SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子（三）

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SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子（三）
11．        If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子）        若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。

（例子）        如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。

12．        It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子）        据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。

（例子）        据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。

13．        At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子）        更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。

（例子）        更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。

14．        When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子）        当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存极限。

（例子）        再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。

15．        The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子）        同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。

（例子）相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来。

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SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子（三）
11．        If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子）        若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。
[KEY] If I were asked to name the single most destructive expression of fantasy, however, I would have to blame the media.
[借鉴] If I were asked to point out the most destructive expression on fantasy, I would attribute that to the media.
（例子）        如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。
[KEY] If students were reminded of this reality, there would be fewer dejected faces when examination results are published.
[借鉴] If students were allowed to realize reality, there would be less disappointed faces when the results of the test are published.

12．        It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子）        据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。
[KEY] It is said that many young romantics stubbornly attempt to live out the fantasy images of T.V. soap opera and romantic comedies.
[借鉴] It is said that many romanticists stubbornly try to live a life style as the illusive one in the soap opera and romantic comedy.
（例子）        据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。
[KEY] It is said that some Germans still fascinated about Germany winning the Second World War even as the bombs rained down on Berlin.
[借鉴] It is said that some Germen remain believing that Germany would win when bombs fell on the Bolin land like raindrops.
注：时态注意应该是过去时，另外地名注意翻译正确“柏林”是“Berlin”。

13．        At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子）        更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。
[KEY] At the even worse, a selfish gambler can neglect his financial duties towards his family and eventually gambling can become a drug which destroys life.
[借鉴] At the even worse, a selfish gambler will neglect his economical duty and obligation to the family and furthermore, gambling would become a dose of poison which will eventually ruin the life.
注：“经济上的责任”一般固定用financial为好。
（例子）        更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。
[KEY] At the even worse, the glamour of the honeymoon soon gives way to empty hours in which the newlyweds must find meaning.
[借鉴] At the even worse, the fascination of honeymoon would be supplanted by dull days during which newlywed must seek out the meaning of life.

14．        When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子）        当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存技能。
[KEY] When it comes to the games, many people believe that they accustom the player to life-skills such as perseverance and competitiveness.
（例子）        再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。
[KEY] Supremely, of course, the stoic gets himself or herself into most difficulty when it comes to connivance and tolerance.
[借鉴] Furthermore, of course, the stoic scholars often make themselves in a dilemma when it comes to connivance and endurance.

15．        The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子）        同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。
[KEY] Again, the chief reason is because romantics do not sufficiently understand the centrality of work---be it emotional, psychological or financial---to any relationship.
（例子）        相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来。
[KEY] Rather humorously, American films are often accused of making violence glamorous. Accordingly, sooner or later we have to settle down and face the hazard that some people attempt to translate the scene of a movie onto reality.

鬼谷子UID: 159645

又看到silentwings的好文了
顶一个

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个人觉得句子难度偏大了些，很难准确地将其表达出来。

鬼谷子UID: 159645

我的经验是
不管多难的句式，只要多用了几次就会用了
而且，其实上面的句子还算是常见的啊

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我知道有些对于大家是难了点,但是大家注意的是我是让大家把句子的结构用对,其中的表达有的是比较难,但是这样做是为了把许多老外写作高手的"法宝"奉贤给大家,为了在100句里充分囊括这些精彩的表达,所以SILENTWINGS将句子改写得有些复杂,主要提供一个使用环境和使用方法让大家学习,在自己动手的基础上再去看答案就会有长进,你们说呢?

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嗬嗬，那我就现在开始做了。

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11.   If I were made to figure out the most ruinous expression of fantasy, I would attribute it to the media.

      If students were allowed to realize reality, there would be less disappointed faces when the results of the test are published.

12.   It is said that many young romantic men try to lead a life according to the fantastic form in soap operas and romantic comedies.

      It is said that some Germans still imagine Germany's victory in the world war II when lots of bombs are falling on Berlin like drops of rain.

13.   At the even worse, a selfish gambler will neglect his economical duty and obligation to the family and futhermore, gambling would become a dose of poison which will eventually ruin the life.

      At the even worse, the fascination of honeymood would be supplanted by dull days during which newlywed must seek out the meaning of life.

14.   When it comes to games, many people believe that games could make people attain such survive limit such as endurance and competition.

      Futhermore, of course, the stoic scholars often make themsevles in a dilemma when it comes to connivance and endurance.

15.   In the same way, the chief reason is because those romanticists are not fully comprehended 实在不会翻了， 呵呵，因为中文都没有看懂。

      What is very interesting is, American movies are often accused of beautify violence, therefore we have to face with and solve the crisis that some guys try to move the scenarios in the moives into reality.

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11． If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子） 若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。
If I were asked to point out the most destructive expression on fantasy, I would attribute that to the media.
（例子） 如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。
If students were to know the reality, they would be less depressed when the test report is announced.
12． It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子） 据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。
It is said that many romanticists stubbornly try to live a life style as the illusive one in the soap opera and romantic comedy.
（例子） 据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。
It is said that some Germen remain believing that Germany would win when bombs fell on the Bolin land like raindrops.
13． At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子） 更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。
At the even worse condition, a selfish gambler will ignore his responsibility and obligation to his/her family, and finally gambling will become a dose of poison destroying one’s life.
（例子） 更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。
At the even worse situation, the charm of honey-month will be replaced by monotonous days soon, from which the new couple must find the meaning of life.
14． When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子） 当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存极限。
When it comes to games, many people believe that they would gain access to the living utmost of persistence and competition in the games.
（例子） 再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。
Moreover, of course, when it comes to abandon and toleration, Stoge scholars always drop into tremendous embarrassment.
15． The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子） 同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。
Similarly, the chief reason is because those romanticists fail to understand adequately the work kernel of any relationship, which is impassioned, psychological or economical.  
（例子）相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来.
Quite interestingly, American films are always blamed as American violence, thus we cannot avoid to face and solve this crisis: some people are trying to put the scenario of the moves to the reality.

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11． If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子） 若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。
I I were assigned to point out the most destructive expression to fantasy, I would impute to the mass media.

（例子） 如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。
If students were known to the reality, there would be less depressed faces when the exam results released.

12． It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子） 据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。
It is said that many young romanticists try to follow the illusive lifestyles in some soap operas and romantic comedies doggedly.  
（例子） 据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。
It is said that a number of Germans were dreaming the victory in the World War II, while bombing in Berlin like raindrops.

13． At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子） 更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。
At the even worse, a selfish gambler naturally ignores his financial responsiblities to his family, and drives gamble into toxicant that destroys his life.
（例子） 更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。
At the even worse, the sweetness of honeymoon would be replaced by monotonous life, where the new couples ought to look for the meaning of life.

14． When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子） 当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存极限。
When it comes to games, many people believe that game will benefit those players to strike for the limits of long-suffering and competition.
（例子） 再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。
Again, of course, when it comes to the indulgence and forbearance, the Stoics often make themselves into a dilemma.

15． The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子） 同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。
Similarly, the chief reason is because those romanticists didn't understand adequantly its core function to any of those relations, whichever passionate, mental or economical. (?)
（例子）相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来。
Interestingly, American films are always condemned to "American violence" (referenced from runnerio:), so that we have to confront with the crisis: The chief reason is because many people would like to imitating scenes in the film.

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