issue 210 职业选择, 还3天,大家给拍拍(另,考后留守一周)

枫丹UID: 166492

Issue210: 532 words
Most people choose a career on the basis of such pragmatic considerations as the needs of the economy, the relative ease of finding a job, and the salary they can expect to make. Hardly anyone is free to choose a career based on his or her natural talents or interest in a particular kind of work.
现象解释

观点：尽管人们在选择工作时，考虑经济原因，但是有很多工作还是基于兴趣的需要的。
1，        承认现象存在，阐述现象的原因
2，        但是很多时候兴趣和高收入的工作是一致的。兴趣不是趋势人们选择的主要原因
3，        而且也有更多的人愿意放弃更好的物质条件，来追求精神的满足

There is much controversy about the existence of freedom to find work according to one's interest and natural talent, because most people prefer a job with better material condition to a one taking satisfaction to one's interest. In my point of view although when people are choosing careers they take the need of the economy into account, there are still a myriad of works can be chosen based on one's innate talent and interest.

Admittedly, in our society, before choosing a job most people will consider the need of economy. Although every occupation is needed by the society, not all of them gain equal evaluation by the people. Some of jobs are needed immediately such as the lawyer, the surgeon, the engineer by the market, which leads to the fact that they can bring high rewards for people. When people are choosing job, they inevitably tend to select them for these occupations will provide them with better living condition and enhance their material enjoyment. What is more, nowadays, the income of job is generally considered as a measure of success. So every one, who has spirit to pursue success will prefer to these occupation even regardless their innate interest. And even before entering the job market, they had chosen their majors such as law , computer engineering, or medical science to prepare themselves for these careers with”practical use”.
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However, the pragmatic consideration is not the only reason driving people to select their occupations. It is true that the higher reward can attract most people pushing into mainstream jobs market, nevertheless it is arbitrary to judge that these engineers, surgeons, scientist, businessmen and so on are just doing their jobs in which they have no talent and personal interests. In fact, in most cases the pragmatism can be consistent with the job based on self-interests. We can look no future than thousands of technicians in Silicon Valley, who do not only join occupations with highly economic reword but also live in their interest to make prominent contribution for society or challenge technological difficulties. In this sense, a job based on pragmatic consideration can also serve people with the satisfaction to one's impulse of nature. .

What is more, not all of jobs will meet people's need of economy and fulfill their pragmatic expectation, but there are still a groups of people would rather choose these occupations only according to individual curiosity than only yield to economic hopes. As a matter of fact, it is not hard for them to find these interested jobs which, although can not provide them with considerable incomes, will at least prevent them from starvation and provide basic living conditions. For example, people bitten by travel bug do not encounter much difficulty in enjoying their particular interest through a job in the travel industry. The lover of nature can also engage in their curiosity through an occupation concerning the protection of environment.  In short, there are a great number of jobs, though without high income, can provide people with basic living condition and, most significant of all, satisfaction to overriding desire. .

In sum, the freedom to choose job according to interest and talent is endowed to every one and only the one who is the slave of the pragmatism will discard these right as well as their interest and innate natural of themselves.

猫猫624UID: 171232

There is much controversy controversy 是可数名词 about the existence of freedom to find work according to one's interest and natural talent, because most people prefer a job jobs  with better material condition to a one (a one?)onestaking satisfaction to one's interest. In my point of view although when people are choosing careers they take the need of the economy into account, there are still a myriad of worksworks指作品。工作work不可数 can be chosen based on one's innate talent and interest.

Admittedly, in our society, before when  choosing a job most people will consider the need of economy. Although every occupation is needed by the society, not all of them gain equal evaluation by the people. Some of jobs are needed immediately such as the lawyer, the surgeon, the engineer by the market, which leads to the fact that they can bring high rewards for people. When people are choosing job, they inevitably tend to select them for these occupations will provide them with better living condition and enhance their material enjoyment. What is more, nowadays, the income of job is generally considered as a measure of success. So every one, who has spirit to pursue success will prefer to these occupation even regardless of their innate interest. And even before entering the job market, they had chosen their majors such as law , computer engineering, or medical science to prepare themselves for these careers with”practical use”.
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However, the pragmatic consideration is not the only reason factor driving people to select their occupations. It is true that the higher reward can attract most people pushing into mainstream jobs market, nevertheless it is arbitrary to judge that these engineers, surgeons, scientist, businessmen and so on are just doing their jobs in which they have no talent and personal interests. In fact, in most cases the pragmatism can be consistent with the job based on self-interests. We can look no future than thousands of technicians in Silicon Valley, who do not only join occupations with highly economic reword but also live in their interest to make prominent contribution for society or challenge technological difficulties. In this sense, a job based on pragmatic consideration can also serve people with the satisfaction to one's impulse of nature. .

What is more, not all of jobs will meet people's need of economy and fulfill their pragmatic expectation, but there are still a groups of people would rather choose these occupations only according to individual curiosity than only yield to economic hopes.there are some jobs which cannot bring about much money but provide occupation satisfaction for people. Nowadays, more and more people are likely to choose those jobs which arouse their interest and occupation satisfaction As a matter of fact, it is not hard for them to find these interested jobs which, although can not provide them with considerable incomes, will at least prevent them from starvation and provide basic living conditions. For example, people bitten by travel bug do not encounter much difficulty in enjoying their particular interest through a job in the travel industry. The lover of nature can also engage in their curiosity through an occupation concerning the protection of environment. In short, there are a great number of jobs, though without high income, can provide people with basic living condition and, most significant of all, satisfaction to overriding desire. .

In sum, the freedom to choose job according to interest and talent is endowed to every one and only the one who is the slave of the pragmatism will discard these right as well as their interest and innate natural of themselves.

写的不错，就是句子之间连贯要加强。不过已经没什么大问题了，祝你考好！

枫丹UID: 166492

太感谢猫猫了, 指出两个一直被我忽视的单复数问题!!
不过自我感觉这篇一点都不insight , 不要手下留情,我不怕打击.呵呵

枫丹UID: 166492

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天晴了UID: 201592

There is much controversy about the existence of freedom to find work according to one's interest and natural talent, because most people prefer a job with better material condition to a one taking satisfaction【 不通】 to one's interest. In my point of view although when people are choosing careers 【，】they take the need of the economy into account, there are still a myriad of works【work不可数】 can be chosen based on one's innate talent and interest. 【although  。。。 两部份感觉

Admittedly, in our society, before【 when】 choosing a job most people will consider the need of economy. Although every occupation is needed by the society, not all of them gain equal evaluation by the people. Some of jobs are needed immediately such as the lawyer, the surgeon, the engineer by the market, which leads to the fact that they can bring high rewards for people. When people are choosing job, they inevitably tend to select them for these occupations will provide them with better living condition and enhance their material enjoyment. What is more, nowadays, the income of job is generally considered as a measure of success. So every one, who has spirit to pursue success will prefer to these occupation even regardless【 of 】 their innate interest. And even before entering the job market, they had chosen their majors such as law , computer engineering, or medical science to prepare themselves for these careers with”practical use”.【最后一句与前面没有逻辑联系 出现的突然了 】
【论述清楚 尤其是salary correlated with success judgment 算是creative perspective 】
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However, the pragmatic consideration is not the only reason driving people to select their occupations. It is true that the higher reward can attract most people pushing into mainstream jobs market, nevertheless it is arbitrary to judge 【conclude 】that these engineers, surgeons, scientist, businessmen and so on are just doing their jobs in which they have no talent and personal interests. In fact, in most cases the pragmatism can be consistent with the job based on self-interests. We can look no future than thousands of technicians in Silicon Valley, who do not only join occupations with highly economic reword but also live in their interest to make prominent contribution for society【interest 的目的是make prominent contribution for society ？ 】or challenge technological difficulties. In this sense, a job based on pragmatic consideration can also serve people with the satisfaction to one's impulse of nature. .【分析的不够 可以说人们的兴趣也是由社会上这种实际的东西影响而被同化而来的，或者人们的兴趣是在工作之后慢慢培养起来的  表现一下critical thinking  这个例子也不是很说明白 看了想问 他们为什么是who do not only join occupations with highly economic reword but also live in their interest  你说是就是吗 不是很说服人  建议TS处稍微分析一下原因 】

What is more, 【good 】not all of jobs will meet people's need of economy and fulfill their pragmatic expectation, but there are still a groups of people would rather choose these occupations only according to individual curiosity than only yield to economic hopes. As a matter of fact, 【good】it is not hard for them to find these interested jobs which, although can not provide them with considerable incomes, will at least prevent them from starvation and provide basic living conditions. For example, people bitten by travel bug do not encounter much difficulty in enjoying their particular interest through a job in the travel industry. The lover of nature can also engage in their 【 his、her】curiosity through an occupation concerning the protection of environment. In short,【good】 there are a great number of jobs, though without high income, can provide people with【at least 我 觉得说话还是要客观和小心一点 这个是我的毛病 自己很注意 所以也提醒枫丹 】 basic living condition and, 【the】most significant of all, satisfaction to overriding desire. . 【 还是 好像只说了现象 没太critical 比如这些工作从兴趣出发可以使他们更有热情 从而做的更出色 而单纯从用处出发可能不会有这样的成就和工作愉悦感  总之再深入一点 分析员因 这个也是我看了范文的心得  呵呵 刚出锅的 还然那！！ 】

In sum, the freedom to choose job according to interest and talent is endowed to every one and only the one who is the slave of the pragmatism will discard these right as well as their interest and innate natural of themselves.

【 总的不错 我不说优点了～ 不好意思 只提了问题缺点  因为我比较喜欢被别人这么痛骂  加油！！！】

枫丹UID: 166492

感谢!!天晴了, 把我的思路也给打开了,谢谢.
等我考完一起来回, no problem

天晴了UID: 201592

嗯～～你专心考吧！   ＋油 ＋油

点点滴滴走过UID: 195083

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点点滴滴走过UID: 195083

Issue210: 532 words
Most people choose a career on the basis of such pragmatic considerations as the needs of the economy, the relative ease of finding a job, and the salary they can expect to make. Hardly anyone is free to choose a career based on his or her natural talents or interest in a particular kind of work.
现象解释

观点：尽管人们在选择工作时，考虑经济原因，但是有很多工作还是基于兴趣的需要的。
1， 承认现象存在，阐述现象的原因
2， 但是很多时候兴趣和高收入的工作是一致的。兴趣不是趋势人们选择的主要原因
3， 而且也有更多的人愿意放弃更好的物质条件，来追求精神的满足

There is much controversy about the existence of freedom to find work according to one's interest and natural talent, because most people preferchoosing a job with better material condition to a one:D taking satisfaction to one's interest. In my point of view although when people are choosing careers they take the need of the economy into account, there are still a myriad of works can be chosen based on one's innate talent and interest.
不是工作被选，是有少人根据自己兴趣、爱好选择工作，这样说好一点，个人看法
Admittedly, in our society, before choosing a job most people will consider the need of economy. Although every occupation is needed by the society, not all of them gain equal evaluation by the people. Some of jobs are needed immediately such as the lawyer, the surgeon, the engineer by the market, which leads to the fact that they can bring high rewards for people. When people are choosing job, they inevitably tend to select them for these occupations which will provide them with better living condition and enhance their material enjoyment. What is more, nowadays, the income of job is generally considered as a measure of success. So every one, who has spirit to pursue success will prefer to these those occupation even regardless of their innate interest. And even before entering the job market, they would have had chosen their majors such as law , computer engineering, or medical science to prepare themselves for these careers with”practical use”.
‘
However, the pragmatic consideration is not the only reason driving people to select their occupations. It is true that the higher reward can attract most people pushing into mainstream jobs market, nevertheless it is arbitrary to judge that these engineers, surgeons, scientist, businessmen and so on are just doing their jobs in which they have no talent and personal interests. In fact, in most cases the pragmatism can be consistent with the job based on self-interests. We can look no futurefurther? than thousands of technicians in Silicon Valley, who do not only join occupations with highly economic rewordrewards but also live in their interest to make prominent contribution for society or challenge technological difficulties. In this sense, a job based on pragmatic consideration can also serve people with the satisfaction to one's impulse of nature. .

What is more, not all of jobs will meet people's need of economy and fulfill their pragmatic expectation, but there are still a groups of people would rather choose these occupations only according to individual curiosity than only yield to economic hopesfactor. As a matter of fact, it is not hard for them to find these interested jobs which, although can not provide them with considerable incomes, will at least prevent them from starvation and provide basic living conditions. For example, people bitten by travel bug do not encounter much difficulty in enjoying their particular interest through a job in the travel industry. The lover of nature can also engage in their curiosity through an occupation concerning the protection of environment. In short, there are a great number of jobs, though without high income, can provide people with basic living condition and, most significant of all, satisfaction to overriding desire. .

In sum, the freedom to choose job according to interest and talent is endowed to every one and only the one who is the slave of the pragmatism will discard these right as well as their interest and innate natural of themselves.

把错，把错，挺好的，没问提

枫丹UID: 166492

谢谢,呵呵,we look no further than ....reward, 好多漏洞啊!!