issue25 行为类，欢迎拍砖，拍必回

xuding_godUID: 179213

25. Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What require all real effort and courage is to more in the opposite direction---in an other words, to make things as simple as possible. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------正文(477字)


    Glancing at our society, everything seems to be more and more complex and make us so confused and perplexed. What real need is a world that can gives us a simple and clear environment, so it required effort and courage to make things as simple as possible, rather than complex.

    Just to see what happened in the education, the teachers usually turn a simple axiom convoluted, to show they are a cut above others with intricate knowledge children unknown. But dose it brings only profits to the students, of course not. The purpose of the education is to help the students become autonomous, creative, inquiring people who have the will and the intelligence to create our destiny, not to developed some pedantries with the brains full of confused complex theories or even some teacher-adoring. Demystified theories make teachers’ job more relaxed and can be more easily comprehended by the students. Also the students could handed and use the methods that dictated and interpreted from a complicate in to a simple one efficiently. So it seems big efforts should take into the simplification for the education, which also needed into the world.

    And turn our attention to the industry filed, with its big and complex system, takes a so slow development like a snail in the past century. Why do they not change the circumstance for a better situation and take innovations, even have any courage to do so. Because they have a deep-rooted opinion that if the system is more complex, everyone in it takes less responsibilities, and the simple one plays the opposite. But I dare to say that if only one with enough courage to break the outdated rule to make a convenient system which more efficient than the big old one that every capitalist will summon their courage to simplify, to expect the biggest benefits. So in the simplification, the courage is essentially needed.

    How ever, things as simple as possible seems to be so good, but still there are something can’t be so simple that keep it complex are available and also need efforts. Take science for instance that some complex fields (such as physics) can be divided into many pieces (like mechanics, acoustics, electricity…). Different researches in different parts by the special experts can make each part simpler and could take their most efforts in their own fields. But when compose the scattered together as a whole, they must be a big and complex one that can give a generally, precise description to the course seriously.

    In sum, from what we discussed above, we clearly see that although big and complex things are still exit, but everything in our world would like to become simpler, which can give us more benefits rather than complex. So there is really need requirements of efforts and courage during the simplifications to make our world better.      

觉得这篇写得有点差，主要对行为类这类主题把握不是很准，大家看看提提意见吧，谢谢了！

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mariaUID: 197971

Glancing at our society, everything seems to be more and more complex and make us so confused and perplexed. What is really needed或者改成 what we really needis a world that can gives us a simple and clear environment, so it required effort and courage to make things as simple as possible, rather than complex.

Just to see what happened in the education, the teachers usually turn a simple axiom convoluted, to show they are a cut above others with intricate knowledge children unknown. But dose it bringsbring only profits to the students,? of course not. The purpose of the education is to help the students become autonomous, creative, inquiring people who have the will and the intelligence to create our destiny, not to developeddevelop some pedantries with the brains full of confused complex theories or even some teacher-adoring. Demystified theories make teachers’ job more relaxed and can be more easily comprehended by the students. Also the students could handedhand and use the methods thatare dictated and interpreted from a complicate in tointo a simple one efficiently. So it seems that big efforts should take be taken into the simplification for the education, whichare also needed into the world.这段写得不错

And turning our attention to the industry filed, with its big and complex system, takes a so slowso slow a 吧？不过这点我也不太确定查一下语法书吧 development like a snail in the past century. Why do they notdo not they change the circumstance for a better situation and take innovations, even have any courage to do so. Because they have a deep-rooted opinion that if the system is more complex, everyone in it takes less responsibilities, and the simple one plays the opposite. But I dare to say that if only one with enough courage to break the outdated rule to make a convenient system which more efficient than the big old one that every capitalist will summon their courage to simplify, to expect the biggest benefits. So in the simplification, the courage is essentially needed.感觉这段说得有点不明白阿

How everhowever, things as simple as possible seems to be so good, but still there are something thatcan’t be so simple that keep it complex are available and also need efforts. Take science for instance that some complex fields (such as physics) can be divided into many pieces (like mechanics, acoustics, electricity…). Different researches in different parts by the special experts can make each part simpler and could take their most efforts in their own fields. But when compose the scattered together as a whole, they must be a big and complex one that can give a generally, precise description to the course seriously.个人感觉让步让得不太好，你在这儿表达的意思是存在complex的东西，其实你再多写几句可以写成有时候为了更好的理解一个事物必须从整体来考虑，二者是一个综合且使事物复杂化的过程那样或许更好些吧

In sum, from what we discussed above, we clearly see that although big and complex things are去掉 still exit, but 重复了everything in our world would like to become simpler, which can give us more benefits rather than complex. So there is really needit really need 更好点吧 requirements of efforts and courage during the simplifications to make our world better.
楼主注意语法错误吧，当然我自己做得也不好，以上仅为个人观点不当之处可以在讨论
btw, all in all 是我常见的结尾话，不会没有吧，我再看看语法书吧

xuding_godUID: 179213

谢谢，看来要在看看语法了呵呵，你说那个让步我觉得很不错，谢谢了