ISSUE11 全球大学 五天冲刺 互拍互励！

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11,All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
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Currently, the issue whether it is necessary to develop a global university to solve the world's most persistent social problems is under fervent discussion. Opinions vary from person to person due to respective angles. In my point of view, I support the founding of a global university notwithstanding 这个不是转折词么？是不是用错了？the possible existence of some problems. 开头段不错很简练，学习！越写越好了

To begin with, a global university is beneficial for the further communication and understanding among all the nations around the world. It is known to all that some problems in the contemporary world are generated from the difference and misunderstanding of cultures among diverse nations. If a global university is founded, students from every corner are able to meet at the same place and they can communicate, share their opinions, discuss the worldwide problems according to their own value and gradually, they will get more acquainted with the distinct forms of ideas and thought in other nations. When they returned to their own countries, they are able to convey different cultures to the public and promote the understanding of other nations. 这句和上面好像重复了Hence, the misunderstandings among the nations will diminish. Moreover, the nations will possibly influenced by the foreign cultures and the speed of globalization will increase. moreover 后面又说了另一个意思，要不就再展开，要不就另起一段

In addition, some world's most persistent problems are common world widely, 这三个词不要连在一起用，不知道你想说什么 which cannot be solved with the alone effort of a country separately but call for a cooperation of each nations. Such problems as environmental protection, terrorism, race conflict, the worldwide inflation, how to safely deal with the nuclear weapons, how to promote the average living level of the Africa and so forth, cannot be perfectly solved with the power of only one nation or two. Actually, most of the problems are concerned with all of the countries of the world; therefore, the human being should make effort as a whole to struggle for把这个for去掉好点 the way to deal with these problems. In this case, a global university is a good step. All of excellent students throughout the world ,as the represents of their own country, take part in the global university ,propose their respectively innovative opinions and take the responsibility to solve the world's most persistent social problems, which will offer a more effective and efficient way for the solution of the worldwide problems. 语言没有上一段流畅，是不是思路有跳跃

Admittedly, there will possibly exist some problems in developing a global university. first, the foundation fund 更好to run a global university will be a large amount, which is not possible for every country to afford. In this case, to promote the development of the world, those developed countries should actively participate in the project and offer more money这句很没有根据; second, although the global university will provide many intelligent experts to solve the worldwide problems, there is no guarantee that the solutions will be adopted by every nation. It is likely that some countries consider the measures will impede the interest of their own. 最后的观点我喜欢

To sum up, although there may be some difficulties in the access of the global university, it is beneficial for the human being. Therefore, I support the founding of a global university. 结尾有点仓促了，尤其最后一句，是因为时间么？
总的来说是一篇很好的文章，我打5分，有些细节问题注意一下，如果时间不够，考试的时候先写出开头结尾会好一点。
真是不好意思，这几天忙着写A的提纲，连I都没怎么写，终于写完了，希望现在给你改的作文还来得及，

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十分感谢nora0020！
考完后一定重谢！
——拿什么谢呢？:p
——说"重谢"就俗了吧！;)
真的很感谢！也祝你成功！

nora0020UID: 104886

按你现在这个程度，只要正常发挥就可以了，现在什么都不要担心，也先不要管我了
等你考完了，帮我建立一下信心好了
你起得可真早