Issue 7 限时又不成功，啥办呢！

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Issue7  第3篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：52分38秒     442 words
从2005年3月4日8时43分到2005年3月4日9时52分
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The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
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The speaker claims that the video camera has become a more important form of documentation than written records for the reason that it provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life. I quite agree with the speaker that the video camera has become more and more important in documenting temporal, spatial and accurate information. However, the speaker overstates the role of the video camera comparative to written records. In my observation, the video camera plays a poor substitute of written records in documenting information.

To begin with, for the reason that the video camera provides accurate and alive record, I agree with that it is more and more important in recording information. First of all, the video camera provides us more accurate and convincing information that we can search more convincing information about what people have done, how,  when,  where, and what they have said. It is so important in judging whether a man has committed a crime or not. In additionally, the video provides us alive memory of people who has left us, especially those people has gone away. We can recall of many things when we watch the video, reseeing our love's smile, relistening what our parents have told to us. And when we are going away, we can leave our voice, our smile to offspring. In this case, the video camera plays a role that the written records cannot replace.

Furthermore, the video camera serves us temporal, spatial information, especially about things that are happening around us. We do not need to fly over to another country, when we want to get some information about things that happening in another country. Many video cameras around the world help us get more alive information if we turn on the TV button. Especially, due to the Internet, temporal and spatial information is conveyed more and more convenient. We can convey our life video through the Internet to friends who settle in the other side of the Pacific Ocean.

However, in my observation, the speaker overstates the role of the video camera despite of what it has done for us. The written records play even more important role in some respects. First, the written records are especially important when we evaluate a historic incidence. The video can provide us the temporal and accurate information, but it cannot give us more opinions of the public, especially in recording statistic, results survey. By watching books, we can communicate with the author, and deeply understand what the viewpoints of the author. Furthermore, the video documentations are not convenient to carry due to lots of electric functions, while we can easy carry a book outside on the playground or on vacation. In this case, the written records play more important role.

In sum, the speaker's claim overstates the importance of the  video camera at least to some extent. When it comes to recording temporal and spatial information, video records are more objective. However, the information provided by the video camera is one-dimensional, especially in conveying people's thoughts, which we can easily get when we pick up a book.

xin320UID: 165608

你issue都超时，argu咋办呢？

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我会努力的，相对而言，阿狗容易一点

xin320UID: 165608

issue我时间倒够，写450 就可以了。如果你Argu没限时过最好赶快感受一下，我限时快20篇了，近6，7篇才成功限时。水平降低了0.5分左右。不容易啊

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我今天阿狗限时成功，谢谢2楼的激励，不过字数不多，我想应该够了吧

Argument208  让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：29分51秒     333 words
从2005年3月4日10时54分到2005年3月4日11时29分
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The following appeared in a memorandum from the planning department of an electric power company.
'Several recent surveys indicate that homeowners are increasingly eager to conserve energy and manufacturers are now marketing many home appliances, such as refrigerators and air conditioners, that are almost twice as energy-efficient as those sold a decade ago. Also, new technologies for better home insulation and passive solar heating are readily available to reduce the energy needed for home heating. Therefore, we anticipate that the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase, and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past 20 years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants should not be necessary.'
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The author of this memorandum concludes that it is not necessary to consturct new geneating plants . To support this conclusion, the author cites surveys of homeowners' eagerness to conserve energy and availability of more energy-efficient home appliances. The author also points out the availability of reduction of home heating due to new technologies. However, the argument relies on several doubtful assumptions, and is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.

First, the argument concludes too hastily that the energy consumption would be flat or  decrease due to home energy consumption. The author overlooks the possibility that  the industial and commecial enery consumption would increase more. If so, the energy consumption would increase unlike what the author's assumption. Without taking into account the energy consumption of industry and commece, the author's conclution remains questionable.

Secondly, the author assumes that the new technologies would help decline the enery consumption. However the author overlooks the cost of applying new technology. Perhaps people would be unwilling to use them due to their high cost. Without evidence that people would like to use the new technologies, the author cannot conclude that the energy consumption would decline.

Finally, the speaker unfairly assumes that  their three eclectric  generating plants would meet their needs merely because their have been in operation for the past 20 years. However, the author provides no further evidence to support this assumption. It is entirely possible that the old plants would  expire in recent years and need to replace. Or perhaps three old plants need more money to maintain their proper work. Without ruling out these possibilities ,the author's conclusion is unconvincing.

In sum, the argument is not persuasive, at least as it stands. To bolster it ,the author must provide more evidence that the commercial and industrial energy would not increase, and people would like to use the new technologies or the cost of the new technologies would be proper. Finally,  to convince me, the author must provide information about the operation of the three old plants.

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大家多多鼓励，多多激励
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我期待早点考完，都没劲了