issue80 模考 封笔之作 谢谢所有的人

so猫UID: 148633

Issue80
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：43分52秒     676 words
从2005年2月20日10时15分到2005年2月20日10时43分
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All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have no interest in science.
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In the modern society with the development in science at rapid speed, it seems impossible for anyone to separate himself/herself to the influence of science. Therefore I agree with the speaker that all students, including them studying in arts and literature, should take courses in science no matter how they dislike them or how irrelevant to science their subjects seem to be.

Science, as the objective statements to both the natural and social conditions, illustrates the truth of this world without prejudice. It correlates to our daily life in almost any aspects. Thus studying science can contribute a lot in further understanding the world and the fields someone studies in both in indirect and direct ways.

First of all, studying the science equip people basic knowledge towards the nature and society-- which are necessary for people to survive on this knowledge-bombing earth. For example, people have to calculate the profits and cost when purchasing, then mathematics should be used; also they have to take basic physical and geographical principles into consideration when they trapped in a house on fire or even whey they make efforts in parking their car in a narrow space. These are "minor" things in daily life that seem to be far from the boring scientific statistics and principles. However, without the help of this basic knowledge, there is nothing we can do but turn to others when we are in troubles. From this point of view, science learning is so important that directly helps people lead normal life no matter what the careers they are.

In addition, for artists and other people whose work seems irrelevant to science, the proper understanding and utilization of science gives an opportunity for them to attain profound understanding in their jobs and generate breakthrough in this field. For supporting example one needs to look no further than the famous painting "Impressionism, the Sunrise" by Monet. It is the involvement of basic scenography in physics and the investigation in neurology that the wonderful visional effect and shocking was realized. The traditional painting skills were challenged by the new factors involving into the process. Another example is the generation of the famous novel "The Great Expectations". The vivid description upon the psychological movements and the social environment actually owes to the Dickenson's examination upon the psychology and related science concerned on society and population.

However, the demand on taking science course doesn't imply all students should take the same causes and to the same extent. As we know, the purpose of schools is not to cultivate all students to scientists. Thus there should be different demands for different students. Those who are not interested in science and those who are in major of arts cannot be treated the same as those who aim at working in laboratory and becoming professors. It is ridiculous for a students majoring in literature to study the mathematics as someone from Computer Science, or to remember all the names of the organ of body as someone from medical science, or to accept the Relativity Theory as someone from physics. The students should be guided to choose the science subjects related with the fields they study in, such as the ones from literature to pick up social science, the ones from music to participate in acoustics, and the ones from psychology to learn something about chemistry and biology. By doing so, the students could find what are most suitable to them and assist learning and using the skills in the further study in their own major.

To sum up, the demands of studying on science are obvious from the above analysis, both for the survival of an individual in modern society and a method for students to investigate and understand their own major from another aspect and to deeper extent. Nevertheless, I take the conservation about the wide-spreading science courses without no guidance and suggestion. For the students majoring in arts and literature, as far as I am concerns, advice should be given when they are choosing what they should take.

如题 谢谢所有的人
最后拍拍吧~~~
拍完都来hug一个~

boyjimUID: 125249

Support!!!

偶就不改了~祝猫猫明天战狗成功 捕鼠凯旋~

sblbaslerUID: 175229

没说的了，别再写的这么好了，老美看见会自卑的，Hug一个，再次祝JJ好运！

xiongyicnUID: 192745

偶也明天杀G,最后一次PP3模考是周五了,希望手不会生,明天!
不改了.
衷心地BLESS大家,当然也包括自己!!

MadheroUID: 125272

真幸福啊，祝明天考好。我是菜鸟，就不拍了

鬼谷子UID: 159645

我来了，看看吧

G猫UID: 192988

猫猫这篇写的很好，
明天你一定会写得很好的。

flyingwindUID: 189320

老美看了以为自己人哎~~~
bless!

圣光UID: 193720

Issue80
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户 共用时间：43分52秒 676 words
从2005年2月20日10时15分到2005年2月20日10时43分
------题目------
All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have no interest in science.
------正文------
In the modern society with the development in science at rapid speed, it seems impossible for anyone to separate himself/herself to the influence of science. Therefore I agree with the speaker that all students, including [them][those好些吧?] studying in arts and literature, should take courses in science no matter how they dislike them or how irrelevant to science their subjects seem to be.[开头直接入题,表明观点,觉得不错.]

Science, as the objective statements to both the natural and social conditions, illustrates the truth of this world without prejudice. It correlates to our daily life in almost any aspects. Thus studying science can contribute a lot in further understanding the world and the fields someone studies in both in indirect and direct ways.

First of all, studying the science equip people basic knowledge towards the nature and society-- which are necessary for people to survive on this knowledge-bombing earth. For example, people have to calculate the profits and cost when purchasing, then mathematics should be used; also they have to take basic physical and geographical principles into consideration when they trapped in a house on fire or even [whey][when] they make efforts in parking their car in a narrow space. These are "minor" things in daily life that seem to be far from the boring scientific statistics and principles. However, without the help of this basic knowledge, there is nothing we can do but turn to others when we are in troubles. From this point of view, science learning is so important that directly helps people lead normal life no matter what the careers they are.[生活中的小事体现出学习科学的重要性,和我的想法不谋而和,赞!语言还是那么流畅,例子恰当,说理明确不知道我哪天能赶上你,估计这辈子是不成了~^_^]

In addition, for artists and other people whose work seems irrelevant to science, the proper understanding and utilization of science gives an opportunity for them to attain profound understanding in their jobs and generate breakthrough in this field. For supporting example one needs to look no further than the famous painting "Impressionism, the Sunrise" by Monet. It is the involvement of basic scenography in physics and the investigation in neurology that the wonderful visional effect and shocking was realized. The traditional painting skills were challenged by the new factors involving into the process. Another example is the generation of the famous novel "The Great Expectations". The vivid description upon the psychological movements and the social environment actually owes to the Dickenson's examination upon the psychology and related science concerned on society and population. [perfect!例子恰当,说理好,赞啊赞!]

However, the demand on taking science course doesn't imply all students should take the same causes and to the same extent. As we know, the purpose of schools is not to cultivate all students to scientists. Thus there should be different demands for different students. Those who are not interested in science and those who are in major of arts cannot be treated the same as those who aim at working in laboratory and becoming professors. It is ridiculous for a students majoring in literature to study the mathematics as someone from Computer Science, or to remember all the names of the organ of body as someone from medical science, or to accept the Relativity Theory as someone from physics. The students should be guided to choose the science subjects related with the fields they study in, such as the ones from literature to pick up social science, the ones from music to participate in acoustics, and the ones from psychology[上面刚刚在例子里面说Dickenson's "The Great Expectations"是归功于作家研究心理学,这里怎么又说心理学的学生不属于科学的范畴了呢?对他们可是不公平的呀^_^] to learn something about chemistry and biology. By doing so, the students could find what are most suitable to them and assist learning and using the skills in the further study in their own major.

To sum up, the demands of studying on science are obvious from the above analysis, both for the survival of an individual in modern society and a method for students to investigate and understand their own major from another aspect and to deeper extent. Nevertheless, I take the conservation about the wide-spreading science courses without no guidance and suggestion. For the students majoring in arts and literature, as far as I am [concerns][concerned], advice should be given when they are choosing what they should take.

[这篇应该差不多是例文了吧,我觉得猫猫带着这样的状态去考试,想把作文写低都难啊!!没什么多说的了,加油加油再加油就是了.明天考完了记得回来帮帮我们改作文哈~~
一切尽在bless中!]

圣光UID: 193720

忘记了还要和猫猫hug一下，这个便宜是不占白不占滴～～＠＿＠

鬼谷子UID: 159645

------题目------
All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have no interest in science.
------正文------
In the modern society with the development in science at rapid speed, it seems impossible for anyone to separate himself/herself to 【from】the influence of science. Therefore I agree with the speaker that all students, including them studying in arts and literature, should take courses in science no matter how they dislike them or how irrelevant to science their subjects seem to be. 【只是从influence来解释你赞同题目的原因似乎不够】

Science, as the objective statements to both the natural and social conditions, illustrates the truth of this world without prejudice. It correlates to our daily life in almost any aspects. Thus studying science can contribute a lot in further understanding the world and the fields someone studies in both in indirect and direct ways. 【总领的不错】

First of all, studying the science equip【equips】 people basic knowledge towards the nature and society-- which are necessary for people to survive on this knowledge-bombing earth. For example, people have to calculate the profits and cost when purchasing, then mathematics should be used; also they have to take basic physical and geographical principles into consideration when they trapped in a house on fire or even whey they make efforts in parking their car 【cars】in a narrow space. 【这个，物理和地理怎么用的啊？】These are "minor" things in daily life that seem to be far from the boring scientific statistics and principles. However, without the help of this basic knowledge, there is nothing we can do but turn to others when we are in troubles. 【这样不也是解决问题的方法？】 From this point of view, science learning is so important that directly helps people lead normal life no matter what the careers they are【in】.
【nature的问题呢？】

In addition, for artists and other people whose work seems irrelevant to science, the proper understanding and utilization of science gives an opportunity for them to attain profound understanding in their jobs and generate breakthrough in this field. For supporting example one needs to look no further than the famous painting "Impressionism, the Sunrise" by Monet. It is the involvement of basic scenography in physics and the investigation in neurology that the wonderful visional effect and shocking was realized. The traditional painting skills were challenged by the new factors involving into the process. Another example is the generation of the famous novel "The Great Expectations". The vivid description upon the psychological movements and the social environment actually owes to the Dickenson's examination upon the psychology and related science concerned on society and population. 【不错】

However, the demand on taking science course doesn't imply all students should take the same causes 【courses】and to the same extent. As we know, the purpose of schools is not to cultivate all students to scientists. 【嗯，注意到了适度，很好】Thus there should be different demands for different students. Those who are not interested in science and those who are in major of arts cannot be treated the same as those who aim at working in laboratory and becoming professors. It is ridiculous for a students majoring in literature to study the mathematics as someone from Computer Science, or to remember all the names of the organ of body as someone from medical science, or to accept the Relativity Theory as someone from physics. 【很好的列举】The students should be guided to choose the science subjects related with the fields they study in, such as the ones from literature to pick up social science, the ones from music to participate in acoustics, and the ones from psychology to learn something about chemistry and biology. By doing so, the students could find what are most suitable to them and assist learning and using the skills in the further study in their own major.

To sum up, the demands of studying on science are obvious from the above analysis, both for the survival of an individual in modern society and a method for students to investigate and understand their own major from another aspect and to deeper extent. Nevertheless, I take the conservation about the wide-spreading science courses without no guidance and suggestion. For the students majoring in arts and literature, as far as I am concerns, advice should be given when they are choosing what they should take.
【除了B1有一些小问题之外，整篇文章是比较成功的，猫猫，明天一定会天蓝！hug～～】

枫丹UID: 166492

啊猫,不要太不给老美面子啊! 加油!

linakUID: 155465

我也祝你考好吧
什么都不用不说了

mondiaUID: 193825

打出来好好研究研究

[B][B][B]bless[/B] [/B]  [/B]

boancquUID: 165060

猫猫的语言、例子以及论证是在是佩服了！
祝猫猫成功！
一个请求：猫猫考完了之后谈谈感想吧，顺便把你的“武器库”共享出来吧！