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abjureUID: 169591

刚刚做了02年1月的题听力错9个（最少的一次），语法全对（第一次全对），阅读错4个（其中两个词汇题）。总算有点感觉了。虽然和高手差距很大，但对自己来说还是有很大提高。我比较容易满足。还有九天。奖励自己，现在去看电影休息一下自己，今天作文明天才发上来。

Esther.LiUID: 191003

听说0308和0401是最难的两套了，今天上午做了一下0401，听力9，语法0，阅读饿了没做。。。感觉阅读的单词明显难了很多  ：（
据说0308难得前无古人后无来者，请问还有没有必要做啊？ 呵呵

Esther.LiUID: 191003

还有就是现在的听力很郁闷，一直6~9，大部分是8个，0401难也是9个，简单的也没少于过5个，有什么办法突破么？

Esther.LiUID: 191003

楼上的姐姐，你确定答案正确么？说不定是答案的问题呢  ：）

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恩，你不是在问我吧

abjureUID: 169591

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-5 12:18
听说0308和0401是最难的两套了，今天上午做了一下0401，听力9，语法0，阅读饿了没做。。。感觉阅读的单词明显难了很多  ：（
据说0308难得前无古人后无来者，请问还有没有必要做啊？ 呵呵

是的那次的确很难，我记得那是我同学考过那次，考完以后极其郁闷，他还是学了GRE的。呜呜，我那次真题除非我非常有空才会考虑去做，不过现在这情形是不太可能拉。:L

[ Last edited by abjure on 2005-5-5 at 16:07 ]

TaylorUID: 147672

感觉都听懂了啊，基本每个词都听得差不多，但还是错这么多
唉怎么回事呢，大家帮下忙～

abjureUID: 169591

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-4 17:23
Basalt, (which) composes (most) of the ocean (floor) , is a dark-grey rock (rich) in iron and magnesium than most surface rocks.
为什么是D呢？

现在做题最大的敌人就是马虎和走神。听力本来都听得懂 ...

rich -->richer
后面有than

treesUID: 82785

Originally posted by abjure at 2005-5-4 20:50
我想问一下，什么时候开始模考比较合适。模考要注意什么以及最后总结冲刺的，有没有什么建议和要注意的地方。（这个问题比较大。呵呵）

模考一般从现在就该开始了。2天1套比较合适
头考倒数第2天，也就是12号，串一下语法点（当然要现在先每天逐渐总结好）

13号的时候巩固自己的作文摸版和习惯

不管怎么摸考，每天阅读至少2篇，保证状态，而且要是早起的时候

treesUID: 82785

Originally posted by Esther.Li at 2005-5-5 12:18
听说0308和0401是最难的两套了，今天上午做了一下0401，听力9，语法0，阅读饿了没做。。。感觉阅读的单词明显难了很多  ：（
据说0308难得前无古人后无来者，请问还有没有必要做啊？ 呵呵

要做就现在做，下周千万别做了。
其实就算难的前无古人，最后成绩出来的时候也会发现，比例还是差不多。ETS是有调整分小技巧在里边的。
所以题难还是简单，考试时候都不用害怕

treesUID: 82785

不过发现了两个问题：
1。摘抄的好东西不能熟练的用起来，也就是说没有很好的消化。
     求对策：我现在应该不限时30分钟去消化吸收我借鉴来的好东西、仔细写几篇水平高一些的作文呢，还是继续以前那样的限时练习提高比较快？（目前为止已经写了13篇，有一些感觉了：）
前者，借鉴好东西写两篇实验一下。不习惯就放弃还来得及。如果习惯就更上一层楼

2。书前部的范文还有些逻辑性，可是越往后边越像散文，有点摸不着头脑，不知道ETS究竟喜欢什么样的呢？我是应该继续追求逻辑性还是模仿范文那种有点散文味道的文章？
我跟一个教TOEFL的朋友交流过这个问题。还是不要太散文，因为考官喜欢的风格不太一致，起码正规的文章是不会被倒扣的。而且散文容易写成中国式思维，咱们运用语言也没有那么熟练。逻辑不用特复杂，但要清晰，论据紧密联系论点，分论点不脱离主观点就可以了。

另，那个确实不是给你改的文章，不好意思一下。我又看了下，没啥问题。我和bloodcherry姐姐都认为你的文字运用还是很老到的，应该会是外国人喜欢的那种。所以不用特担心：）

treesUID: 82785

交今天的功课了。
Topic 9 Some people prefer to live in a small town others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answers.
观点：大城市好。
提纲：：工作机会多。
       教育机会多。
       娱乐设施多。

With the rapid development of China economic, numerous big cities are filled with various and attractive chances to all young people so that youth will pick up a big city to live and work. In my opinion, Living in a big city is better than living a small town.

Firstly, big cities usually become basements of headquarters of world famous multinationals, so there is abound with job chances to people. I am a young person and hope to have enough growing room. Actually, the well-known fact is that those world famous multinationals will provide all-around career’s developing plan and well-being profit for employees. Furthermore, plenty of excellent people who work in those multinationals will become your good teacher teachers
.  If I reside in a big city, I will easily get information about these jobs and apply for these jobs them. On the contrary, live in a town not only spent a great deal of time in transporting between company 单数名次不能裸体 and home, but also easily miss some significant job information. 这里应该把not only but also两部分的内容换个位置,跟上文的连接更好

Secondly, higher education would be offered in big cities, especially including various career and skills training. As to me, I support the view that people should persistent learn different available knowledge in their lives. As a common sense, Education not only brings very much knowledge to us, but also is a part of our life. If so, good education will make our life more rich and colorful than before.

Thirdly, undoubtedly, 这两个词最好别这么连着用，不用thirdly就可以了 most of the entertainment places lie in big cities rather than small town. Such as KTV, BAR, CLUB and so on. The places both provide a place where people relax themselves and offer a chance that people improve the relationship among people. Of course, Parks usually are away from metropolis. However, it is impossible to go parks frequently, so I am inclined to living a big city.这里很好，改正了以前的问题，注意了和chance的呼应

In short, Job, education and entertainment chances are the three basic but remarkable reasons of my choice.  Thus, I choose to 这里就显得choose to和choice离得太近了,可以改用prefer to好些.不过最好用动名词开头,写个类似大城市生活更适合我 inhabit in a big city instead of living in a small town.

总体评价:比上一篇文章写的进步很多!逻辑不错.注意把词写到位,如最后结尾一定要写上chances. 确实向你所说,能看出你专门注意了各种句型,但是还是比较像中国学生最爱写的八股文,套用固定句型.我想这个问题短期是很难改的.所以还是在用词上再注意一些吧,比如chance可以用opportunity代替.important可以用meaningful, significant等等.
关于句型,不用第一人称开头就会看起来更灵活一点,尝试一下不定式和分词开头,以及被动句.全篇有1,2句就足可以调节了.还有反问

Esther.LiUID: 191003

Originally posted by trees at 2005-5-5 23:15
不过发现了两个问题：
1。摘抄的好东西不能熟练的用起来，也就是说没有很好的消化。
     求对策：我现在应该不限时30分钟去消化吸收我借鉴来的好东西、仔细写几篇水平高一些的作文呢，还是继续以前那样的限时练 ...

太感谢了！！
太高兴了！！！:D 哈哈，要睡不着了！！trees姐这么晚还在线，辛苦了！
再帮看看前边这道题：
The midge ___to any of several species of small flies, regers to a mosquito-like insect with slender wings and body, long legs ,and antennae.
A. which a term applied  B.a term applied
答案是B，我选的A，这两个在这里难道不一样么？

嘿嘿，明天再战0308！:cool: