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smartyrUID: 169453

Issue138  第14篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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从2005年2月25日14时49分到2005年2月25日15时51分
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Position: 部分赞同：除了失败外其它很重的因素：个人努力和机遇
1.科学领域的任何发现和进步与科学家的不懈努力是分不开的
2.机遇也是很重要的
3.当然失败也是很重要：人会理性思考问题，会继承前人已有的成果，总结他们的教训；会从自己的失败中总结经验教训。
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Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
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I partially agree with the speaker's assertion that through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. As a matter of fact, there are other factors that may be more important than mistakes in determining any discovery or progress in the arduous way of exploring the unknown world.

First of all, there is no royal road to science, which always be thronged with difficulties and frustration, and any little discovery and progress need one’s ceaseless endeavors and strong personality, such as persistence, confidence, optimism, and devotion for science, to ensure one’s eventual success. We know that every little progress needs myriads of experiments, observation, and theory deduction, many of which are boring and time-consuming. Therefore, these spirits supply the inexhaustible source for their continuous research. To illustrate, two supreme scientists in modern physics-Newton and Einstein has set paradigm for us. It is hard to imagine that Newton how would formulate three fundamental laws of mechanics and the laws of gravitation and Einstein would found the general and special theory of relativity and the photoelectric effect, without these enduring spirits. It is just like the preeminent American inventor Thomas Edison once said that genius was one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.

Meanwhile, arduous work and enduring persistence is blind and aimless unless one can be able to perceive everything with an acute foresight and grasp every opportunity as much as possible in all the spheres of life.  A typical example in this case is that the discovery of the medicine penicillin, discovered by a famous British chemist-Alexander Fleming, which is commonly used because of its effective function in wound infection and other infectious diseases. When Fleming did his experiment some day, he discovered that the contaminant blue-green mould, which was neglected and discarded by all his counterparts in that time, was inhibited the bacterial cultivation. But, Fleming revealed this phenomenon with his careful and insightful observation and eventually he made it. After all, the Fortune's favored child belongs to the prepared minds.

Nevertheless, mistakes also play a considerably important role in the process of any discovery or progress of human great breakthrough. It is just as the saying goes that mistakes are the precursors to success. Indeed, the apparent characteristic between human and other creatures is that he has the capacity of thinking independently and rationally, also he always tries his best to improve himself in order to be more perfect. Furthermore, human can learn the knowledge and fruitions, which have been achieved and accumulated by his precursors for a long period in their long and continuously pursuing truth of nature, thus steer clear of the sandbars and accomplish progress. In addition, human also has the capacity of summarizing and learning the lessons from his own past experience. In the most case, he will never commit the exactly the same blunders, though we can rule out the possibility that he might make a mistake next time. All these can contribute greatly to human’s final success.

In conclusion, if one wants to success or make progress in the way to climb the summit of science, he should make persistence as his good friend, prudence as his brother, and get ready for every opportunities god endow him, also he should make experience as his reference and learn the lessons from it in order to conquer any difficulty.

鬼谷子UID: 159645

把提纲和链接发到同主题的帖子里面吧

ivyshoulUID: 195537

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Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
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I partially agree with the speaker's assertion that through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. As a matter of fact, there are other factors that may be more important than mistakes in determining any discovery or progress in the arduous way of exploring the unknown world.

First of all, there is no royal road to science to science? Or to scientific discoveries…, which always be thronged with difficulties and frustration, and any little discovery and progress need one’s ceaseless endeavors and strong personality, such as persistence, confidence, optimism, and devotion for science, to ensure one’s eventual success. We know that every little又来every little哦 progress needs myriads of experiments, observation, and theory deduction, many of which are boring不是吧,别人觉得有趣那 and time-consuming. Therefore, these spirits supply the inexhaustible source for their continuous research. To illustrate, two supreme scientists in modern physics-Newton and Einstein has set paradigm for us. It is hard to imagine that Newton how would formulate three fundamental laws of mechanics and the laws of gravitation and Einstein would found the general and special theory of relativity and the photoelectric effect, without these enduring spirits. It is just like the preeminent American inventor Thomas Edison once said that genius was one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. 什么什么!居然半句也不提mistakes!好歹也要点出来在myriads of experiments, observation, and theory deduction中会发生错误,然后牛人们又怎么怎么通过错误…..

Meanwhile, arduous work and enduring persistence is blind and aimless unless one can be able to perceive everything with an acute foresight and grasp every opportunity as much as possible in all the spheres of life.那么严重? A typical example in this case is that the discovery of the medicine penicillin, discovered by a famous British chemist-Alexander Fleming, which is commonly used because of its effective function in wound infection and other infectious diseases. When Fleming did his experiment some day, he discovered that the contaminant blue-green mould, which was neglected and discarded by all his counterparts in that time, was inhibited the bacterial cultivation. But, Fleming revealed this phenomenon with his careful and insightful observation and eventually he made it. After all, the Fortune's favored child belongs to the prepared minds. 还是没说mistakes哦 还有,怎么觉得penicillin的例子不是错误啊? Discard是错误?那这是通过discard的错误作出的进步吗?

Nevertheless, mistakes also play a considerably important role in the process of any discovery or progress of human great breakthrough. It is just as the saying goes that mistakes are the precursors to success. Indeed, the apparent characteristic between human and other creatures is that he has the capacity of thinking independently and rationally, also he always tries his best to improve himself in order to be more perfect.和mistake 有关吗?Furthermore, human can learn the knowledge and fruitions, which have been achieved and accumulated by his precursors for a long period in their long and continuously pursuing truth of nature, thus steer clear of the sandbars and accomplish progress.和Mistake有关吗?In addition, human also has the capacity of summarizing and learning the lessons from his own past experience. In the most case, he will never commit the exactly the same blunders, 好歹点了一下ts… though we can rule out the possibility that he might make a mistake next time. All these can contribute greatly to human’s final success.

In conclusion, if one wants to success or make progress in the way to climb the summit of science, he should make persistence as his good friend, prudence as his brother, and get ready for every opportunities god endow him, also he should make experience as his reference and learn the lessons from it in order to conquer any difficulty.
师兄,通篇不提mistakes小心被判跑提哦,好歹总要拽回来说说吧

smartyrUID: 169453

[B][]color=red通篇不提mistakes小心被判跑提哦,好歹总要拽回来说说吧[/B]
我的position：partially agree,我认为mistakes不是最主要的，还有个人努力和机遇。你认为？？

ivyshoulUID: 195537

问题是题目就要你讨论Mistakes啊

combatantUID: 200023

I partially agree with the speaker's assertion that through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. As a matter of fact, there are other factors that may be more important than mistakes in determining any discovery or progress in the arduous way of exploring the unknown world.

First of all, there is no royal road to science, which always be thronged with difficulties and frustration, and any little discovery and progress need one’s ceaseless endeavors and strong personality, such as persistence, confidence, optimism, and devotion for science, to ensure one’s eventual success. We know that every little progress needs myriads of experiments, observation, and theory deduction, many of which are boring and time-consuming. Therefore, these spirits supply the inexhaustible source for their continuous research. To illustrate, two supreme scientists in modern physics-Newton and Einstein has set paradigm for us. It is hard to imagine that Newton how would formulate three fundamental laws of mechanics and the laws of gravitation and Einstein would found the general and special theory of relativity这个说的详细，general and special theory of relativity and the photoelectric effect, without these enduring spirits. 感觉这里两个例子不是很贴切，没能说明某某精神对成就的影像啊，只是罗列了成就，cannot proveIt is just like the preeminent American inventor Thomas Edison once said that genius was one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration同样，此句不能支持本段主题句.

Meanwhile, arduous work and enduring persistence is blind and aimless unless one can be able to perceive everything with an acute foresight and grasp every opportunity as much as possible in all the spheres of life. A typical example in this case is that the discovery of the medicine penicillin, discovered by a famous British chemist-Alexander Fleming, which is commonly used because of its effective function in wound infection and other infectious diseases. When Fleming did his experiment some day, he discovered that the contaminant blue-green mould, which was neglected and discarded by all his counterparts in that time, was inhibited the bacterial cultivation. But, Fleming revealed this phenomenon with his careful and insightful observation and eventually he made it. After all, the Fortune's favored child belongs to the prepared minds. 这段不错

Nevertheless, mistakes also play a considerably important role in the process of any discovery or progress of human great breakthroughs. It is just as the saying goes that mistakes are the precursors to success. Indeed, the apparent characteristic between human and other creatures is that he has the capacity of thinking independently and rationally, also he always tries his best to improve himself in order to be more perfect. Furthermore, human can learn the knowledge and fruitions, which have been achieved and accumulated by his precursors for a long period inof their long and continuously pursuing truth of nature, thus steer clear of the sandbars and accomplish progress. In addition, human also has the capacity of summarizing and learning the lessons from his own past experiences. In the most case, he will never commit the这个the可以去掉吧，不肯定 exactly the same blunders感觉这里复数应变为单数，the same特指, though we can rule out the possibility that he might make a mistake next time. All these can contribute greatly to human’s final success. 这段觉得论证不是很充分，说取前人精华去其糟粕，可以引点小例子增强说明

In conclusion, if one wants to success or make progress in the way to climb the summit of science, he should make persistence as his good friend, prudence as his brother, and get ready for every opportunities god endow him, also he should make experience as his reference and learn the lessons from it in order to conquer any difficulty.

总体上觉得这篇文章很不错，文字很流畅，语法错误也很少。尤其最后一段，楼主限时写作想出这么好，好像又拟人又排比的语言做结尾。但是没有集中讨论mistake，我也感觉有点偏题。

smartyrUID: 169453

哎呀！谢谢真是有点！在考虑一下

xiaoliu86UID: 174867

晚上交作业
多谢支持

clairvoyantUID: 15856

我也觉得讨论除了失败外还有其它因素，比如个人努力和机遇跑题了！ 因为它们和mistakes不在一个逻辑层面上！ mistake应该是和find the correct way, find the truth 在一个逻辑层面上的，机遇和努力在另一个逻辑层面上. 你怎么想？

smartyrUID: 169453

我现在正在考虑重写！自己写了也是觉得不舒服！

xiaoliu86UID: 174867

距离mistakes 太远了，可以写其他决定discovery and progress ，但是你的交代太少了。另外，3p的论点和论证几乎没有关系。末段的主体是人，和题目主体mistakes 和discovery 不同，和首段也没有呼应。

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