issue7 我的第一篇，写了一个晚上，还抄了别人不少东西，请大家多多指点吧

azaileaUID: 187859

题目：
“The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.”
  正文：
  While video camera is more and more used throughout the world to record our daily life, it is merely one of the documentation instruments we can choose, playing a complementary role to written records. Thus, the above-mentioned contention overstates the comparative significance of video camera as a documentary tool.

    Video camera is widely used for its function to record precisely and conveniently. For the purpose of documenting temporal, spatial events, I agree that a video record is usually more accurate and more convincing than a written record. Consequently, those important incidents departed could be captured to be the objective historical datas and then replayed in truth when needed. Besides, video records can play an evidentiary role in legal proceedings, such as those involving robbery, traffic accident, motor vehicle violations and even malpractice in a hospital operating room.

The growing significance of the video camera is not only presented in those circumstance mentioned before. In recent days, more and more young bloods are wild about digital video which is new generation of the traditional video camera. As to them, DV is indispensable especially in an interesting tour and a surprise party on the weekend. Indeed, a diary entry cannot present such a wonderful memory just like “yesterday once more” from the general sense consist of vision and hearing. But, a DV can.

   Nonetheless, for certain other purposes but not merely record the moving three-dimensional images, written records are advantageous to and more appropriate than video records. For example, most of the legal matters are best put to the written documentation: video is of no practical use in documenting the terms of a simple contractual agreement of flat-renting between lodger and landlord, say nothing of much more complex ones of incorporation or the establishment of a trust. And video is of little use when it comes to documenting a person’s subjective state of mind, impressions, or reflections of an event or experience. Indeed, to the extent that personal interpretation adds dimension, depth and richness to the record, written documentation is actually more important than video, for the time being, and in the future as well.
   
   The last thing I want to take a glance at this issue is that a video record is of no use in documenting statistical of other quantitative information. On the assumption that written record including keyboard is not in existence, we can only know from what we see in any downtown area of China that the population of Chinese is quiet enormous. However, we can not obtain the total amount of more than 1.3 billion, yet the fact that sexual balance has incline to male.  

    To sum up, although video records are inherently more objective, accurate, and complete, it presents only one dimension of our life and times; by contrary, written documentation will always be needed to quantify, demystify, and provide meaning to the world around us.

azaileaUID: 187859

字数会不会太少了，刚完成的时候更少，只有420左右。
我实在是憋不出来了，真佩服动不动就600多字的兄弟姐妹们。
还有30天就考试了，这才完成第一篇，明后两天可能第一篇argu就要出炉了。

我系北京理工研二学生，准备在校内租一单间。平时还要在实验室露露脸，估计一天可看作文6小时，我还来得及吗？请大家给点建议吧？

准备情况：刚开始看官方范文issue题，issue和argu的文章和模板看了一些些。

我人品很好呀，为什么还是没人帮我改作文，莫非烂得不值一看。

乒乓球爱上九月UID: 162925

不要着急 一天6个小时很不错了

别人帮助你之前先帮助一下别人吧 :)
http://211.151.90.54/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=248613

azaileaUID: 187859

乒乓球爱上九月，能不能给我的复习安排提点建议。
这6个小时应该怎样充分利用呢？我觉得不管是argu 还是issue，写一道题的提纲至少得花掉20分钟的时间，总共将近500道题，时间远远不够呀。
另外，是不是还要安排一个小时时间背单词呢。

乒乓球爱上九月UID: 162925

对于大部分人写完所有题目的提纲都不太现实呢. 至少做到每个类型的题目都写过吧.

这30天单词不用看这么长时间.个人看法. 建议你去备考经验版块多看看别人的经验.
http://211.151.90.54/bbs/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=703