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非常感谢猫猫的提纲,对于猫猫的提纲,我再补充一些自己的想法
195. "The goal of politics should not be the pursuit of an ideal, but
rather the search for common ground and reasonable consensus."
1 The goal of politics should be the pursuit of an ideal ( general welfare, liberty, equality………) which can be better accomplished in a stable social order.
2 The search for common ground and reasonable consensus, which benefits to form a stable social order, serves as one of necessary means to achieve this pursuit. 猫猫认为common ground和reasonable concensus应该符合于追求理想,我也觉得这点比较好,美国的民主,共和两党之间其实就是一直在consensus,但是他们都是基于对民主和平等的追求(没有民主和平等,两个党如何达到妥协呢?
3 However, under some circumstances, politics cannot merely seek compromise, but offer constructive political viewpoints.
170. "The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of
its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its
people."
The surest indicator of a great nation lies in not only the achievements of its rulers, artists, and scientists but also general welfare.not only...but also,也就是二者没有轻重,都是伟大国家的表征?
1 the achievement and greatness of the political leaders, artists and scientist contribute to the general welfare.伟大的成就可以促进general welfare,这里比较好展开!~BOW
2 however, under some circumstances, people suffer from so-called great achievement, for example, deteriorating environmental pollution caused by so-called technological progress. 我觉得这里说的伟大的achievement提到环境等问题有些牵强,这些achievement是人类共同的,不是个别ruler,artist, scientist,不过觉得也能说过去
3 No body denies general welfare, one of important indicator of a great nation, is the ultimate pursuit of every nation. 将general welfare 内容展开,强大的国家采用立法,合理经济秩序,福利,保险等措施。
这个题按照猫猫的提纲,我觉得position换一下更好写一点,伟大国家的表征就是general welfare,因为(1)the achievement从根本上说也是serve for the purpose of general welfare,(2)而环境那个提纲可以作为反面支撑这个观点.就是虽然some scientists achieve some innovation, but the side effects from these achievements destroy the general welfare , which shoulb be rejected by the public and the whole society
47. "Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on
reasoning and other cognitive skills."
In some field of human endeavor, such as art, emotion intelligence take precedence over reasoning and other cognitive skills.
A well-balanced education help form integrated personality of students. ( much juvenile delinquency results from mental problems)
猫猫的提纲很有新意,不过如果第二点讲得太多有跑题的嫌疑,得到结尾拉回来.因为题目是一个"事实性"的论述,而不是"should"的.
99. "In any realm of life—whether academic, social, business, or
political—the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an
idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas
idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate
options."
Idealistic point of view serves to improve people’s enthusiasm, motivation and confidence, which should not be overlooked.
Simpler, more immediate options mean practicability. 和理想相对
76. "Truly profound thinkers and highly creative artists are always out of
step with their time and their society."
In history, many great thinker and creative artist were neglected or even suffer from persecution.
However, there are more great thinkers who receive recognition in their time of society.
难道这个题只能成为事实的堆砌
18. "Only by being forced to defend an idea against the doubts and
contrasting views of others does one really discover the value of that
idea."
Aside from defending an idea against the doubts and contrasting views, selective absorption selective sbsorption是很好的supplement,不怕没话说了.呵呵,什么交叉学科搞出一大堆serves as one necessary method, for the reason that any idea could少了一个not be completely correct from every perspective.
63. "To truly understand your own culture—no matter how you define
it—requires personal knowledge of at least one other culture, one that is
distinctly different from your own."
Knowledge of anther different culture helps question some thoughts and behaviors which is taken for granted in their own culture. In the global age, people are easier to understand their own culture.
Comparison serves as important but not prerequisite means to understand one’s own culture.昨晚又和一个同学讨论了这个,的确是这样,除了对比,还有很多方式了解自己的文化
218. "In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or
a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people."
Some types of artic works, aiming at diversion and entertainment, such as film, popular songs call for understanding and acceptance from average people.’
Others works of art, such as literature, sculpture, are valued as aesthetic worth, which may not be understandable to most people.
True works of art are likely accepted by descendents, even not by contemporaries.
再次谢谢猫猫,BOW~
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