SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子（三）

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美化暴力不是美国化暴力吧
beautify /sugar up violence 都可以吧

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希望大家继续坚持，有些句子写得还是相当不错的,加油啊!

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最初由 silentwings 发布
[B]我知道有些对于大家是难了点,但是大家注意的是我是让大家把句子的结构用对,其中的表达有的是比较难,但是这样做是为了把许多老外写作高手的"法宝"奉贤给大家,为了在100句里?.

以下省略...... [/B]

从2003年年末silentwings一篇一篇出总结的时候就在关注了
我运气真是好 又赶到出新东西了
支持 学习中
争取我自己也能有新的台阶上

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继续学习中，谢谢silentwings

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真是不错

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顶顶顶！！！学习学习再学习！：）

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SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子（三）
11． If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子） 若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。
If I were required to point out the most damaging descripiton of imagination, I would count it to media.

（例子） 如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。
If students were told the reality, there would be fewer depressing faces when results of examination were released.

12． It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子） 据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。
It is said that many young romantic people stubbornly attempt to live according to the imaginary style in " soap operas" and romantic comedies.

（例子） 据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。
It is said that even when bombs poured down Berlin like rain, some Germany still imagined that German would win the Second World War.  

13． At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子） 更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。
At the even worse, a selfish grumble will ingore his duty and responsibility to household ecomony, and gamble will become a poision to destroy life in the end.

（例子） 更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。
At the even worse, the fascination of hony moon will, in a short while, be substituted by empty days, new couples must find the bearing of life out of those days.

14． When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子） 当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存极限。
When it comes to game, many people believe that game is able to equip players limits of life such as long-suffering and competition.

（例子） 再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。
On the other hand, certainly, when Stoics come to talk about connivance and tolerance, they will collapse to great quandary.

15． The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子） 同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。
It is not dissimilar that the chief reason is because those romanticists haven't completely comprehanded the core of work in any relations, it's passionate, psychological or economic.

（例子）相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来。
What is interesting is that American movies are always blamed for sugarring up violenc, thus we have to face with and handle this crisis :some people attempt to copy the scenario of movie in real life.

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我的写法，大家看看11． If I were……, I would…… 如果我被……，我将……
（用法）虚拟语气基本句型，前分句做出假设，后半句就前假设做出应对，句式中人称等可以替换变迁。
（例子） 若有人让我指出最具破坏性的对于幻想的表达，我将就此归咎于媒体。
If I were made to point out the most destructive expression of fantacy, I would ascribe to the mass media.
（例子） 如果让学生了解现实，当考试成绩发布时将会有更少张沮丧的脸。
If the students had more chances to get in touch with the society,I would see less depressed faces when the result of the examination came out.
12． It is said that…… 据说
（用法）在举例论证中引出事例，加固前面的论点
（例子） 据说许多年轻的浪漫者固执地试图按照电视肥皂剧与浪漫喜剧中的梦幻般的形式与生活。
It is said that a lot of young romantics stubbornly try to follow the fantastic life style created in the soap opera and romantic comedies.
（例子） 据说甚至当炸弹雨点般地降落在柏林时一些德国人仍然幻想着德国将赢得二战的胜利。
It is said that even when the bombs unremittedly fell down on Berlin(看了答案以后才想起这么好的表达rain down!), some Germans still imagined Germany's final triumph of the Sencond World War.

13． At the even worse…… 更糟的是……
（用法）在论证中用此句式引出“递进”的逻辑论证，程度上实现进一步深化，将worse改为better可以表达进一步向“好”的方面转变。
（例子） 更糟的是，一个自私的赌徒会忽略他对于家庭的经济上的责任义务，并且最终赌博将成为毁灭生活的一剂毒药。
At the even worse, a selfish gambler would overlook his economic responsibility to the family, and finally turn gambling into a dose of drug which destroys life.
（例子） 更糟的是，蜜月的魅力不久就让空洞的日子所取代，在这些日子里新婚夫妇们必须从中寻找到生活的意义。
At the even worse, the appealing of honeymoon is soon replaced by tedious days, during which the newly married must find out the meaning of life.
14． When it comes to…… 就……而言，谈到……
（用法）引出一个论点，话题的经典句型，可以置于句首也可以置于句尾。
（例子） 当谈及游戏时，许多人相信游戏能让玩家获得诸如坚忍与竞争的生存极限。
When it comes to games, many people believe that they will push the players to some limitations, such as perseverance and vying.
（例子） 再者，当然，斯多葛学者们在谈及纵容与容忍时常令自身陷入极大的窘境。
Further, of course, the XXXX scholars often made themselves bogged down in the dilemma when it comes to tolerance and connivance.
15． The chief reason is because…… 主要原因是……
（用法）用以表达诸多原因中最重要，最首要的一点。
（例子） 同样，最主要的原因是因为那些浪漫主义者未经充分理解到对于任何关系的工作核心，它是激情的，心理的或者经济的。
Similarly, the chief reason is because those romantics does not fully understand  the essense of any relation, which is passionate, psychological or economic.
（例子）相当有趣的是，美国电影常被谴责为美化暴力，从而我们不得不将解决和面对这项危机：一些人试图将电影中的情节搬到现实中来。
Rather interestingly, the American movies are often accuse of beautifying violence. Consequently, we have to face and solve the crisis that some people are attempting to apply the plots to the reality from the screen.