water is finally testified as the polluted water from a dead river. Although this kind of accident seldom happened on educated people, it well demonstrates the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry and psychic and paranormal pursuits. They could not play a vital role in modern society considered the potential harm to populace and society.

To sum up, I concede the pursuits listed above find their place in people’s psychological world in so far as they afford people solace and so-called certainty. However, they could not play a vital role in modern society where science is well developed, because people depending on nonmainstream pursuits will risk the danger of being lazy and illogical. The relationship of each other and then society will be destroyed by pseudo “scientists” and their irrational believers.

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Issue41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

模仿的痕迹可能很重,参考了很多文章,不知道有没有关系,没限时,这题目真BT,可能我不大熟悉这个题, 什么Psychic and paranormal pursuits,真不好举例子，最后个例子自己造的，很弱智，呵呵，大家批吧．

In this issue, the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits in society is discussed. 不要在重复原题了，以后也永远不要这样做The author assumes that nonmainstream science takes the main place in society. However, in my opinion, although these inquiries satisfies certain human needs in phsychology world of human beings which are not addressed by mainstream science, the conflicts it causes overweight the only advantage. only改成some比较好开头需要斟酌一下，需要再看看范文和别人的开头。

Admittedly, people easily turn to these nonmainstream areas of inquiry for solution, which could not beprovide by rigid and cold science.我觉得应该是严谨的科学。用rigid和cold需要斟酌 In modern society, science has developed so well that it can explain amount of natural phenomenon logically and reasonably. Unfortunately, it could not tell human beings their separate future by induction and deduction. 这一句说得不明白Faced with this uncertainty and doubt, people resort to astrology and fortune-telling for guidance and expect these inquiries would help them to make the best decision. 说的太白话了，有点缺少academic感觉：这么翻译，正好迎合了某些人对未来的预见的需求。Another reason why nonmainstream science is favored by a few people is that it soothes the poor and oppressed. When they are frustrated by the reality for a long time and are unable to struggle themselves from oppression, people are likely to lose the reliance on the rational analysis and wish a gray of hope from "authority". This need is well satisfied by psychic and paranormal pursuits.这段论证的还好，比较详尽

While these inquiries may help people feel better about destiny and circumstances, I doubt whether the effects are always positive. First of all, people depending on fortune teller will risk the danger of being lazy. If some one promised them a splendid future, they might sit at home waiting the success to fall down rather then work hard. Or they might feel unwilling to slog day in and day out since the future is told to be pale. Moreover, too much depending on fortune teller and other nonmainstream areas of inquiry make people illogical. For example, many a time, a husband tries to divorce with his wife for the only reason that fortune teller inform him that the bad luck is from his wife. It may seem ridiculous to others but seem understandable to the husband because he has stopped making decision with critical thinking and common sense. Suborn adherence to irrational belief based on emprical facts lead to intolerance.
例证之前的叙述我觉得不深入，好像是在叙述现象，比如什么坐着等着阿，什么不努力工作了阿。但是，这些现象的根本源头是人们对美好未来的一种心灵诉求，却畏惧现实，不肯努力的结果。这么翻译一下吧。另外，例证，让我感觉是你编出来的。你要举身边的例子，怎么得业的编个背景阿。要不让人听了就这感觉，从前阿，有个……。这不是例证，是故事。身边的例子可以。但是你的说出是谁。怎么回事？这就行了
On a societal level, nonmainstream pursuits have often led all to acorcities. A case in point is an accident caused by a female fortune teller 5 years ago in a small village in China. She claimed that she had the water from the heaven which can prevent illness and help people make money. Some believer gave her a mount of money for the water to drink. The water is green. It makes people believe the water is special. A fewer days later, people who drank the water all found something wrong with stomach. The government involved in this event and the green water is finally testified as the polluted water from a dead river. Although this kind of accident seldom happened on educated people, it well demonstrates the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry and psychic and paranormal pursuits. They could not play a vital role in modern society considered the potential harm to populace and society.例子，要交代背景。事实你可以编是哪个报纸，哪个省出来的这种事故。反正老外不知道。但是这个增加了你的例证的可信度。第二个问题，故事过于detail，三句两句说完就行了。然后展开针对例子和分论点关系的论证。还有这个例子你没有着重lead all to acrocities。例子本身选取可以，但是没有着重出来这个方面

To sum up, I concede the pursuits listed above find their place in people’s psychological world in so far as they afford people solace and so-called certainty.这句说的不错 However, they could not play a vital role in modern society where science is well developed, because people depending on nonmainstream pursuits will risk the danger of being lazy and illogical. The relationship of each other and then society will be destroyed by pseudo “scientists” and their irrational believers.结尾还可以，还预示了非主流科学的对社会的危害

总结一下你的问题：
1分论点的我觉得比较平铺，既不是着眼于各个方面，也不太深入
什么是深入：挖掘出这个statementa各个方面的影响。可以递进，也可以并列。
2 文章的例证都不好，
a too detail
  b叙述没有合题意
c自己编出来的故事可以，但要做到人们都能相信。比如，咱们小时候借用名人名言，很多同学自己编，但编出来的怎么得也得像。一点。加一些背景在后面就好了。比如什么报纸，或者你的什么亲戚经历的。这样让人信服

3用中文考虑分析过程，分论点哪个方面，然后翻译自己的思维和想法。
没有几个人能直接用英文思考。

鬼谷子UID: 159645

No.1 Issue41 好难写啊,借鉴了很多人的文章,大家看看
Issue41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

模仿的痕迹可能很重,参考了很多文章,不知道有没有关系,没限时,这题目真BT,可能我不大熟悉这个题, 什么Psychic and paranormal pursuits,真不好举例子，最后个例子自己造的，很弱智，呵呵，大家批吧．

In this issue, the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits in society is discussed. The author assumes that nonmainstream science takes the main place in society. 【首先要说我不赞成restate的开头的，而且，你这里restate的很罗嗦】However, in my opinion, although these inquiries satisfies certain human needs in phsychology 【psychology？psychological？】world of human beings which are not addressed by mainstream science, the conflicts it causes overweight the only advantage.

Admittedly, people easily turn to these nonmainstream areas of inquiry for solution, which could not provide by rigid and cold science. In modern society, science has developed so well that it can explain amount of natural phenomenon logically and reasonably. Unfortunately, it could not tell human beings their separate【？respective？】 future by induction and deduction. Faced with this uncertainty and doubt, people resort to astrology and fortune-telling for guidance and expect these inquiries would help them to make the best decision. Another reason why nonmainstream science is favored by a few people is that it soothes the poor and oppressed. When they are frustrated by the reality for a long time and are unable to struggle themselves from oppression, people are likely to lose the reliance on the rational analysis and wish a gray of hope from "authority". This need is well satisfied by psychic and paranormal pursuits. 【这里说的很像是宗教。为了区分我觉得你应该说因为他们对于掌握自己的命运失去信心所以诉诸于这些非主流领域】
【这段内容展开的还可以，我觉得只有一个问题，就是开头不要用让步的形式，直接说就可以了，感觉开头就让步让人不舒服，而且某种程度上面削弱你的观点，个人意见】

While these inquiries may help people feel better about destiny and circumstances, I doubt whether the effects are always positive. First of all, people depending on fortune teller will risk the danger of being lazy. If some one promised them a splendid future, they might sit at home waiting the success to fall down rather then work hard. Or they might feel unwilling to slog day in and day out since the future is told to be pale. 【我觉得这是可能出现的结果，但不是必然出现的结果。如果这些人不是完全的依赖于fortune telling来生活呢？或者说，只是用fortune telling来寻求一种安慰呢？】Moreover, too much depending on 【这里比上一个对了too much，是否上一个也该是too much的，过度依赖才对呢？】fortune teller and other nonmainstream areas of inquiry make people illogical. For example, many a time, a husband tries to divorce with his wife for the only reason that fortune teller inform him that the bad luck is from his wife. It may seem ridiculous to others but seem understandable to the husband because he has stopped making decision with critical thinking and common sense. Suborn adherence to irrational belief based on emprical facts lead to intolerance. 【我觉得这个例子不好，这种情况可能出现在几百年前，但是现在已经不是这样了，而且，我觉得不是nonmainstream让人民illogical了，应该是说这种方法本身是illogical的比较正确】
【这里主要说了两点fortune telling的问题，我觉得第一点应该强调一下“过度依赖”，第二点我觉得不是很成立，可以考虑一下换成别的内容】

On a societal level, 【那么前面的就应该算是个人的角度？最好在上一段有明确的说明，这样结构更清晰】nonmainstream pursuits have often led all to atrocities. 【惊人的论点】 A case in point is an accident caused by a female fortune teller 5 years ago in a small village in China. She claimed that she had the water from the heaven which can prevent illness and help people make money. Some believer gave her a mount of money for the water to drink. The water is green. It makes people believe the water is special. A fewer days later, people who drank the water all found something wrong with stomach. The government involved in this event and the green water is finally testified as the polluted water from a dead river. 【这个例子应该算是骗钱，不是atrocity吧？】 Although this kind of accident seldom happened on educated people, it well demonstrates the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry and psychic and paranormal pursuits. They could not play a vital role in modern society considered the potential harm to populace and society. 【后面的论述牵强】

To sum up, I concede the pursuits listed above find their place in people’s psychological world in so far as they afford people solace and so-called certainty. However, they could not play a vital role in modern society where science is well developed, because people depending on nonmainstream pursuits will risk the danger of being lazy and illogical. The relationship of each other and then society will be destroyed by pseudo “scientists” and their irrational believers.
【我觉得你的问题首先就出现在结构上面，B1让步说nonmainstream的作用，B2fortune telling结果不一定好B3说从社会的角度nonmainstream带来暴行，我认为这样的结构会很乱B1的让步我还是倾向于放在后面，B2和B3的内容根本没在同一个层次上面，要么你就都是从全面的nonmainstream上面来说，分角度，一方面个人，一方面社会；要么你就一个一个说，astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits各个展开。另外，例子确实是个问题，其实真实与否不是最重要的，使用例子最重要的是要fit】

这里是我以前找的一个相关的资料，给你看看，也许会有帮助：

Humans have long been interested in predicting the future. 这一句就说明了原因，人们希望预测未来。It is impossible to know when groups of people became aware that what happens in the future is likely to differ from what is happening at the present moment, but realize this they did. Over the years, societies have developed various ways to try to divine the future. Some groups attempted to acquire insight into events through magic or contact with the supernatural. To do this, they might have read portents in the entrails of animals or in tea leaves. In ancient Rome, generals used these methods to calculate their likely success in upcoming battles. Reliance on patterns of stars as a means of predicting personal futures also developed early on. Astrology, the study of how events on earth correspond to the positions and movements of astronomical bodies, was a key science in classical China, Greece, and Rome, and in the Islamic Middle East. Although astrology and astronomy went their separate ways during the 1500s, as late as the 17th century many Europeans consulted astrologers to calculate the fate of an imminent wedding or a sign of illness. For many years, scientists have rejected the principles of astrology. Even so, millions of people continue to believe in or practice it.

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In this issue, the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits in society is discussed. 这句貌似有些废话，等于把题目又重复一次，然后你后面还说the author assumes...又说一边，很罗索The author assumes that nonmainstream science takes the main place in society. However, in my opinion, although these inquiries satisfies certain human needs in phsychologypsychology? world of human beings which are not addressed by mainstream science, the conflicts itit指代什么？ causes overweight the only advantage.only advantage是什么？这后半句意思模糊，读起来也有些不顺，再斟酌一下。开头重复题目用了一大半，有些累赘，建议换成别的方式或者怎么简洁一些

Admittedly, people easily turn to these nonmainstream areas of inquiry for solution, which could not provide by rigid and cold science.rigid and cold啥意思？怎么修饰科学？ In modern society, science has developed so well that it can explain amount of natural phenomenon logically and reasonably. Unfortunately, it could not tell human beings their separate future by induction and deduction.这俩词不错，还很押韵呵呵。不过貌似前面一句没说到归纳演绎吧，突然一个unfortunately跳过来有些不连贯 Faced with facing就可以了this uncertainty and doubt, people resort to astrology and fortune-telling for guidance and expect these inquiries would help them to make the best decision. Another reason why nonmainstream science is favored by a few people is that it soothes the poor and oppressed. When they are frustrated by the reality for a long time and are unable to struggle themselves from oppression, people are likely to lose the reliance on the rational analysis and wish a gray of hope from "authority". This need is well satisfied by psychic and paranormal pursuits.前面刚说人们寻求心理抚慰等，然后就说这些满足了要求。怎么well satisfied还是要说一些，毕竟是说算命了占星的作用的。这段思路不错

While these inquiries may help people feel better about destiny and circumstances, I doubt whether the effects are always positive. 看到这里开始思考是不是有些偏了，题目是说play a vital role in society，这里说影响不一定总是积极的，感觉不好扣住题目了，再看后面的First of all, people depending on fortune teller will risk the danger of being lazy. If some one promised them a splendid future, they might sit at home waiting the success to fall down rather then work hard. Or they might feel unwilling to slog day in and day out since the future is told to be pale. Moreover, too much depending on fortune teller and other nonmainstream areas of inquiry make people illogical. For example, many a time, a husband tries to divorce with his wife for the only reason that fortune teller inform him that the bad luck is from his wife. It may seem ridiculous to others but seem understandable to the husband because he has stopped making decision with critical thinking and common sense. Suborn adherence to irrational belief based on emprical? facts lead to intolerance.这句没明白。看完了这段觉得有些歪了，说了一些现象，使人懒惰了，丧气了等等，但是证明的是什么？只说明了过分相信这些东西对人生是有害的，和题目说的play a vital role in society联系不上，即使联系上，也可以理解为这些东西actually played a vital role,因为对那么多人有那多消极的影响。个人感觉这段写偏了

On a societal level, nonmainstream pursuits have often led all to atrocities.看了TS觉得又顺着上段的思路了，仍然说的是负面影响而不是是否能满足一些主流领域不能满足的人类需求以及在社会上是否占有重要地位 A case in point is an accident caused by a female fortune teller 巫婆？witch5 years ago in a small village in China. She claimed that she had the water from the heaven which can prevent illness and help people make money. Some believer gave her a mount of money for the water to drink. The water is green. It makes people believe the water is special. A fewer days later, people who drank the water all found something wrong with stomach. The government involved in this event and the green water is finally testified as the polluted water from a dead river. Although this kind of accident seldom happened on educated people, it well demonstrates the role of nonmainstream areas of inquiry and psychic and paranormal pursuits. They could not play a vital role in modern society considered the potential harm to populace and society.噢，后面说回来了，不过圈圈绕了不少哪，和和。而且例子有些不太合适，不典型而且觉得不够真实。一个关键问题，你说那个巫婆的故事不属于nonmainstream吧？分明是骗子和犯罪，而像占星等有的还是很正规的，而且有的具有一定的科学性

To sum up, I concede the pursuits listed above find their place in people’s psychological world in so far as they afford people solace and so-called certainty. However, they could not play a vital role in modern society where science is well developed, because people depending on nonmainstream pursuits will risk the danger of being lazy and illogical.这个because的原因不具有说服力 The relationship of each other and then society will be destroyed by pseudo 没说是假的吧？“scientists” and their irrational believers.

B1思路很好，论证的也还清晰，稍微跳跃了一点就是
B2有些偏了，B3的例子不恰当而且绕圈圈。B2B3都不够很好的扣题，说的有些远了。
个人看法，理解题目的时候那个关键“nonmainstream/mainstream”可以按时间范畴分比较好，可以说古代科学不发达的时候这些东西确实play a vital role 而且观测星空可以说是天文学的起源，贵族皇室国家统治者经常用这些来预测自然灾害等等，对人们的生活也有很重要的影响。
而到现代社会，科技的发达基本可以满足人类需求，不需要用这些古老的办法，它们就逐渐变的不再那么重要云云，而为什么不重要可以细化为几个方面：对个人的影响（例如现代人的思想很解放具有什么样的科学观什么自主把握命运，晕。。。说的真恶），对社会的影响(例如社会是向前发展了什么科技使社会产生了巨大变化了等)，对家庭的影响。但是重要说明它也没有saitsfy human beings因此不那么vital.但是你却一直说过分相信这个不好不好，对于这些东西为什么不能满足人类需求占有重要地位的分析不够深入。
这篇我没写，想了想就很头疼，我觉得还是同意题目的观点貌似比较好说点。因为人们还是有着对未来的憧憬的，不然为虾米总是要许愿了拜上帝了云云，而先行的科学也都是解决面前问题，对一些精神需求的满足就通过这些东东了，嘻嘻。
个人看法，我界个银自己逻辑也乱，说的也乱糟糟的，见笑呢，呵呵一起努力！

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鬼谷子把我要说的都说了：）
再补充一点，你的让步段更多地在分析人们为什么会turn to非主流，我觉得侧重点应该是放在非主流满足了什么需要，虽然论证起来差不多，但是TS是不一样的。而且，作为让步段篇幅也长了点。让步段的作用应该是为了论证的严谨，放在开头和过长篇幅都会影响论点的说服力

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个人看法，理解题目的时候那个关键“nonmainstream/mainstream”可以按时间范畴分比较好，可以说古代科学不发达的时候这些东西确实play a vital role 而且观测星空可以说是天文学的起源，贵族皇室国家统治者经常用这些来预测自然灾害等等，对人们的生活也有很重要的影响。
而到现代社会，科技的发达基本可以满足人类需求，不需要用这些古老的办法，它们就逐渐变的不再那么重要云云，而为什么不重要可以细化为几个方面：对个人的影响（例如现代人的思想很解放具有什么样的科学观什么自主把握命运，晕。。。说的真恶），对社会的影响(例如社会是向前发展了什么科技使社会产生了巨大变化了等)，对家庭的影响。但是重要说明它也没有saitsfy human beings因此不那么vital.但是你却一直说过分相信这个不好不好，对于这些东西为什么不能满足人类需求占有重要地位的分析不够深入。

吱吱的这个角度不错，这道题本身就是有两个方面去论述：
1）是不是满足了某些需要
2）是不是扮演了vital的角色，很多人把第二点变成了should/could不should/could扮演vital的角色

everystepUID: 168194

To fengboallan ：刚才去拜年吃饭回得晚了点，请见谅阿，没办法，JJDD比较多呵。

不要在重复原题了，以后也永远不要这样做,,only改成some比较好开头需要斟酌一下，需要再看看范文和别人的开头。

开头确实太累赘，第一句取掉，加一段背景吧，如下：
Astrology and fortune-telling have existed for a long time and, in modern society with blooming science, many people believe in them. The author also assumes that nonmainstream science takes the main place in society. However, in my opinion, although these inquiries satisfies certain human needs in psychology world of human beings which are not addressed by mainstream science, the conflicts it causes overweight certain advantages.

例证之前的叙述我觉得不深入，好像是在叙述现象，比如什么坐着等着阿，什么不努力工作了阿。但是，这些现象的根本源头是人们对美好未来的一种心灵诉求，却畏惧现实，不肯努力的结果。

一针见血，,刚才我看了一篇关于如何举例的文章，讲到了DETAILS和EXAMPLES的区别，我应该把潜在理由写出来，重写如下
While these inquiries may help people feel better about destiny and circumstances, I doubt whether the effects are always positive. First of all, people depending on fortune teller will risk the danger of being lazy. If some one promised them a splendid future, they will lose the drive to work hard and just wait the success to fall down. Or they might feel unwilling to slog day in and day out since the future is told to be pale and they can do nothing to change their fate.

总结一下你的问题：
1分论点的我觉得比较平铺，既不是着眼于各个方面，也不太深入
2 文章的例证都不好，3用中文考虑分析过程，

谢谢Allan，深入挖掘，例证贴切，记住了。英文分析没那水平，中文也不行，菜菜---，你的中文很厉害哦

everystepUID: 168194

To 鬼谷子，谢谢大侠,你是我榜样，呵呵

【？respective？】

是respective :p

B1的让步我还是倾向于放在后面，B2和B3的内容根本没在同一个层次上面，要么你就都是从全面的nonmainstream上面来说，分角度，一方面个人，一方面社会；要么你就一个一个说，astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits各个展开

你提醒了我，结构确实很重要，也是逻辑的一种体现，我的文章层次感不强，因为下笔之间就没分好，提纲还是要再改
你给的材料真好，有点明白supernatural等存在的原因了，让想我支持play a vital role了 :)
不过就一个原因好像难分出分论点来写，还是反对好写，就不知道像zhizhi说的我偏题，大侠再指点一下。

everystepUID: 168194

To victoriazhizhi ，谢谢你给我改文章，一定回拍

Unfortunately, it could not tell human beings their separate future by induction and deduction.这俩词不错，还很押韵呵呵。不过貌似前面一句没说到归纳演绎吧，突然一个unfortunately跳过来有些不连贯

思维条跃是真的啊，不过上面我说LOGICALLY了，逻辑嘛就这两招，呵呵，我再想想，是挺突兀的

怎么well satisfied还是要说一些，毕竟是说算命了占星的作用的。

加一句如下
This need is well satisfied by exciting and encouraging indication from psychic and paranormal pursuits and other nonmainstream inquiries.

理解题目的时候那个关键“nonmainstream/mainstream”可以按时间范畴分比较好，

这个可以考虑,不过我文章要重写了

但是重要说明它也没有satisfy human beings因此不那么vital.但是你却一直说过分相信这个不好不好，对于这些东西为什么不能满足人类需求占有重要地位的分析不够深入

我是想，占星会带来那么多问题，做决定的时候更多的是依赖科学而不是占星什么的，所以不可能在社会中占主导地位，要是都依赖占星，不是123---不好，恩，我应该把为什么不占主导地位说清楚-----最后一段再想想

everystepUID: 168194

是不是扮演了vital的角色，很多人把第二点变成了should/could不should/could扮演vital的角色

在文章开始是不是要VITAL 定义一下,会比较好?

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回来查东西 刚好看见你一堆回复 可见态度很认真 思考也很多 赞一个
感觉给vital定义作用不是很大 当然一两句也可以说
龙飞的意思是说 这个题目是在讨论“是不是”play a vital role.而你的有些倾向与“should/不should”play a vital role.
关于偏题不偏题的问题 中午我也问了谷子 我说 我感觉B2B3歪了点 但是就我一个人提出来了是不是我自己歪了？ 他的意思貌似你有些地方绕远了点 但是也许他还有自己的想法吧 你再问问他的 ;)

今天估计我会发文章 有空去砸砸的 使劲砸噢  :p