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发表于 2005-3-2 02:48:47 |只看该作者
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发表于 2005-3-2 04:39:37 |只看该作者
SILENTWINGS, long time no see :D
一步步向目标前进中!

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it is a good idea! let me try:)

1. The saying is used to point out that …… 这个说法用来指出
(用法)常用在引用的名人名言或者俚语之后,用以表达作者自己引文的目的,立场或观点。

(例子) 讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically the saying is used to point out a trend among us that others are all luck dogs except self.

(例子) 这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。

This kind of saying is used to point out that everyone should try their best to win success no by
complaining or accusing others, no matter how means he or she would be, which cannot remove poverty.

2. This is nowhere more true than…… 没有比在……更正确不过的了
(用法)用以强调在某个方面所表述或引用的论据得到了支持。聪明的读者应该马上就能举一反三,在ARGUMENT中,可将上句中的TRUE转换成ridiculous就可以用来攻击Arguer的ramshackle position了。

(例子) 这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了。
This is nowhere more true than illusion and truth.

(例子) 没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了。

This is nowhere more ridiculous that the wealthier/richer the happier.

3. When faced with…… 当面临……
(用法)常用来表达这样一种假设“遇到……,就采取……”在作文中十分常用。重复使用时,可以将face与confront, encounter, come across等替换,避免repetition.

(例子) 当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰;我们的不幸是绝无仅有的。
When faced with misfortunate, we encouraged ourselves by the view that no one can worse than us.

(例子) 当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When faced with fiasco, we should remember that in some degree life is more danger than we can imagine
and is fraught with all kinds of success, failure and venture.

4. It is presumptuous to judge……according to…… 根据……来判断……太武断
(用法)该句型几乎是ARGUMENT作文中的上宾,一出手就力量惊人,具体操作相信并不困难。这里要补充一下的是,在ISSUE中该句也可用来攻击opposite points,为避免俗套以及丰富句型,presumptuous可以用arbitrary, ridiculous, illegitimate, unpersuasive等等来替换。

(例子) 根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的。
It is presumptuous to judge his fame according to the sales of records.

(例子) 根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
It is presumptuous to judge that life is gambling according to the defination of live.

5. The only time a person can claim that…… 仅当……才能宣称……
(用法)该句型常在ARGUMENT中用一纠正ARGUER的逻辑错误,在ISSUE分论中用来加固或者完善自己的观点。

(例子) 仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。

The only time that he is considering what he has done before he can claim that pity is a kind of virtue.

(例子) 颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。

Paradoxically the only time the court can pass out the subpoena that all the related evidences were collected.





当一个东西得到后,才知道其实不是你真正想要的,而你已经为这个东西付出了,,大的不能再大的代价,,,但是也许这就是一种成长。。。

生活还在继续,我还是要艰难的活下去~~~~

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发表于 2005-3-2 15:46:09 |只看该作者
尝试一下
1.1讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically, the saying is used to point out that there is a common trend among us that others are always fortunate than ourselves.
1.2这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。
The saying used to constantly point out that only complaining and blaming others cannot obviate poverty, instead, no matter how mean others are, everyone must depend upon self to attain success.
2.1这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了。
This is nowhere more true than problems about fantasy and reality.
2.2没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了。
This is nowhere more ridiculous than thinking that more money, more felicity.
3.1当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰;我们的不幸是绝无仅有的。
When faced with misfortune, we usually seek for assurance from this belief that our misfortune is the only one.
3.2当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When encountering failing, we should remember that to some extent there are vicissitudes in life, replete with various success, failing, and venture.
4.1根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的。
It is arbitrary to judge his celebrity according to sales of his records.
4.2根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
It is illegitimate to judge life as a kind of gambling according to the definition of destiny.
5.1仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。
The only time a person can claim compassion is a kind of virtue is that he is reflecting what he has done
5.2颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。
Paradoxically, the only time the court can deliver the subpoena is when all relevant evidences are prepared.

PS:3月24号考作文,希望找到互相批改作文的伙伴^_^

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发表于 2005-3-2 18:34:35 |只看该作者
谢谢siltentwings  //bow
这个program挺好的呀我觉得,我以后每天争取都跟着走


1.
Ironically, the saying is used to point out that there exist a general bias among us
that other people are always the lucker than us.

The saying is used to point out that only complaint and blame on others can not uproot the poverty, and one should count on himself to achieve success.

2.
This is nowhere more ture than the matter of imagination and real.

This is nowhere more ridiculous than the idea that more money means happier.

3.
When faced with adversity, we probably seek for comfort from the belief that
the adversity we meet also visits someone else.

When encountered with failure, we ought to remember that life itself is a complex
of all sorts of crests and troughs, even adventures.   

4.
It is presumptuous to judge his popular quality according to the number of records
he sold.

It is unreasonable to equate life to a sort of gambling according to his own defination of fate.

5,
The only time a person can claim that mercy is virtue when he examine his own behavior.

Paradoxically, the only time a court can send summonses when all the relevant  evidences are ready.
=== 上下天光  一碧万倾 ===


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发表于 2005-3-2 19:33:02 |只看该作者
1. The saying is used to point out that …… 这个说法用来指出
(例子) 讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically, the saying is used to point out that there ia a trend around us that the others are luckier than ourselves.
(例子) 这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。
The saying is used to point out that poverty can' t be eliminated by blindly complaining and chiding others, and no matter how contemptible others are, every people can havest success only by her hard work.
2. This is nowhere more true than…… 没有比在……更正确不过的了
(用法)用以强调在某个方面所表述或引用的论据得到了支持。聪明的读者应该马上就能举一反三,在ARGUMENT中,可将上句中的TRUE转换成ridiculous就可以用来攻击Arguer的ramshackle position了。
(例子) 这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了。
This is nowhere more true that the issue with respect to reality and fantasy.
(例子) 没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了。
This is nowhere rediculous than the thought that money means everything.
3. When faced with…… 当面临……
(用法)常用来表达这样一种假设“遇到……,就采取……”在作文中十分常用。重复使用时,可以将face与confront, encounter, come across等替换,避免repetition.
(例子) 当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰;我们的不幸是绝无仅有的。
When faced with disaster, we often seek comfort from the thought that our misfortune is unique.

(例子) 当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When faced fiasco, we should be aware of that life, in certain extent, is always throngy and dangerous, and is full of different kind of success, failure and risk.  
4. It is presumptuous to judge……according to…… 根据……来判断……太武断
(用法)该句型几乎是ARGUMENT作文中的上宾,一出手就力量惊人,具体操作相信并不困难。这里要补充一下的是,在ISSUE中该句也可用来攻击opposite points,为避免俗套以及丰富句型,presumptuous可以用arbitrary, ridiculous, illegitimate, unpersuasive等等来替换。
(例子) 根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的。
It is presumtuous to judge how faous he is according to the sale of his recording.
(例子) 根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
  It isn't rational to regard his life as a kind of gambling according to his understanding about fortune.
5. The only time a person can claim that…… 仅当……才能宣称……
(用法)该句型常在ARGUMENT中用一纠正ARGUER的逻辑错误,在ISSUE分论中用来加固或者完善自己的观点。
(例子) 仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。
The only thime a peson can claim that commiseration is a kind of virtue is when he reconsider about what he had done.
(例子) 颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。
Ambivalently, the only time the court can send the subpera is when all related proof is ready.
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发表于 2005-3-2 20:05:33 |只看该作者
跟贴就是最大的支持:D

讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically,the saying points out that there is a tendency among us to believe others are more lucky than ourselves.

这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。
The saying points out abidingly that we could not erase poverty by complaining and acusing others and everyone has to obtained success by his own hand no matter how abject others are.

这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了
This is nowhere more true than it about the issue of fantasy and reality

没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了
This is nowhere more ridiculous than believing more money,more happy

当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰:我们的不幸是绝无仅有的
When faced with misfortune,we often seek comfort from such idea that this adversity also happens to others

当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When faced with fiasco,we should rememer that to some extent,our life is in a extremely dangerous state and full of various success,failure and adventure.

根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的
It is presumptuous to judge his repute according to the sale of his record.

根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
It is unreasonable to regard lif as a gambling according his definition of destiny.

仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。
The only time a person can claim that mercy is a virtue is when he reflects his own behavior.

颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。
How paradoxical it is that the only time the court can send the summons is when all evidence are ready

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发表于 2005-3-2 21:23:10 |只看该作者
我怎么觉得第三个句子应该是 when facing with ...
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发表于 2005-3-2 21:42:49 |只看该作者
又见 silentwings前辈,认真学习ing~~~
If I'm who I am because I'm who I am and you're who you are because you are who you are, then I'm who I am and you're who you are.   

If,on the other hand, I'm who I am because you're who you are, and if you are who you are because I'm who I am, then I'm not who I am and you're not who you are.

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发表于 2005-3-2 22:03:43 |只看该作者
naive exercise waits for improvement:)

1. The saying is used to point out that …… 这个说法用来指出
(用法)常用在引用的名人名言或者俚语之后,用以表达作者自己引文的目的,立场或观点。

(例子) 讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically, this saying is used to point out that there is a dominated tendency, which makes us to believe that the others are more lucky than us, existing in most of us.

(例子) 这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。
This saying is used to steadily point out that poverty can't be eliminated by simply complaining and blaming, no matter how contemptible the others would be, people could succeed only through their own endeavor.


2. This is nowhere more true than…… 没有比在……更正确不过的了
(用法)用以强调在某个方面所表述或引用的论据得到了支持。聪明的读者应该马上就能举一反三,在ARGUMENT中,可将上句中的TRUE转换成ridiculous就可以用来攻击Arguer的ramshackle position了。
(例子) 这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了。
There is nowhere more true than the problem about illumination and reality.

(例子) 没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了。
There is no thought more ridiculous than believing that owning more money leads to more bilss.

3. When faced with…… 当面临……
(用法)常用来表达这样一种假设“遇到……,就采取……”在作文中十分常用。重复使用时,可以将face与confront, encounter, come across等替换,避免repetition.
(例子) 当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰;我们的不幸是绝无仅有的。
When confront with misfortune, we often seek comfort from such belief that our disasters are unique.

(例子) 当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When we encounter with fierce frustration, we should always hold  the faith that life, to certain extend, is filled with severe dangers, various successes and failures and risks.  


4. It is presumptuous to judge……according to…… 根据……来判断……太武断
(用法)该句型几乎是ARGUMENT作文中的上宾,一出手就力量惊人,具体操作相信并不困难。这里要补充一下的是,在ISSUE中该句也可用来攻击opposite points,为避免俗套以及丰富句型,presumptuous可以用arbitrary, ridiculous, illegitimate, unpersuasive等等来替换。
(例子) 根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的。
It is presumptuous to judge how famous he is according to his CD sale records.

(例子) 根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
It is illegitimate to takes one's life as a gamble according to his definition of life.


5. The only time a person can claim that…… 仅当……才能宣称……
(用法)该句型常在ARGUMENT中用一纠正ARGUER的逻辑错误,在ISSUE分论中用来加固或者完善自己的观点。
(例子) 仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。
Reflecting on his/her own behaviors, it's the only time a person could claim that mercy/commiseration is virtue.

(例子) 颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。
Inconsequently, only when all evidence is ready could court send out the summons.

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发表于 2005-3-2 22:25:19 |只看该作者

顶啊顶啊。菜鸟本版的第一贴。

1. The saying is used to point out that …… 这个说法用来指出
(用法)常用在引用的名人名言或者俚语之后,用以表达作者自己引文的目的,立场或观点。
(例子) 讽刺的是,这种说法指出在我们之中普遍存在一种倾向,认为他人总是比自己幸运。
Ironically, the saying is used to point that the trend of thinking other man always luckier than ourselves existes rifely in us.
(例子) 这种说法不变得指出一味抱怨和责备他人并不能消除贫困,无论其他人如何卑鄙,每个人都必须靠自己来获得成功。
The saying is used to point out that complaining and blaming others cannot eliminate the poverty, no matter how hamber others is, everyone should achieve success by self.

2. This is nowhere more true than…… 没有比在……更正确不过的了
(用法)用以强调在某个方面所表述或引用的论据得到了支持。聪明的读者应该马上就能举一反三,在ARGUMENT中,可将上句中的TRUE转换成ridiculous就可以用来攻击Arguer的ramshackle position了。
(例子) 这在关于幻想和现实的问题上是再正确不过的了。
There is nowhere more true than the question of fantasy and reality.
(例子) 没有比认为钱多就更幸福更荒谬的了。
There is nowhere ridiculous than holding the view that, more money he or she has, more happy he or she will be.

3. When faced with…… 当面临……
(用法)常用来表达这样一种假设“遇到……,就采取……”在作文中十分常用。重复使用时,可以将face与confront, encounter, come across等替换,避免repetition.
(例子) 当我们遭遇不幸时,我们常常从这样的观念中寻求安慰;我们的不幸是绝无仅有的。
When confronted with misfortune, we always look for console from the view that our misfortune is sole.
(例子) 当我们适逢惨败时,我们应该记住在一定程度上人生总是凶险异常,充斥着各色成功与失败,以及冒险。
When faced with failture, we should remember that life is always full of dangerous,all sorts of success and failture, and advantures.

4. It is presumptuous to judge……according to…… 根据……来判断……太武断
(用法)该句型几乎是ARGUMENT作文中的上宾,一出手就力量惊人,具体操作相信并不困难。这里要补充一下的是,在ISSUE中该句也可用来攻击opposite points,为避免俗套以及丰富句型,presumptuous可以用arbitrary, ridiculous, illegitimate, unpersuasive等等来替换。
(例子) 根据唱片的销量来推断出他的知名度是武断的。
It is presumptuous to judge his repute according to the amount of his disc.
(例子) 根据他对于命运的定义来将生命理解为一种赌博是不合理的。
It is illegitimate to compare life to gambling according to his definition of fate.

5. The only time a person can claim that…… 仅当……才能宣称……
(用法)该句型常在ARGUMENT中用一纠正ARGUER的逻辑错误,在ISSUE分论中用来加固或者完善自己的观点。
(例子) 仅当他反思自己的所作所为,一个人才能声称怜悯是一种美德。
The only time that he reflects what he had done before, a person can claim that the pity is a merit.
(例子) 颇具矛盾的是,仅当全部相关证据准备妥当时,法庭才能将传票递出。
Very incosistently, the only time that all related proof are papared, the court can send out the summons.

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