issue141 高频 PTT限时模考,WORD里改了一下,21号考

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141 Most people recognize the benefits of individuals, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.

PTT模考,559WORDS,21号就考了

Why does the concept of individuals loom so large in the modern world? Surely because the appreciation for individuals could bring about some benefits, which are more and more manifest. Generally speaking, the values of innovation, creation always come with the idea of individuals.  It is admitted that the concept of individuals is essential, however, it cannot go very far without conformity when it comes the person economic success.

To begin with, the concept of individual could promise some vital virtues for the modern society, such as innovation, creation, which are indispensable for the personal economic success. It cannot go apart from the business realm when it comes to the personal economic success. Let us get down to the business realm, it is only the innovation and creation, originated from the individuality, that could bring about success in the modern world. So many competitors rush for the same cake - the market profit. Who can get the biggest part of the cake and by what he can get it? The answer is innovation and creation, which can lend the strength to beat the rivals. The market strategy should be innovative, which is different the traditions and original. The flourish of Internet shopping and selling in some countries could serve as a compelling example here. The advertisement campaign should also creative, which promises the attractiveness to the consumers, accordingly leads to the larger market. In a word, the whole conformity cannot bring the vigorous energy and strength in the competition-objected business realms, thus, cannot bring about the personal economic success.

However, the overestimate the individuality would be dangerous, especially in the world characterized as globalization and "earth village". There are more and more uniform standards in many fields, including business and even technology and science. It is very hard to imagine that one can get the personal economic success if he does not conform to the common "game rules" - international standards and regulations. Take the software field for example, if the software engineers emphasize the individuals in their own organization and design some software cannot run in the general computer operating system, such as Windows of Microsoft Corp. and Red Hat Linux, etc, there would be few or even no customers to buy their softwares, which can merely run on the platform of the engineers' organization. Likewise, if a TV set produced in the China, the effect of individualization, cannot meet the standards of home electrical apparatuses of U.S, the TV sets factory would encounter some big troubles, consequently, the personal economic success of the factory staff would be merely an illusion.

Therefore, only when the individuality and conformity plays the roles together, the personal economic success may come true. The individuality inducing to the original market strategy, advertisement campaign, and so on, which would be conform to some essential standards in the whole world view, the personal economic success would be close at hand.

In sum, we should recognize the benefits of individuals, meanwhile, we should not overestimate it and neglect the conformity. If we compare the personal economic success as a man, the individuality and conformity are just as the two legs of the man. It is only two legs working together that promise the man strength and vigorousness.

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issue141 高频 PTT限时模考,WORD里改了一下,21号考
141 Most people recognize the benefits of individuals, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.
PTT模考,559WORDS,21号就考了
Why does the concept of individuals loom so large in the modern world? Surely because the appreciation for individuals could bring about some benefits, which are more and more manifest.【这句有问题啊，两个从句】 Generally speaking, the values of innovation, creation always come【S】 with the idea of individuals. It is admitted that the concept of individuals is essential; however, it cannot go very far without conformity when it comes the person economic success.

To begin with, the concept of individual could promise some vital virtues for the modern society, such as innovation, creation, which are indispensable for the personal economic success. It cannot go apart from the business realm when it comes to the personal economic success. Let us get down to the business realm; it is only the innovation and creation, originated from the individuality, that 【which】could bring about success in the modern world. So many competitors rush for the same cake - the market profit. Who can get the biggest part of the cake and by what he[or she] can get it? The answer is innovation and creation, which can lend the strength to beat the rivals. The market strategy should be innovative, which is different [From] the traditions and original. The flourish of Internet shopping and selling in some countries could serve as a compelling example here. The advertisement campaign should also creative, which promises the attractiveness to the consumers, accordingly leads to the larger market. In a word, the whole conformity cannot bring the vigorous energy and strength in the competition-objected business realms, thus, cannot bring about the personal economic success.

However, the overestimate the individuality would be dangerous, especially in the world characterized as globalization and "earth village". There are more and more uniform standards in many fields, including business and even technology and science. It is very hard to imagine that one can get the personal economic success if he [Or she]does not conform to the common "game rules" - international standards and regulations. Take the software field for example, if the software engineers emphasize the individuals in their own organization and design some software cannot run in the general computer operating system, such as Windows of Microsoft Corp. and Red Hat Linux, etc, there would be few or even no customers to buy their softwares, which can merely run on the platform of the engineers' organization. Likewise, if a TV set produced in the China, the effect of individualization, cannot meet the standards of home electrical apparatuses of U.S, the TV sets factory would encounter some big troubles; consequently, the personal economic success of the factory staff would be merely an illusion.【例子可以】

Therefore, only when the individuality and conformity plays【Play】 the roles together, the personal economic success may come true. The individuality inducing to the original market strategy, advertisement campaign, and so on, which would be conform【ing】 to some essential standards in the whole world view, the personal economic success would be close at hand.

In sum, we should recognize the benefits of individuals; meanwhile, we should not overestimate it and neglect the conformity. If we compare the personal economic success as a man, the individuality and conformity are just as the two legs of the man. It is only two legs working together that promise the man strength and vigorousness.

不错，
我3.23考啊

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占个座。缓口气再说

龙非UID: 193190

141 Most people recognize the benefits of individuals, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.

PTT模考,559WORDS,21号就考了

Why does the concept of individuals loom so large in the modern world? Surely because the appreciation for individuals could bring about some benefits, which are more and more manifest. Generally speaking, the values of innovation, creation always come with the idea of individuals. It is admitted that the concept of individuals is essential, however, it cannot go very far without conformity when it comes the person economic success.nc4的开头，小心点。。。

To begin with, the concept of individual could promise some vital virtues for the modern society, such as innovation, creation, which are indispensable for the personal economic success. It cannot go apart from the business realm when it comes to the personal economic success. Let us get down to the business realm, it is only the innovation and creation, originated from the individuality, that could bring about success in the modern world. So many competitors rush for the same cake - the market profit. Who can get the biggest part of the cake and by what he can get it? The answer is innovation and creation, which can lend the strength to beat the rivals. The market strategy should be innovative, which is different the traditions and original. The flourish of Internet shopping and selling in some countries could serve as a compelling example here. The advertisement campaign should also creative, which promises the attractiveness to the consumers, accordingly leads to the larger market. In a word, the whole conformity cannot bring the vigorous energy and strength in the competition-objected business realms, thus, cannot bring about the personal economic success. 个人觉得，最后结题句不要牵出conformity的好，因为之前并没有这方面的论证，突然冒出来，有点生硬，我理解你是想回应一下题目，个人觉得效果没达到

However, the overestimate the individuality would be dangerous, especially in the world characterized as globalization and "earth village". There are more and more uniform standards in many fields, including business and even technology and science. It is very hard to imagine that one can get the personal economic success if he does not conform to the common "game rules" - international standards and regulations. Take the software field for example, if the software engineers emphasize the individuals in their own organization and design some software cannot run in the general computer operating system, such as Windows of Microsoft Corp. and Red Hat Linux, etc, there would be few or even no customers to buy their softwares, which can merely run on the platform of the engineers' organization. Likewise, if a TV set produced in the China, the effect of individualization, cannot meet the standards of home electrical apparatuses of U.S, the TV sets factory would encounter some big troubles, consequently, the personal economic success of the factory staff would be merely an illusion.如果能有一句总结就更好了

Therefore, only when the individuality and conformity plays the roles together, the personal economic success may come true. The individuality inducing to the original market strategy, advertisement campaign, and so on, which would be conform to some essential standards in the whole world view, the personal economic success would be close at hand.

In sum, we should recognize the benefits of individuals, meanwhile, we should not overestimate it and neglect the conformity. If we compare the personal economic success as a man, the individuality and conformity are just as the two legs of the man. It is only two legs working together that promise the man strength and vigorousness.
可以了，思路清晰，语言流畅，不要想太多了，这个水平可以上战场的，加油

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谢谢龙非鼓励
是的,开头就是NCE4的句子.
到不是模板,只是写的时候突然想到了.呵呵.
是得小心点,判为cheating就挂了.