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[i习作temp] issue 153, 真诚希望大家拍砖,有仇必报,呵呵 [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-2-27 21:33:33 |只看该作者

issue 153, 真诚希望大家拍砖,有仇必报,呵呵

规定时间里完成,感觉时间有些紧张,字数也比较少。


Issue153  第4篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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从2005年1月27日20时38分到2005年1月27日21时45分
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Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
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Contemporary society is characterized for the rapid changing, in some sense. We live in a world which is radically different from the past, society is changing, person is changing, weather is changing, everything is changing, so the knowledge has no reason to refuse changing. In the process of study, we should bring a skeptical attitude to the knowledge.

Keeping a skeptical attitude to study will motivate you to master the knowledge you learn firmly. In the process of study, one should have the initiative, whether to the courses or books. When meeting a thing, you should not always accept the saying of books or authorities, you should ask, where it comes from, why it breaks out, how it develops and what it would become into, then you may find out the facts through reading books or doing investigations. By this way, you would know more information about the thing you meet, see it from more and various perspectives, understand it better under particular conditions, finally reach the aim that to master the knowledge well.

Furthermore, the skepticism plays an important role in the scientific academic research. As we all know, accepting everything without doubt can not be called "research", while which is meant that finding and discovering new facts or disciplines through experienments or investigations. As everything in the world keeps changing all the time, knowledge is also changing since the beginning. Thus there is no possibility that any knowledge  could be permenant, so we should have a skepticism to whatever we research. Also the point is illustrated by facts that skepticism leads to many new theories and new inventions time and time again. Copenicus is a suitable case in point. In his period, people all believed that earth is the center of the universe, which is supported by the church and the authority. But Copenicus, with a skeptical attitude to the "fact", wanted to prove it, through investigations and observations, he finally found that the sun rather than the earth is the center of the universe, then pushed over the misleading claim. From the example, you can see how significant role the skepticism plays.

In conclusion, skepticism is a good character for us to study, to research and to do everything. However, returning to the topic of study, only skepticism is not enough, we should further make effort to see it more clearly, and to find a proper conclusion at last.

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Contemporary society is characterized for the rapid changing, in some sense. We live in a world which is radically different from the past, society is changing, person is changing, weather is changing不太好, everything is changing, so the knowledge has no reason to refuse changing.中间缺少过度,为什么不拒绝改变就要怀疑?In the process of study, we should bring a skeptical attitude to the knowledge.

Keeping a skeptical attitude to study will motivate you to master the knowledge you learn firmly. In the process of study, one should have the initiative, whether to->no matterthe courses or books. When meeting a thing, you should not always accept the saying of books or authorities, you should ask, where it comes from, why it breaks out?, how it develops and what it would become into?, then you may find out the facts through reading books or doing investigations. By this way, you would know more information about the thing you meet, see it from more and various perspectives, understand it better under particular conditions, finally reach the aim that to master the knowledge well.

Furthermore, the skepticism plays an important role in the scientific academic research. As we all know, accepting everything without doubt can not be called "research", while which is meant that finding and discovering new facts or disciplines through experienments or investigations. As everything in the world keeps changing all the time, knowledge is also changing since the beginning. Thus there is no possibility that any knowledge could be permenant, so we should have a skepticism to whatever we research. Also the point is illustrated by facts that skepticism leads to many new theories and new inventions time and time again. Copenicus is a suitable case in point. In his period, people all believed that earth is the center of the universe, which is supported by the church and the authority. But Copenicus, with a skeptical attitude to the "fact", wanted to prove it去掉, through investigations and observations, he finally found that the sun rather than the earth is the center of the universe, then pushed over the misleading claim. From the example, you can see how significant role the skepticism plays.

In conclusion, skepticism is a good character for us to study, to research and to do everything. However, returning to the topic of study, only skepticism is not enough, we should further make effort to see it more clearly, and to find a proper conclusion at last.
条理很好,论证也不错, 只是语言上要加强一下,还有字数少了一点,不过45分钟写这么多很难得了,继续努力

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发表于 2005-3-5 21:17:57 |只看该作者

我的回砖:)

Contemporary society is characterized for the rapid changing, in some sense. We live in a world which is radically different from the past, society is changing, person is changing, weather 用weather和前两个并列有点anti-climax的感觉,可以换一个大点范围的,比如enviroment is changing, everything is changing, so the knowledge has no reason to refuse changing 可以改成so is the knowledge. In the process of study, we should bring a skeptical attitude to the knowledge.

Keeping a skeptical attitude to study will motivate you to master the knowledge you learn firmly. In the process of study, one should have the initiative, whether to the courses or books. When meeting a thing, you should not always accept the saying of books or authorities, you should ask, where it comes from, why it breaks out, how it develops and what it would become into, then you may find out the facts through reading books or doing investigations. By this way doing this, you would know more information about the thing you meet, see it from more and various perspectives, understand it better under particular conditions, finally and finally reach the aim that to master the knowledge well.

Furthermore, the skepticism plays an important role in the scientific academic research. As we all know, accepting everything without doubt can not be called "research", while which is meant 可以主动means that finding and discovering new facts or disciplines through experienments or investigations. As everything in the world keeps changing all the time, knowledge is also changing since the beginning. Thus there is no possibility that any knowledge could be permenant, so we should have a skepticism to whatever we research.从下面的意思推断,你应该是说没有永远正确的知识,而不是永远的知识 Also the point is illustrated by facts that skepticism leads to many new theories and new inventions time and time again. Copenicus is a suitable case in point. In his period, people all believed that earth is the center of the universe, which is supported by the church and the authority. But Copenicus, with a skeptical attitude to the "fact", wanted to prove it看你的意思应该是disprove it, through investigations and observations, he finally found that the sun rather than the earth is the center of the universe, then pushed over the misleading claim. From the example, you can see how significant role the skepticism plays.

In conclusion, skepticism is a good character for us to study, to research and to do everything. However, returning to the topic of study, only skepticism is not enough, we should further make effort to see it more clearly, and to find a proper conclusion at last.最后一句其实可以提到前面在单独成一段,这样字数也可以增加了^_^,不然,最后提出有点突然
既然选择了远方,便只顾风雨兼程

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发表于 2005-3-5 22:13:58 |只看该作者
大家说得都挺好,来晚了,句子和语言都说过了,我说说文章结构的问题
Contemporary society is characterized for the rapid changing, in some sense. We live in a world which is radically different from the past, society is changing, person is changing, weather is changing, everything is changing, so the knowledge has no reason to refuse changing. In the process of study, we should bring a skeptical attitude to the knowledge. 对题目中的whatever没有回应啊

Keeping a skeptical attitude to study will motivate you to master the knowledge you learn firmly. In the process of study, one should have the initiative, whether to the courses or books. When meeting a thing, you should not always accept the saying of books or authorities, you should ask, where it comes from, why it breaks out, how it develops and what it would become into, then you may find out the facts through reading books or doing investigations. By this way, you would know more information about the thing you meet, see it from more and various perspectives, understand it better under particular conditions, finally reach the aim that to master the knowledge well.这里都写的是你应该发问和应该怎样做,着能证明发文促进了学习知识吗?

Furthermore, the skepticism plays an important role in the scientific academic research. As we all know, accepting everything without doubt can not be called "research", while which is meant that finding and discovering new facts or disciplines through experienmentsexperiments or investigations. As everything in the world keeps changing all the time, knowledge is also changing since the beginning. Thus there is no possibility that any knowledge could be permenantpermanent, so we should have a skepticism to whatever we research. 科学在变化Also the point is illustrated by facts that skepticism leads to many new theories and new inventions time and time again. Copenicus is a suitable case in point.这句点题了 In his period, people all believed that earth is the center of the universe, which is supported by the church and the authority. But Copenicus, with a skeptical attitude to the "fact", wanted to prove it, through investigations and observations, he finally found that the sun rather than the earth is the center of the universe, then pushed over the misleading claim. From the example, you can see how significant role the skepticism plays.

In conclusion, skepticism is a good character for us to study, to research and to do everything. However, returning to the topic of study, only skepticism is not enough, we should further make effort to see it more clearly, and to find a proper conclusion at last.

文章看了,觉得再写一段会好一点,论证不是很充分
这篇文章写反面可能会好一点吧-----怀疑过分了也不好呀


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