issue 92 新手上路，欢迎板砖

Allen_ShaoUID: 184047

92. "In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information." 92． 在所有专业学术领域，认识到我们的不足和获取新的信息同等重要


It has long been a public controversy whether it is as important to recognize one's knowledge and understanding limits as it is to gain new information. At first thought, the two aspects seem to be both necessary for an upwardly mobile learner, however, after carefully weighing, I should say that to acquire new facts and information is more important than to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding, although the latter is actually also required.
  First of all, new facts and information will deepen and broaden our understanding of the unknown. This is a time with blast of information, new concepts and technologies emerge everyday, which pushes us to understand the new things and update our knowledge. The best and the only way-at least it seems to me, is to absorb new facts and information that can make it easier for you to adapt yourself at your professional field. That may explain why the professors in almost every college require their students to read many recent-published papers.
   Secondly, the solution to one problem may lead to the appearance of more problems in the world of knowledge, which invites further exploration and more progress as a result. Nowadays, many advanced technologies, such as MEMS, Optical-Electronic, and the like, are multi-discipline. Take myself as an example, I'm a student in the major of Optical, but when solve an optical problem I always encounter several problems in electronics-to measure the signal magnitude, in fabrication-to place the lens in the optimal and stable structure, and even, sometimes in biology, at this time, I usually suffer from the lack of new facts and information.
  The two aspects above are both about the importance of acquiring new facts and information, so you may wonder how about the importance of recognizing the limits of our knowledge and the understanding. Of course, as I said before, I admit the necessity of recognizing self limits, but overemphasizing them may hinder our effort to ceaselessly pursue new frontiers of the knowledge. People who over consider about their limits may be unwilling or even afraid of learning new knowledge.
  To conclude, there is no easy solution for such a complex issue, however, taking into account of all these factors in the analysis above, one may have no difficulty to draw the conclusion that it is more important to acquire new facts and information than it is to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding.  

小弟４月１号考作文，这是第一篇，欢迎大家批评．谢谢

kkytUID: 188814

站座, 晚上一定看

Allen_ShaoUID: 184047

多谢多谢，小弟自己也顶一下

kkytUID: 188814

92. "In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information." 92． 在所有专业学术领域，认识到我们的不足和获取新的信息同等重要


It has long been a public controversy whether it is as important to recognize one's knowledge and understanding limits as it is to gain new information. At first thought, the two aspects seem to be both necessary for an upwardly mobile learner, however, after carefully weighing, I should say that to acquire new facts and information is more important than to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding, although the latter is actually also required.[[写反对的观点，比较新颖，一般人上去就是完全同意的]]
First of all, new facts and information will deepen and broaden our understanding of the unknown. This is a time with blast of information, new concepts and technologies emerge everyday, which pushes[[push]] us to understand the new things and update our knowledge. The best and the only way-at least it seems to me, is to absorb new facts and information that can make it easier for you to adapt yourself at your professional field. That may explain why the professors in almost every college require their students to read many recent-published papers.
Secondly, the solution to one problem may lead to the appearance of more problems in the world of knowledge, which invites further exploration and more progress as a result. Nowadays, many advanced technologies, such as MEMS, Optical-Electronic, and the like, are multi-discipline. Take myself as an example, I'm a student in the major of Optical, but when solve an optical problem I always encounter several problems in electronics-to measure the signal magnitude, in fabrication-to place the lens in the optimal and stable structure, and even, sometimes in biology, at this time, I usually suffer from the lack of new facts and information.

The two aspects above are both about the importance of acquiring new facts and information, so you may wonder how about the importance of recognizing the limits of our knowledge and the understanding. Of course, as I said before, I admit the necessity of recognizing self limits, but overemphasizing them may hinder our effort to ceaselessly pursue new frontiers of the knowledge. People who over consider about their limits may be unwilling or even afraid of learning new knowledge.[[原文只是说同样重要没说过强调阿]]

To conclude, there is no easy solution for such a complex issue, however, taking into account of all these factors in the analysis above, one may have no difficulty to draw the conclusion that it is more important to acquire new facts and information than it is to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding.
[偶觉得你这篇文章只是再说acquire new facts and information的好处，并没有证明你的论点，“也即一个比另一个好“，也就是你没比较只是罗列了一些优点然后作了一个让步，没有体现比较的思想。你的语言表达得不错，现在就在思路上加强一点就行]

Allen_ShaoUID: 184047

偶觉得写的比较肤浅，例子也很匮乏。 any way,多谢老兄指教。
同时欢迎更多板砖

dgfyhchinaUID: 190311

我觉得中和二者可能好写一点，这样例子多谢，字数也能上去。你的文笔不错，但是说服力好象不是很有力的。