Issue50 第2篇 你拍我，我必回拍

fengcongleeUID: 198314

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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：55分17秒     610 words
从2005年2月11日20时0分到2005年2月11日21时60分
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In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university
level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the
academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
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I disagree with the assertion
1、对于一些科学领域，工作在学术世界外面无助与学术能力，反而会分散研究和指导工作的注意力
2、在学术世界以外的工作也会导致大学优秀人才的流失
3、对某些领域，工程、应用数学领域，应该鼓励去从事一些实际工作，这样对学生未来的就业有好处
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The speaker asserts that all faculty should do some compulsory work outside the
academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach in the
purpose of improving the quality of instruction at the college and university
level. However, in my point of view, this assertion goes too far extreme for
all faculty to do so which can be substantiated by the following discussion.

Firstly, to faculty members of some academic fields, working outside the
academic world will do little to their academic ability while distracting them
from the research and instruction work they should concentrate on. Just take
the theoretic physics for example. Some prominent physical scientists do their unique
research under the support of the national scientific fund. They dedicate all
their time and energy to find the very truth of our physical world. If you
force them to engage in something outside their academic world, it will result
in some bad effects. On the one hand, many of them are surely reluctant to
do these stuff which do little help to their research and their future
honors. On the other hand, even though they are willing to do these jobs, it
will not provide the good instructions with students. What the students need is
only the instruction from the academic direction not from the practical
direction in that they are in the theoretic field with little relevant to the
career professions.


Secondly, compulsory working in the professions outside the academic world may
cause the college and university to lose their outstanding faculty members.
It is true that the outside world was fraught with many allurements. Imaging
that a professor working in research institute for many years suddenly is
exposed to the alluring world of professions, do you think he still will
maintain his academic position without choosing a more promising profession.
The force to live a better life will make him to do a pragmatic choice to
leave the campus for a more comfortable and affluent prospect. Therefore, many
colleges and universities will lose their outstanding faculty
members-----their most valuable treasures. In other word, it will certainly
undermine the quality of the instruction in that there no good instructor.


Admittedly, to some academic area such as engineering and applied math,
faculty members should be encouraged to work outside for some time in order
to orient instruction to student for future career. In the applied
engineering areas, the sufficient instruction does not only conduce the
students to absorb the knowledge from the textbooks, but also facilitate them
with some practical experience. What is the best way for our instructors to
get the practical experience? Engaging in the professions is the most direct
way. The faculty should spend some time working outside and accumlate some
useful and utilitarian applied experience. This experience will become main
part of their instructions which is very helpful to improve the students'
ability and make their future professions more promising. It is the same  
situation for the applied math. If the instructor is the chief account in a
big company outside the academic world, he can teach his students some
professional techniques out of his experience. It surely will come out
naturally and deep root in the brain of the students. The students will learn
from the instructor's cases vividly rather than those outdated examples in
the text book.

To sum up, we should not require all the faculty members to work outside the
academic world. At first, we must respect the individuals' willingness. And
then we should make clear what areas this expectation should be applied. If
the authority of college and university use it improperly, the quality of the
instruction will be undermined instead of being improved.

davidjackyUID: 135962

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khwUID: 162559

楼主是文科的吧我猜，你的英语应该可以把文章写得更富余变化一些
最后一句意思有点不对