trees，bloodcherry:Esther.Li,circlezh,huangxiaoshan,abjure

abjureUID：169591

:)辛苦了trees姐姐。现在开始最后冲刺。
第七页的我还有几道语法题没有弄明白。

[ Last edited by abjure on 2005-5-6 at 11:45 ]

circlezhUID：186128

麻烦斑竹姐姐帮忙把第8叶上的几道题解决一下，谢谢

abjureUID：169591

发现托福是体力活，汗，我在听力最后一篇文章和阅读都出现感觉特别疲劳的时候。
这种情况在考试出现有什么办法避免，考前做一些什么样的专项联系会使这种情况改善些？

九天玄鸡UID：193245

交篇作文,希望几位姐姐帮忙看看,不胜感激~

Q:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students'

sports activities as they give to their university libaraies. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
C:
Every universities gives a large amount of money to their labraries, but few universities five the same amount of money to

their students' sports activities. That is wrong.

It is important for people to have sports activities, especially for students. Sports can keep students away from

deseases,and it also can make blood running more quickly,make the brain having a rest and relax the body. So, it can enhance

the efficiency of studies.

Sports can also change the character of a student. It can make the character more active if a student atend sports

activities. Furthermore, we can not study the entire knowledge in the labraries, and we need study the left from sports. So,

we should complete the knowledge in sports activities. When we jump, when we run, when we swim, and when we play, we are

completing the knowledge,and protecting ourselves. Who can study without a healthy body? So, universities should give a large

amount of money to the sports activities.

Of course, labraries are important, too. So we also should give a large amount of money to the labraries. How to make it

balance is difficult. But universities should enhance the amount of money to the students' sports activities, for the society

and for the future. What we need in the future is the talent, not the machine for study. So, the same amount of money should

be given to the students' sports activities as be given to the university labraries.

Esther.LiUID：191003

我还有0310、0405、0408、0410没有做，请问留哪一套作最后一套呢？据说0405最简单，我把它留到12号做可以么？（13号就要去考场了：）

今天做了一下0308，听力17，语法竟然错了7个！！怀疑答案有问题，哪位提供一下正确的答案呢？

谢谢啦 ^_^

abjureUID：169591

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-6 18:05
我还有0310、0405、0408、0410没有做，请问留哪一套作最后一套呢？据说0405最简单，我把它留到12号做可以么？（13号就要去考场了：）

今天做了一下0308，听力17，语法竟然错了7个！！怀疑答案有问题，哪位提供 ...

这是我网上下载的答案，你看看吧，我没有对过。

0308
ABADB CCCBA BDDCC DCDBA DACCB DBCAC DACBA BABDC BCAAD CDABA
CACCB CDBCB DACCC ABCDA CDCDC BDCDC BCDDC DBACB
DAABA DDBAB CDBCB DCBBA BDACB DDBAA DDABC DCBBA DCDBC CADCB

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Esther.LiUID：191003

谢谢楼上这位同门师XDJM啊！我的也是这份答案，还怀疑是答案错误呢。。。估计是自己错太多的问题。。。。明天再仔细看看吧  ：（

abjureUID：169591

Topic some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? EXPLAIN WHY.

观点：要面向全部学生的高等教育
1．        利于大多数人素质提高
2．        缓解社会就业压力
3．        小让步，面向好学生的专门高等教育有一定好处。
In recent these years, what the issue is weather higher education should be offered to more and more people. Although some people strongly object this trend, I still provide justification to support that higher education should belong to all people.

First of all, higher education not only imparts a great deal of academic knowledge but also culture social skills, including law, moral spirit and correct world view. Actually, these things are urgently required by all students. If higher education opens its learning gate to whole common students, the quality of citizens is upgrade quickly. For example, when people own these knowledge and common sense, they should avoid committing a crime. Western developed nation usually offer this kind higher education which face to all people so that their criminal rate is lower than some developing countries. Therefore, I am inclined to the higher education which faces to all students.

Furthermore, to resolve a dilemma between increasing population and limited employment opportunities, people should let more people enroll in higher education. （这样用不定式开头引导句子对嘛？）In other words, higher education helps more people to avoid unemployment. For instance, Universities and colleges will recruit more than two million students every year in china. The astonishing number completely shows the remarkable effect of higher education in resolving the dilemma.

Admittedly, higher education which is available to good student has some special advantages. On the one hand, it is likely to culture some outstanding persons in special fields. On the other hand, it spends less money compared to general higher education. However, on account of general benefit more people in a long period, so I prefer to general higher education. （最后一句这样写有没有问题）  

In short, all people's quality improved, and employment pressure releasing in the society strongly support the view that higher education should be given to all people. After all, we ought to earn more benefit for more people.

abjureUID：169591

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-6 23:26
谢谢楼上这位同门师XDJM啊！我的也是这份答案，还怀疑是答案错误呢。。。估计是自己错太多的问题。。。。明天再仔细看看吧  ：（

:lol 不用谢。

circlezhUID：186128

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-6 18:05


今天做了一下0308，听力17，语法竟然错了7个！！怀疑答案有问题，哪位提供 ...

有怀疑的，乘还有时间赶快发出来讨论啊

Esther.LiUID：191003

绿宝书Topic 118：Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.


To travel alone or with a companion, which to pursue depends largely on the purpose and specific situations of your trip. If you would like to try a stimulating adventure, if the destination is safe enough, and if you are pretty experienced, you may travel alone. As for me, sho is not sophisticated in travelling, touring with a skilled companion is a wiser idea.

As to a journey, security comes the first. Undoubtedly, travelling alone inspires one's potential enormously, however, if the safety of life cannot be ensured everything will end. Travelling in a place you have never been before, there are too many things unpredictable to settle on yourself. Set my roommate for an（要an么？如果是roommates呢？） example, who climbed Mount Tai in another city two days ago. She hurt her right knee on the summit, and had to sit in a telpher to get down to the ground, accompanied by(with?) her companion and using his money. God knows what would happen to her without her companion. So the conclusion is evident that if  you have a companion to take care of you, safety will be better ensured. After all, two heads are better than one.

Despite safety, the second reason lies in fun. As is known to all who(that?) have travelled, dull time is inevitable during a journey, especially when facing a long and tough road or so. Humor stories and jokes work a lot at this time, and of you exchange your experience in other tours, I bet you can learn more interesting things than expected. However, a sole traveller's nerve might still be in tension at this time.

Adding to the two ones above, the third reason is that sharing some expense(es?) benefits the two both. For example, one of them pays for the rent of a car, while the other takes charge of food and a map. There is no need to rent two cars and buy two maps, isn't there?(it?)

Taking everthing into account, although travelling alone does do good to hencing a sense of independence and self-reliance, and stimulates one to explore his or her potential ability, I think a journey involves far more than that. Considering safety, fun and expenses, I prefer travelling with a companion as long as possible.


这篇文章本来打算融进以前摘抄的东西，实际写的过程中才发现由于原来那些东西都是从很多文章中抽出来的，所以对于一个特定的topic，可以用的并不多。而且比较好的句式结构什么的，平时已经潜意识就在用了。如果要挖空心思写一篇所谓高级的文章，实在很浪费时间和脑细胞，由于不停的打乱思路，还很容易出现错误。这次尝试最大的收获是让我熟悉了一下以前抄下来的东西，这篇吭哧出来的作文也不见得比以前好，两位姐姐看看能给几分？:L

ps：虚拟语气的这种用法：If I were ..., 后边的主句应该用什么时态呢？:)

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再来一篇,大家帮帮忙,看一看,改一改,谢谢了~
Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults.Other people think that friends are the

most important influence on young adults. Which views do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.

Family and friends are both important influence on young adults, but which is more important is quite difficult to answer.

But since we are young adults, friends are the most important influence.

At the beginning, because we are young adults, we spend most time in schools, not in family. Using another way to say, we are

surrounded by friends in most times. So the influence from the friends is larger than the family.

Furthermore, influence from friends is closer to us, and is easier to be accepted by us. We must access society in the

furture. When we access it, it is mostly formed by young adults like us. Since our friends are young adults, the opinions,

the ideas and the ways of doing things are similar. So the influence from them are important.

And then, we can choose our friends, but we can not choose our family. So the influence from the family is certain, we can

not change it, but we can change friends to change the influence from the them. Birds of a feather flock together. So we can

know what a person like from to know his friends. So, the influence from friends is more important.

In the end, we can know it just by words: "family" is single form, we just effect by one family, but "friends" is a lot of

persons, every person will influent you. So friends is the most influence on young adluts.

Above all the fout points, we can know that the most influence on young adults is friends.

treesUID：82785

Originally posted by circlezh at 2005-5-4 09:55
1. Proper city panning （provides for） the（ distribution） of public utilities public buildings, parks, and （recreation centers）, and for （adequate） and the inexpensive housing.
这一题选D，可是为什么想问provide 怎么用呢？是provide something还是provide for something

有些小知识点不是很清楚，想问问大家：
a mass of 和masses of是加可数还不可数？
deposit没有复数吗？
despite可以跟句子吗？

我觉得应该是provide sth for sb.
这里这么用想的不是很明白，但是不改for是因为和and 后边的for并列

a mass of 加不可数。有些词虽然是可数的，跟后边也多是用的不可数的意思

deposit有复数，看意思

despite可以。despite of 不可以= in spite of

我给你的最大的建议是勤查字典，盛于问他人还拿不准

treesUID：82785

Originally posted by 九天玄鸡 at 2005-5-7 15:44
再来一篇,大家帮帮忙,看一看,改一改,谢谢了~
Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults.Other people think that friends are the

most important influence on  ...

九天玄鸡同学，现在我和CHERRY已经基本没有精力再照顾除了本身这组之外的同学了。不好意思了。
你还是把帖子发到大坛子里吧，别人看到的机会比较多。而且想让别人帮你改的最好办法是先去帮别人修改，然后交换连接

treesUID：82785

Originally posted by circlezh at 2005-5-4 10:01
新东方蓝皮教材P119第12题
Salamanders are sometimes confused with lizards,but unlike lizards____no scales or
claws.
(A)that they have   (B)to have   (C)they have  (D)are having
我觉得选C,可答案 ...

思考中