issue36 同主题写作 已修改过 万望痛拍

Mars3000UID: 198477

In history, quite a few so called great people at their times went out of people's sight as time went by; also, there were some Persons, who were not compatible in their society, but are much honored today .Any truth could be one only after the examination of time, and so does a great person. In fact, the greatness of individuals are not decided by their contemporaries, but by people living years, decades, or even centuries later.

In the first place, for the lack in knowledge, the majority can usually not make right evaluation to brilliant individuals, whose ideas appear ahead of their times in most cases. In every society, the masses get information from education, common sense, or their experiences, based on which they make judgment. If the words or behaviors of some persons beyond their knowledge, they will not understand, and even think them insane, or evil, just like what happened in some great people in history. A good example in case is Btuno, a great Italian philosopher, who advocated the theory of Copernicus , that the earth is not the center of the universe as what people had been thinking. He, however, was put into fire by the church because they thought it a heretic, and his idea did not become accepted until many years after his death.

In the second place, sometimes people's eyes are blinded, due to the complexity of the fact, or the illusion made by dominators, so they can not discern the truth clearly any more, as well as the greatness of individuals. As a proverb goes that the bacon does not shine on its own base, people can not make wise decision as they are in a society, where the concept of value, perhaps wrong, has been set up before, on which they give their criterion how to value a person, and even the information given is far beyond the fact. Some dictators in history, for instance, successfully gained much respect of their citizens by making an illusion, and pretended to be mercy leaders. Only many years later, after their death, people found themselves cheated by these brutal rulers.

Admittedly, in some other cases, people can make right judgment to the greatness of individuals contemporary, such as Newton, who has been given great honor since his time, Abraham Lincon, one of the greatest presidents in American history, ect. This can not push over the statement above yet. It only tell a fact that contemprary people made a judgment according with the truth, nevertheless they did not know whether they had done the right decision , which still needs to be judged by people living after them.

In sum, from a historical view, what people think right now could become completely wrong tomorrow, and probably, a person we disdain would become a great one in eyes of our inferiors. Incredible? It is the truth, however. You and I, the ordinary persons today, with eccentric ideas,have never stop thinking to be a great man, which seems a little funny, but who can exclude the possibility that we become examples for inferiors to learn from 200 years later?

Mars3000UID: 198477

[B]我就呐闷了，我也帮人改过了
咋就没人拍我呢？[/B]  :confused:

ryanqUID: 154025

36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."

帮你把题目贴上
:)
以后别忘了哦

Mars3000UID: 198477

呵呵，一着急给忘了
谢谢啊 :)

药到病除UID: 196768

1 ...that the earth is not the center of the universe as(我觉得as应该改成,and which is different from) what people had been thinking.
2 ....sometimes people's eyes are blinded(blinded有点激烈，改成dusted好点？)
3 Btuno(Bruno),Lincon(Lincoln)
4 body部分逻辑我觉得还可以，段2，3的例子碰巧跟我想的差不多。
5.最后一段的"You and I, the ordinary persons today, with eccentric ideas,have never stop thinking to be a great man, which seems a little funny, but who can exclude the possibility that we become examples for inferiors to learn from 200 years later?"以自己为例不好，而且还强加意志给别人，最好说"some people which seems normal now"之类的。

一家之言，不要见怪阿：）

Mars3000UID: 198477

态度：支持
A 知识的缺乏（客观条件）影响人们作出正确评价
布鲁诺
B 当局者迷，既受制于容易受到所在环境的错误导向（主观条件）
一些独裁者愚民
C 即便有些伟人在当时受到了正确的评价也并不与本命题矛盾，因为他们是否作出客观评价还需要后人来评判

In history, quite a few so called great people at their times went out of people's sight as time went by; there also were some Persons, however,  who were not compatible with their society, but are much honored today .Any truth would be one only after the test of time, and so does that a great person could be a great. In fact, the greatness of individuals are not decided by their contemporaries, but by people living years, decades, or even centuries later.

In the first place, for  lack in knowledge,  usually the majority can not make right evaluation to brilliant individuals, whose ideas appear ahead of their times in most cases. In every society, the masses get information from education, common sense, or their experiences, based on which they make judgment. If the words or behaviors of some persons go beyond their knowledge, they will be confused,suspicious,rejective and even afraid for these persons' seemingly insane ideas, just like what happened on some great ones in history. A good example in case is Bruno, a great Italian philosopher, who advocated the theory of Copernicus , that the earth is not the center of the universe which contradicted with the opinion people had been holding. He, not with standing, was put into fire by the church because they thought him a heretic, and his doctrine did not become accepted until many years after his death. The case of Bruno is not a rare one, and history abouds with the examples of people who underwent the same `misfortune as him, which time and time again,illustrate a fact that people can hardly give just evaluation to their contemporaries caused by the limited knowledge.

In the second place, sometimes people's eyes are dusted, due to the complexity of the fact, or the illusion made by dominators, so they can not discern the truth clearly any more, as well as the greatness of individuals. This is true in many cases.As a proverb goes that the bacon does not shine on its own base, people can not make wise decision as they are in a society, where the concept of value, perhaps wrong, has been set up before, on which they give their criterion how to value a person, and even the information given is far beyond the fact. Some dictators in history, for instance, successfully gained much respect of their citizens by making an illusion, and pretending to be mercy leaders. Only many years later, after their death, people found themselves cheated by these brutal rulers.This case demonstrates that it is hard for people contemporary make objective judgment for the influnce of conditions in which they live.

Admittedly, in some other cases, people can make right judgment to the greatness of individuals contemporary, such as Newton, who has been given great honor since his time, Abraham Lincoln, one of the greatest presidents in American history, ect. This can not push over the statement above yet. Because it only tells a fact that contemprary people made a judgment according with the truth, nevertheless they did not know whether they had done the right decision , which still needs to be judged by people living after them.

In sum, from a historical view, what people think right at present could become completely absurd tomorrow, and probably, a person we disdain now is likely to become a great one in eyes of our inferiors. Incredible? It is the truth, however.This is a good news to certain ordinary persons today, with eccentric ideas,who have never stop thinking to be a great man. Their dreams seem a little funny maybe, but who can exclude the possibility that they would become examples for inferiors to learn from 200 years later?

兄台太客气了，能不吝赐教我已经万分感谢了。
你说的问题我已经改过了，文章我也重新调整了一下。
还望继续多多指正。