issue154 我的第一只小板凳。大家帮忙拍拍，一定回拍。

snowyfxUID: 189264

这是我的第一篇issue，用时两小时，写了有一点时间了，就是今天才拿出来改改，然后才敢斗胆发到网上现眼。大家多多帮忙拍。我一定尽我所能回拍大家！哼哼，跑不了你。 :)
154 Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.

I strongly agree with the speaker's assertion that both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools, because education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. How to educate children to adapt the society and obtain the ability of constructing our future society, is a heatedly discussed problem and have been boring educators for a long time. In my view, The title statement is primary means solving this problem, and I shall here explore my reasons.

First of all, we should never look down upon the key role that professional educators play in fostering the younger generation. For one thing, educators and teachers undergo special trainings for cultivating children, and actually know teach children what and how to teach them in different levels and ages. For another, educators and teachers spend at least one third time with students in a day, and thus sometimes they psychologically know ideas in their minds and might be able to  instill science, literary and common values like respect and tolerance in the way they can accept easily. So it is a phenomenon that children are more willing to follow teachers’ words, rather than their parents. Last but not least, educators have the first voice in determining the curriculum and predicting which kind of talents the society needs more in the future. Consequently, they will intentionally cultivate students toward that kind. For all above reasons, it may be said that students always acquire the most plentiful and useful knowledge in the schools, that is, professional educators always occupy the most important station in students' education that none can replace.

secondly, in the problem of educating children, parents could not pass the buck totally to educators. When children were born, they firstly met their parents; when they were growing, they said what parents said, and they acted what parents acted; when they faced any problem, they always firstly get advice and suggestion from their parents, therefore, gradually, they thought what parents thought. Because of all these above, we can say that parents play a very important role in children's life, accordingly, parents should pay more attention to their words, behaviors, and even the ideas they provide to their children when facing problems. In addition, we cannot help but concede that there is no another person who knows and understands what the child really need more than his or her parents, and thus parents know what kind of education suit their children more. It is necessary for educators to listen to and accept the parents' sound suggestion, in other words, educators should not leave parents behind the education gate.

Thirdly, community circumstance surely affect the development of children’s disposition and various values-including equality, respect, tolerance, helping others, etc. All these values might be a part of likely being taught to a new generation. whether children could respect the old, cast tolerance to different points held by other people, be always ready to help others, etc., we may sometimes get the answer from the community circumstance into which they born. For example, in a community where all the people are kindhearted to their neighbors and read to help others all the time, children may have a golden heart, and think there are all good persons in the world and no bad men. Another case in the point is that in ancient age of China, Mencius’s mother moved house for three times just in order to provide Mencius a good community circumstance for his study, afterward, and in nowadays, it becomes an insignificant idiom guiding the followings. So, community should load responsibilities for education.

In conclusion, unless the school, the family and the community cooperates, it would be almost impossible for school education to fulfill its noble mission, Although school education is surely the main force to propel the children education's development. In addition, family and community should make full act at their roles. Thus, we will see a prosperous education project.

山坡羊UID: 169978

呵呵，占座先：）

山坡羊UID: 169978

这是我的第一篇issue，用时两小时，写了有一点时间了，就是今天才拿出来改改，然后才敢斗胆发到网上现眼。大家多多帮忙拍。我一定尽我所能回拍大家！哼哼，跑不了你。  
154 Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.

I strongly agree with the speaker's assertion that both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools, because[in that 可能更好] education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. How to educate children to adapt the society and obtain the ability of constructing our future society, is a heatedly discussed problem and have been boring educators for a long time. In my view, The[the] title statement is primary means solving this problem,[怎么觉得不通？] and I shall here explore my reasons.

First of all, we should never look down upon the key role that professional educators play in fostering the younger generation. For one thing, educators and teachers undergo special trainings for cultivating children, and actually know teach children what and how to teach them in different levels and ages. For another, educators and teachers spend at least one third time with students in a day, and thus sometimes they psychologically [对吗？] know ideas in their minds and might be able to instill science, literary and common values like respect and tolerance in the way they can accept easily.[两个they指代不清] So it is a phenomenon that children are more willing to follow teachers’ words, rather than their parents. Last but not least, educators have the first voice in determining the curriculum and predicting which kind of talents the society[the students吧？但也和后面不对，教育家能决定社会吗？] needs more in the future. Consequently, they will intentionally cultivate students toward that kind. For all above reasons, it may be said that students always acquire the most plentiful and useful knowledge in the schools, that is, professional educators always occupy the most important station in students' education that none can replace.

secondly, in the problem[感觉不好] of educating children, parents could not pass the buck totally to educators. When children were born, they firstly met their parents; when they were growing, they said [followed]what parents said, and they acted[as] what parents acted; when they faced any problem, they always firstly get advice and suggestion from their parents, therefore, gradually, they thought what parents thought.[时态有点乱] Because of all these above, we can say that parents play a very important role in children's life, [；]accordingly, parents should pay more attention to their words, behaviors, and even the ideas they provide to their children when facing problems. In addition, we cannot help but concede that there is no another person who knows and understands what the child really need more than his or her parents, and thus parents know what kind of education suit their children more. It is necessary for educators to listen to and accept the parents' sound suggestion, in other words, educators should not leave parents behind the education gate.

Thirdly, community circumstance surely affect the development of children’s disposition [？不明白]and various values-including equality, respect, tolerance, helping others, etc. All these values might be a part of likely being taught to a new generation. whether [Whether]children could respect the old, cast tolerance to different points held by other people, be always ready to help others, etc., we may sometimes get the answer from the community circumstance into which they born. [我没读明白应是In吧]For example, in a community where all the people are kindhearted to their neighbors and read[ready] to help others all the time, children may have a golden heart, and think[that] there are all good persons in the world and no bad men. Another case in the point is that in ancient age of China, Mencius’s mother moved house for three times just in order to provide Mencius a good community circumstance for his study, [;]afterward, and in nowadays, it becomes an insignificant idiom guiding the followings. So, community should load responsibilities for education.[孟母的例子好]

In conclusion, unless the school, the family and the community cooperates, it would be almost impossible for school education to fulfill its noble mission[only], Although school education is surely the main force to propel the children education's development. In addition, family and community should make full act at their roles. Thus, we will see a prosperous education project.

[感觉语言明白清楚，思路清晰，结构完整。挺好的。
但觉得论述的很浅，或许因为过于全面？其实我觉得关于学校作用不用说那么多，因为题目已经强调了。还有例子太空，如能有多的孟母的例子就好了。这些也是我需要加强的地方，共同加油！

语言感觉比较平。还有一些少量语法错误。

感觉可多从论证深入和语言精彩上下功夫]

snowyfxUID: 189264

谢谢山坡羊，我会在这方面加强努力的。
共同努力！共同进步！

龙非UID: 193190

粗看第一遍，整体的论证尚可，除了起始段稍微拖沓，B1说理过多，缺乏有力的例子之外，其他都OK。
但是，一细想就觉得不妥。题目本意是讲家庭和社区要介入到学校中，不能让教育的重担完全交给职业教育者，也就是学校。这里介入的是学校并不是教育，也就是说要论证的是家庭和社区要不要介入到学校的日常教育活动中，包括正面的和反面的，从而得出结论。
从以上观点出发，那么这篇issue就不是很贴切了。。。

一家之言，欢迎指正，共勉之

snowyfxUID: 189264

To 龙非：Thank  you for you time and attention.
下面想与你讨论一下这个题目：
这个题目第一句说：家庭和社会must be involved in local schools, 像是在说要介入学校。
但第二句又说：Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. 教育太重要了，以至于不能单单留给专业的教育工作者。（直译的，但意思应该就是这个吧）分析：从这句来看像是在说家庭和社会要介入教育吧。所以我觉得他的local school 在这里就是指教育。不知道我分析的对不对，问了我们考试中不犯错，所以想和你讨论一下。

龙非UID: 193190

Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.

首先，第一句话我将之理解为介入的是学校，根据这个思路下来，我理解speaker认为目前的教育情况是：
education
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school
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professional educators

即由school来负责education，而school由professional educators来负责。
so，speaker提出应该以下一种结构才合理：
education
|
school
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professional educators，parent，communities。
即parent，communities也要involved到学校中，这也是involve的本意：“to engage as a participant”－－from M-W

而普遍对这道题的理解却是：
首先：local schools == education，接着又将professional educators == school，然后就将家长、社区和学校并列来论述它们对教育必不可少
这样子，几个概念就有些混乱了，那么education == professional educators??