trees，bloodcherry:Esther.Li,circlezh,huangxiaoshan,abjure

Esther.LiUID：191003

今天的作文偶就不贴了，渴望两位姐姐能百忙之中抽空看看我前边贴的那篇。。。

bloodcherryUID：9965

我感觉这篇文章挺不错的，没什么地方需要大改
前后也蛮流畅,继续保持啊:lol
从某种角度来说to a certain extent

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-2 18:20
topic:工作中最重要的方面就是挣钱。你是否同意这一说法？请给出具体原因及实例来支持你的回答。   （26分钟写完）

Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the opinion that salary is one of the most fundamental aspects of a job. However, is it the most important one? As for me, the answer is negative due to ideas as follows.

To begin with, in spite of earning enough money to feed one and his or her family, there are much more things that outweigh money, such as the meaning of the job itself. As everyone knows, jobs that brings most money might belong to transporters and sellers of drugs, which have ruined tens of thousands people's families and demolished their lives easily, causing uncountable miserable stories. Are they good jobs? Definitely not. Everyone spits them for the evil consequences they make. On the contrary, people revere a teacher in a kindergarten, thouch she or he may earn relatively little money.

Secondly, a sense of fulfillment is of great significance. As for me, a college student, I always dream of becoming a researcher on science to study, invent and develop new theories or new mwthods, regardliss of how much I will be paid. In actual fact, the most important aspect at this time lies no longer in the money I will get, but how many difficulties I could conquer, and how many goals I could reach. The sense of fulfillment will satisfy me and spur me to du further jobs without feeling tied.

Considering the reasons mentioned above, I do not take money as the most important aspect of a job, though it is undoubtedly the most fundamental one. What I think outweigh money are the meaning of the job, a sense of fulfillment you get in the job, and the happiness and reverence it brings to you.


写完之后才觉得好多想表达的分论点还没有说出来，可是没有时间了，似乎以后写之前构思的时候应该注意分论点的选择和取舍。
trees姐姐看看这次没有跑题吧？

还有，修改的时候可能擦的空和要写的空不一样大，怎么办呢？如果空大了就空着，不够用就用插入符号么？老外认识插入符号么？

还有，“从某种程度来说”和“从某种意义来说”分别怎么表达呢

bloodcherryUID：9965

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-3 22:06
还有一道语法：
(Due to) persistent inbreeding, self-pollinating plants (have) genetically more uniform than cross-pollinated plants, (which) harbor more genetic (variability).
答案很明显是B，但是 ...

due to引出造成后果的原因，在句中作表语、状语和定语。作表语和状语时与owing to同义

bloodcherryUID：9965

Originally posted by circlezh at 2005-5-3 20:59
郁闷，为什么阅读就不能在进一步？现在做阅读很烦躁，看着就想到别的是上去了
我不知道阅读到底取决与什么，我当初刚入门时只错两个以内的，为什么现在做的越多错的越多。我想现在有无必要做做gre阅读找找感觉。

我的意见是,不需要看GRE的阅读,GRE的和TOEFL根本南辕北辙,做法也差很远。而且GRE阅读难度更大，你要是做不好，岂不是更打击信心
现在要做的，只是好好分析你到底为什么错,错哪类,是因为单词不熟,还是因为定位有错?或者是时间不够?然后再有的放矢的去补效果会更好
时间不多了，好钢要用刀刃上

treesUID：82785

Esther.Li 你的文章我在第7页最上边就改过啦

总体评价:写几篇找找感觉,逻辑分析再注意一点,考试时发挥好4.5以上还是很有希望地

circlezhUID：186128

Originally posted by bloodcherry at 2005-5-4 09:35

我的意见是,不需要看GRE的阅读,GRE的和TOEFL根本南辕北辙,做法也差很远。而且GRE阅读难度更大，你要是做不好，岂不是更打击信心
现在要做的，只是好好分析你到底为什么错,错哪类,是因为单词不熟,还 ...

可我现在就是找不到突出的漏洞，什么都有错的没规律，感觉再做也没什么提高啊，
现在做提感觉不如以前了sigh:(

circlezhUID：186128

1. Proper city panning （provides for） the（ distribution） of public utilities public buildings, parks, and （recreation centers）, and for （adequate） and the inexpensive housing.
这一题选D，可是为什么想问provide 怎么用呢？是provide something还是provide for something

有些小知识点不是很清楚，想问问大家：
a mass of 和masses of是加可数还不可数？
deposit没有复数吗？
despite可以跟句子吗？

[ Last edited by circlezh on 2005-5-4 at 10:15 ]

circlezhUID：186128

新东方蓝皮教材P119第12题
Salamanders are sometimes confused with lizards,but unlike lizards____no scales or
claws.
(A)that they have   (B)to have   (C)they have  (D)are having
我觉得选C,可答案是D,我搞不大明白,请高手多多指点迷津啊,谢啦

[ Last edited by circlezh on 2005-5-4 at 10:15 ]

circlezhUID：186128

才做了０４．１０的语法题，感觉题很难，请大家指导一下
２５．Although have there been better singers and actresses than Ethel Waters, none typifies the rise from rags to riches more dramatically than she.
A have there  B  none typifies C more dramatically D  she
答案是Ａ，是因为although不能倒装吗，我觉得Ｄ好象也不对
31.Statistics indicate that approximate every 22 years--within a range of 3 to 4 years--a major drought occurs in the United States.
A  indicate  B  approximate  C major D occurs
答案是Ａ，错在哪里呢（approximate 不用负数形式吗　　every 22 years是名词性质吗？）
39 By 1810 the 23 towns of Hampshire County ,Massachusetts,had reached a remarkable uniform of economic development as well as population density
A  By    B had reached    C uniform    D as well as
答案是Ｄ，但我认为Ｃ不对 uniform作名词时是制服的意思吧
（ as well as怎么不对了）

40 With more than half the world's annual yield of 50 million tons of soy beans ,an important source of protein ,is grown in the United States
A With more than  B  annual yield of  C  important source  D  grown in
答案是Ａ　为什么呢 （half the world's annual yield ，half有这样的表达吗？不加of?)

[ Last edited by circlezh on 2005-5-4 at 10:12 ]

Esther.LiUID：191003

Originally posted by bloodcherry at 2005-5-4 09:25

due to引出造成后果的原因，在句中作表语、状语和定语。作表语和状语时与owing to同义

谢谢啊！
不过我还是不明白， 这里的due to的位置，按照我们专业的知识来说，应该是用一个表达“对于……”的词或者短语啊？

Esther.LiUID：191003

Basalt, (which) composes (most) of the ocean (floor) , is a dark-grey rock (rich) in iron and magnesium than most surface rocks.
为什么是D呢？

现在做题最大的敌人就是马虎和走神。听力本来都听得懂，却总要错6~9个，语法和阅读大部分也因为不仔细。。。不知道到考场上会精力集中一些还是紧张多错一些。。。：（

abjureUID：169591

我想问一下，什么时候开始模考比较合适。模考要注意什么以及最后总结冲刺的，有没有什么建议和要注意的地方。（这个问题比较大。呵呵）

九天玄鸡UID：193245

问道题
The lenses in an optical microscope bend the light passing through a specimen to form an image of that specimen that is much lager ____ actually viewed.
a. than it
b. than the one
c. one than
d. than one which
答案是b,为啥不能选a啊?

Esther.LiUID：191003

Originally posted by jiejie219 at 2005-5-4 18:20
想和各位交流一下：我现在听力平均错9-12个，语法在4个之内，阅读还是不稳定9-12个。还剩这么几天了，愁！其实就像Esther.Li 说的，听力都听得懂，可一对答案就上火了，再就是有时总是愿意走神，不知道是不是工作 ...

住宿应该不太要担心，麦岛附近有很多小旅馆的，据说也不贵，30元左右一晚，要不咱俩住一起吧，QQ给你留了我的手机号码了;) 到那里联系。和我一起的还有一个工作中的，男的。到那里再说吧！也给我你的联系方式哦！:call::cool: