issue153 skeptism in study还有六天考，还请大家多多赐教

louchen1984UID: 172975

153"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."

I tend to agree with the speaker that students should bring a certain amount to whatever they study instead of accepting it passively. An absolute passive absorption of what they have been introduced will both impede their true understanding of the knowledge and impair their ability to think critically and independently, and thus will do no good to the mental development of a student. However, an overdue skepticism of all the knowledge, especially when it comes to moral standards, is inappropriate and will be harmful to the establishment of students' personal value system.

Fist of all, a certain amount of skepticism is both indispensable and beneficial in the learning process. If a student just nods whatever is taught by teachers or books, tries to memorize all the knowledge and facts he studies, imitates the "correct" methods to solve problems, and always follow the instructions of tutors with no objection, then how can he virtually understands the knowledge anything else he studies? By means of such rote study without a positive participation in the learning process, neither academic average nor philosophies of life could ever be obtained. As we know, true learning is an enterprise of questioning and experimenting the known knowledge, as well as exploring and discovering the unknown facts, which require students to find out the doubtful point in what they study, then either think it separately and critically or debate with others, and finally reach a reasonable consensus. What really matters is not who is right, but what is right. Only through skeptism and intensive study of what has been taught, can a student fully understand the intrinsic traits of a theory or principle. For example, if a physics school student just accept Newton's Three Laws of Mechanics without any doubt about its correctness and applicable situations, it will be difficult for him to enter the realm of quantum mechanics, in which Newton's laws are upset. In the same spirit, if a law school students just takes all the existent laws as granted and never asks why they are indispensable to the law system or whether they are indisputably just, then he cannot understand the true essence of laws. In short, a certain skeptism in study will help students to fully understand the world and enhance their ability of critical thinking.

However, the pivotal point in this issue is the word "certain", which we should take it as "moderate". The personal value system of a student has not been fully developed yet, especially for a primary school student to whom the world is simple and even a blank page. Thus they should accept the facts, ideas and concepts first, and until they have accumulated a certain amount of knowledge and the ability of judgment, they are free to suspect and question whatever they think to be questionable. After all, most existent knowledge have gone through the long process of review and are proved in practice and application, which makes them trustworthy. The necessity of trust is most important in the realm of morality. If students doubt the correctness of the acknowledged moral standards instilled into them, and take action to upset them as well as disobey the legal rules which are designed to sustain such standards, the balance of society will be undermined as a result. Therefore, a certain skeptism is necessary, but in certain area and should be lifted to a certain stage.

In conclusion, skeptism is an essential part of study process since passive acceptance of whatever is taught will prevent students from understanding thoroughly and thinking critically. However, this spirit should be applied in moderate, otherwise it will be impossible to form one's ideology and knowledge, and even disturb the balance of society.

冥界星灿UID: 184746

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冥界星灿UID: 184746

153"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."

I tend to agree with the speaker that students should bring a certain amountof suspicion? to whatever they study instead of accepting it passively. An absolute passive absorption of what they have been introduced will both impede their true understanding of the knowledge and impair their ability to think critically and independently, and thus will do no good to the mental development of a student. However, an overdue skepticism of all the knowledge, especially when it comes to moral standards, is inappropriate and will be harmful to the establishment of students' personal value system.

Fist of all, a certain amount of skepticism is both indispensable and beneficial in the learning process. If a student just nods whatever is taught by teachers or books, tries to memorize all the knowledge and facts he studies, imitates the "correct" methods to solve problems, and always follow the instructions of tutors with no objection, then how can hehe/she virtually understands the knowledge anything elseanything else? he studies? By means of such rote study without a positive participation in the learning process, neither academic averageacademic average? nor philosophies of lifephilosophies of life? could ever be obtained. As we know, true learning is an enterprise of questioning and experimenting the known knowledge, as well as exploring and discovering the unknown facts, which require students to find out the doubtful point in what they study, then either think it separately and critically or debate with others, and finally reach a reasonable consensusconsensus may not be always true.建议不要一句话写的这么长 What really matters is not who is right, but what is right.这句话跟题目有什么关系？ Only through skeptism and intensive study of what has been taught, can a student fully understand the intrinsic traits of a theory or principle. For example, if a physics school student just accept Newton's Three Laws of Mechanics without any doubt about its correctness and applicable situations, it will be difficult for him to enter the realm of quantum mechanics, in which Newton's laws are upset. In the same spirit, if a law school students just takes all the existent laws as granted and never asks why they are indispensable to the law system or whether they are indisputably just, then he cannot understand the true essence of laws. In short, a certain skeptism in study will help students to fully understand the world and enhance their ability of critical thinking上文有证明critical thinking吗？.这段好长，但感觉思路有点散。好多话应该可以精简

However, the pivotal point in this issue is the word "certain", which we should take it as "moderate". The personal value system of a student has not been fully developed yet, especially for a primary school student to whom the world is simple and even a blank page对孩子而言，世界是一张白纸？这个说法——. Thus they should accept the facts, ideas and concepts first, and until they have accumulated a certain amount of knowledge and the ability of judgment, they are free to suspect and question whatever they think to be questionable关于until的用法。后半句应该为they are not free to-----. After all, most existent knowledge have gone through the long process of review and are proved in practice and application, which makes them trustworthy. The necessity of trust is mostmore? important in the realm of morality. If students doubt the correctness of the acknowledged moral standards instilled into them, and take action to upset them as well as disobey the legal rules which are designed to sustain such standards, the balance of society will be undermined as a result.example? Therefore, a certain skeptism is necessary, but in certain area and should be lifted to a certain stage.还是感觉有点散。楼主考虑写成As it comes to the study of science,----;When concerning to the moral system----两部分呢？

In conclusion, skeptism is an essential part of study process since passive acceptance of whatevereverything, whatever provided is taught will prevent students from understanding thoroughly and thinking critically. However, this spirit可以考虑换个词 should be applied in moderate, otherwise it will be impossible to form one's ideology and knowledge, and even disturb the balance of society我知道你这句对应道德方面，但好像还是有点突然.

感觉长句太多。所以有时候觉得有点罗嗦。建议表述观点的句子一句话（短一点）说明。楼主考虑

总体写得不错，加油，快熬出头了^_^

davidjackyUID: 135962

No.1 issue153 skeptism in study还有六天考，还请大家多多赐教
153"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."

I tend to agree with the speaker that students should bring a certain amount to whatever they study instead of accepting it passively. An absolute passive absorption of what they have been introduced will both impede their true understanding of the knowledge and impair their ability to think critically and independently, and thus will do no good to the mental development of a student. However, an overdue skepticism of all the knowledge, especially when it comes to moral standards, is inappropriate and will be harmful to the establishment of students' personal value system.
在细细分析的文章之前，我有种感觉就是：你要对However后的内容进行深入论证，换句话论证的重心在后面，可是你的行文绝对不是，不知道别人怎么看这个问题，也许是我GRE阅读毒害太深，我总感觉你的意思在后面，不知道其它人怎么看？

Fist of all, a certain amount of skepticism is both indispensable and beneficial in the learning process. If a student just nods whatever is taught by teachers or books, tries to memorize all the knowledge and facts he studies, imitates the "correct" methods to solve problems, and always follow the instructions of tutors with no objection, then how can he virtually understands the knowledge anything else he studies? By means of such rote study without a positive participation in the learning process, neither academic average nor philosophies of life could ever be obtained. As we know, true learning is an enterprise of questioning and experimenting【testing】 the known knowledge, as well as exploring and discovering the unknown facts, which require students to find out the doubtful point in what they study, then either think it separately and critically or debate with others, and finally reach a reasonable consensus【地道的中文表达，把它分开写吧】. What really matters is not who is right, but what is right. Only through skeptism and intensive study of what has been taught,【逗号不要】 can a student fully understand the intrinsic traits of a theory or principle. For example, if a physics school student just accept Newton's Three Laws of Mechanics without any doubt 【about its correctness and applicable situations罗嗦，不要】, it will be difficult for him to enter the realm of quantum mechanics, in which Newton's laws are upset. In the same spirit, if a law school students just takes all the existent laws as granted and never asks why they are indispensable to the law system or whether they are indisputably just, then he cannot understand the true essence of laws. In short, a certain skeptism in study will help students to fully understand the world and enhance their ability of critical thinking.这段的论述倒是很完整，可以分为两段来写。

However, the pivotal point in this issue is the word "certain", which we should take it as "moderate". The personal value system of a student has not been fully developed yet, especially for a primary school student to whom the world is simple and even a blank page【这个比喻如果是自己写的，最好改改说吧】. Thus they should accept the facts, ideas and concepts first, and until【用在否定句，toefl改错】 they have accumulated a certain amount of knowledge and the ability of judgment, they are free to suspect and question whatever they think to be questionable. After all, most existent knowledge have gone through the long process of review and are proved in practice and application, which makes them trustworthy. The necessity of trust is most important in the realm of morality. If students doubt the correctness of the acknowledged moral standards instilled into them, and take action to upset them as well as disobey the legal rules which are designed to sustain such standards, the balance of society will be undermined as a result. Therefore, a certain skeptism is necessary, but in certain area and should be lifted to a certain stage.

In conclusion, skeptism is an essential part of study process since passive acceptance of whatever is taught will prevent students from understanding thoroughly and thinking critically. However, this spirit should be applied in moderate, otherwise it will be impossible to form one's ideology and knowledge, and even disturb the balance of society.
祝考试顺利，在行文上再斟酌一下，势必取得很好的成绩。

louchen1984UID: 172975

非常感谢冥界星灿的帮助：）
我这篇写了好久呢唉真担心考的时候怎么办
现在我都不会写短句了，写来写去都是长的，不知咋回事